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the living ... the dead

This refers to people who are alive and people who are dead. AT: "who are alive ... those who are dead" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-nominaladj)

their memory is forgotten

This can be stated in active form. AT: "people will forget them" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive)