## for whoever obeys  ##

"for anyone who obeys"

## yet stumbles in … he has become ##

As stumbling is falling down while one is trying to walk, so is disobeying one point of the law is being guilty of breaking the whole law. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])

## Do not commit… ##

to "commit" is to do the action.

## …If you…But you…you have… ##

Though James was writing to many Jewish believers, in this case he wrote as if he was writing to each person individually. AT: "each one of you" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]])