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-\v 4 Dodai, from the clan of Ahohi, was the commander of the group that served during the following.
+\v 4 Dodai, from the clan of Ahoah, was the commander of the group that served during the following month. Mikloth led this group.
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 \v 5 Benaiah, son of Jehoiada the high priest, was the commander of the group that served during the following month.
 \v 6 He was the one who was a mighty warrior among David's thirty greatest soldiers, and he was their leader. His son Ammizabad was his assistant.
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 \v 16 This is a list of the administrators of the twelve tribes of Israel:
-\q Eliezer, son of Zicri, was the administrator of the tribe of Reuben.
-\q Shephatiah, son of Maakah, was the administrator of the tribe of Simeon.
+\q Eliezer son of Zikri was the administrator of the tribe of Reuben.
+\q Shephatiah son of Maakah was the administrator of the tribe of Simeon.
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-\v 17 Hashabiah, theson of Kemuel, was the administrator of the tribe of Levi.
+\v 17 Hashabiah son of Kemuel was the administrator of the tribe of Levi.
 \q Zadok was the administrator of the tribe of Aaron.
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 \v 18 Elihu, David's older brother, was the administrator of the tribe of Judah.
-\q Omri, son of Michael, was the administrator of the tribe of Issachar.
+\q Omri son of Michael was the administrator of the tribe of Issachar.
 
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-\v 19 Ishmaiah, son of Obadiah, was the administrator of the tribe of Zebulun.
-\q Jerimoth, son of Azriel, was the administrator of the tribe of Naphtali.
+\v 19 Ishmaiah son of Obadiah was the administrator of the tribe of Zebulun.
+\q Jerimoth son of Azriel was the administrator of the tribe of Naphtali.
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-\v 20 Hoshea, son of Azaziah, was the administrator of the tribe of Ephraim.
-\q Joel, son of Pedaiah, was the administrator of the tribe of the western half of the tribe of Manasseh.
+\v 20 Hoshea son of Azaziah was the administrator of the tribe of Ephraim.
+\q Joel son of Pedaiah was the administrator of the tribe of the western half of the tribe of Manasseh.
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-\v 21 Iddo, son of Zechariah, was the administrator of the eastern half of the tribe of Manasseh, in the region of Gilead.
-\q Jaasiel, son of Abner, was the administrator of the tribe of Benjamin.
+\v 21 Iddo son of Zechariah was the administrator of the eastern half of the tribe of Manasseh, in the region of Gilead.
+\q Jaasiel son of Abner was the administrator of the tribe of Benjamin.
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-\v 22 Azarel, son of Jeroham, was the administrator of the tribe of Dan.
+\v 22 Azarel son of Jeroham was the administrator of the tribe of Dan.
 
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-\v 23 David did not tell Joab to count the men who were less then twenty years old, because Yahweh had promised many years previously that there would be as many people in Israel as there are stars in the sky.
+\v 23 David did not tell Joab to count the men who were less than twenty years old, because Yahweh had promised many years previously that there would be as many people in Israel as there are stars in the sky.
 \v 24 Joab and his helpers started to count the men of Israel, but they did not finish counting them because Joab knew that Yahweh was angry about their being counted. Yahweh punished the people of Israel because of this counting, and as a result the total number of Israelite men able to serve in the army was not written on the scroll about King David's rule.
 
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-\v 25 Azmaveth, son of Adiel, was in charge of the king's storehouses.
-\li Jonathan, son of Uzziah, was in charge of the storehouses in other towns and villages in Israel, and also in charge of the watchtowers.
+\v 25 Azmaveth son of Adiel was in charge of the king's storehouses.
+\li Jonathan son of Uzziah was in charge of the storehouses in other towns and villages in Israel and also in charge of the watchtowers.
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 \v 26 Ezri son of Kelub was in charge of the workers who farmed the land that belonged to the king.
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 \v 32 David's uncle Jonathan was a wise counselor for him.
-\li Jehiel, son of Hacmoni, taught the king's sons.
+\li Jehiel, son of Hakmoni, taught the king's sons.
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 \v 33 Ahithophel was the king's official counselor.
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