## He made darkness ... him ##

The words “He” and "him" continue to refer to Yahweh.

## He made darkness a tent ##

AT: "He made darkness a covering" or AT: "He made darkness a hiding place" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])

## heavy rain clouds ##

AT: "clouds heavy with rain" or AT: "thick, dark rain clouds"

## From the lightning before him, hailstones and coals of fire fell ##

AT: "From the brightness before him came hail and coals of fire through his thick clouds."

## hail ##

AT: "stones of ice"