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 ## Facts: ##
 
-The Salt Sea (also called the Dead Sea) was located between southern Israel on the west and Moab on the east.
+The Salt Sea (also called the Dead Sea) was located between southern Israel on its west and Moab on its east.
 
 * The Jordan River flows south into the Salt Sea.
-* Because it is smaller than most seas, this could be called "Salt Lake."
-* This sea has a high concentration of minerals (or "salts") which means that nothing can live in its waters. That is where the name "Dead Sea" came from.
-* In the Old Testament, this sea is also called the "Sea of Arabah" and the "Sea of Negev" because of its locations near the regions of Arabah and Negev.
+* Because it is smaller than most seas, it could be called "Salt Lake."
+* This sea has such a high concentration of minerals (or "salts") that nothing can live in its waters. Its lack of plants and animals is the cause of the name "Dead Sea.”
+* In the Old Testament, this sea is also called the "Sea of Arabah" and the "Sea of Negev" because of its location near the regions of Arabah and Negev.
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