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@@ -2,11 +2,11 @@
 
 Here the word "us" refers to Paul and Timothy but not the Colossians. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-exclusive]])
 
-# God would open a door
+# God would open a door to us
 
-Opening a door for someone is a metaphor for giving that person the opportunity to do something. Alternate translation: "God would provide opportunities" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
+Opening a door for someone is a metaphor for giving that person the opportunity to do something. Alternate translation: "God would provide opportunities for us" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
 
-# open a door for the word
+# open a door to us for the word
 
 "make an opportunity for us to preach his message"
 
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ Opening a door for someone is a metaphor for giving that person the opportunity
 
 This refers to the gospel of Jesus Christ, which was not understood before Christ came.
 
-# Because of this, I am chained up
+# for which also I have been in chains
 
-Here "chained" is a metaphor for being in prison, though he probably also was physically attached to a chain. Alternate translation: "It is for proclaiming the message of Jesus Christ that I am now in prison" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
+Here "in chains" is a metonym for being in prison, though Paul probably also was physically attached to a chain. Paul was in chains because he told people about the mystery of Christ. Alternate translation: "It is for proclaiming the message of Jesus Christ that I am now in prison" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])