From 1a0600cc1bf25b831d9b2b28509436cb2cd63e89 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Wed, 19 Apr 2017 10:07:06 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] From readers and John Hutchings --- 13-1CH/16.usfm | 4 ++-- 20-PRO/13.usfm | 13 ++++++------- 2 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) diff --git a/13-1CH/16.usfm b/13-1CH/16.usfm index cec42394..f9d55282 100644 --- a/13-1CH/16.usfm +++ b/13-1CH/16.usfm @@ -29,8 +29,8 @@ \v 10 Be glad that you belong to him. \q2 Those who want to know Yahweh better should rejoice. \q1 -\v 11 Trust in Yahweh and in his power; -\q2 continually seek to get help from him. +\v 11 Ask Yahweh to help you and give you his strength, +\q2 and always seek to be with him! \s5 \q1 diff --git a/20-PRO/13.usfm b/20-PRO/13.usfm index 21289a6d..7aa53eb9 100644 --- a/20-PRO/13.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/13.usfm @@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ \s5 \q1 \v 11 People who think too much of themselves will spend all their money; -\q2 the one who makes his money by working with his hands, will find ways to make his money grow. +\q2 the one who makes his money by working with his hands will find ways to make his money grow. \q1 \v 12 When hope for the future is postponed, it makes you sick—you feel you will never receive what you long for, \q2 but if you receive what you desire, that will be like a tree that gives life. @@ -53,13 +53,13 @@ \v 13 Those who despise good advice bring the punishment for disobeying upon themselves; \q2 the one who pays attention to the instruction will receive honor. \q1 -\v 14 The lesson taught by the wise are like a fountain that gives life to all who drink from it, +\v 14 The lesson taught by the wise is like a fountain that gives life to all who drink from it, \q2 and they inform you about all the deadly dangers around you. \s5 \q1 -\v 15 Having a mind that understands right and wrong, brings you respect, -\q2 but the one who twists good gifts for bad purposes, \q2 he never reaches his destination. +\v 15 Having a mind that understands right and wrong brings you respect, +\q2 but the one who twists good gifts for bad purposes—he never reaches his destination. \q1 \v 16 Those who have good sense always take action from what they know is true; \q2 a foolish person proves his decisions are folly, and everyone sees it. @@ -96,9 +96,8 @@ \q2 but the poor are victims of injustice more than the rich, \q2 and the crop is not planted. \q1 -\v 24 A parent who does not train his child in how he should live, -\q2 does not show him any love, -\q2 but the one who is careful to train the child in how he should live, shows his great love. +\v 24 A parent who does not train his child in how he should live does not show him any love, +\q2 but the one who is careful to train the child in how he should live shows his great love. \s5 \q1