diff --git a/zec/01/14.md b/zec/01/14.md
index 4dacf9beec..73a388a086 100644
--- a/zec/01/14.md
+++ b/zec/01/14.md
@@ -1,4 +1,12 @@
-# I have been jealous for Jerusalem
+# I have been jealous for Jerusalem and for Zion with great jealousy
 
-Here the word "jealous" refers to Yahweh's strong desire to protect his people.
+"I have been extremely jealous for Jerusalem and for Zion." Yahweh does not want anyone to harm Jerusalem or try to have Jerusalem love anything more than Yahweh.
+
+# jealous
+
+Here this word refers to Yahweh's strong desire to protect his people.
+
+# Jerusalem ... Zion
+
+These are a metonyms for the people who live in Jerusalem and Zion. Alternate translation: "the people of Jerusalem ... the people of Zion" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
 
diff --git a/zec/08/02.md b/zec/08/02.md
index 426e025ce2..d303855be9 100644
--- a/zec/08/02.md
+++ b/zec/08/02.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-# I am passionate for Zion
+# I am jealous for Zion with great jealousy
 
-"I have a strong desire to protect Zion"
+"I am extremely jealous for Zion." Yahweh does not want anyone to harm Zion or try to have Zion love anything more than Yahweh.
 
 # for Zion
 
@@ -8,5 +8,5 @@ Here "Zion" represents the people of Zion. Alternate translation: "for the peopl
 
 # with great anger
 
-The implied information is that this anger is against the enemies of Zion. Alternate translation: "with great anger against her enemies" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]])
+You may need to make explicit that this anger is against the enemies of Zion. Alternate translation: "with great anger against her enemies" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]])