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rev/16/08.md

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 The word "bowl" refers to what is in it. See how you translated this in [Revelation 16:2](../16/02.md). Alternate translation: "poured out the wine from his bowl" or "poured out God's wrath from his bowl" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 
-# it was given permission to scorch the people
+# on the sun, and it was given permission to scorch the people
 
-John speaks about the sun as if it were a person. This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "and caused the sun to severely burn the people" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-personification]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
+John speaks about the sun as if it were a person. This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "on the sun and caused it to severely burn the people" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-personification]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
 

rev/16/13.md

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 # dragon
 
-This was a large, fierce reptile, like a lizard. For Jewish people, it was a symbol of evil and chaos. The dragon is also identified in verse 9 as "the devil or Satan." See how you translated this in [Revelation 12:3](../12/03.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-symlanguage]])
+This was a large, fierce reptile, like a lizard. For Jewish people, it was a symbol of evil and chaos. The dragon is also identified in 12:9 as "the devil or Satan." See how you translated this in [Revelation 12:3](../12/03.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-symlanguage]])
 

rev/16/15.md

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ Living the right way is spoken of as keeping one's clothes on. Alternate transla
 
 # keeping his garments on
 
-Some versions translate, "keeping his garments with him."
+Some versions translate this as, "keeping his garments with him."
 
 # they see his shameful condition
 

rev/17/06.md

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-# General Information:
-
-The angel begins to explain to John the meaning of the prostitute and the red beast. The angel explains these things through verse 18.
-
 # was drunk with the blood ... and with the blood
 
 "was drunk because she had drunk the blood ... and had drunk the blood"

rev/17/07.md

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+# General Information:
+
+The angel begins to explain to John the meaning of the prostitute and the red beast. The angel explains these things through verse 18.
+
 # Why are you astonished?
 
 The angel used this question to gently scold John. Alternate translation: "You should not be astonished!" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion]])

rev/17/08.md

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 # the bottomless pit
 
-This is an extremely deep narrow hole. Possible meanings are 1) the pit has no bottom; it continues to go down further forever or 2) the pit is so deep that it is as if it had no bottom. See how you translated this in [Revelation 9:1](../09/01.md).
+This is an extremely deep, narrow hole. Possible meanings are 1) the pit has no bottom; it continues to go down further forever or 2) the pit is so deep that it is as if it had no bottom. See how you translated this in [Revelation 9:1](../09/01.md).
 
 # Then it will go on to destruction
 

rev/18/01.md

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-# General Information:
-
-The pronouns "she" and "her" refer to the city of Babylon, which is spoken of as if it were a prostitute. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-personification]])
-
 # Connecting Statement:
 
-Another angel comes down from heaven and speaks. This is a different angel than the one in the previous chapter, who spoke about the prostitute and the beast.
+Another angel comes down from heaven and speaks. This is not the angel mentioned in the previous chapter who spoke about the prostitute and the beast.
 

rev/18/02.md

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 The angel speaks of Babylon having been destroyed as if it had fallen. See how you translated this in [Revelation 14:8](../14/08.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 
+# She has become
+
+The pronoun "she" refers to the city of Babylon, which is spoken of as if it were a prostitute. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-personification]])
+
 # detestable bird
 
 "disgusting bird" or "repulsive bird"

rev/18/04.md

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 The word "voice" refers to the speaker, which is probably either Jesus or the Father. Alternate translation: "someone else" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 
+# from her
+
+The pronoun "her" refers to the city of Babylon, which is spoken of as if it were a prostitute. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-personification]])
+

rev/18/intro.md

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 ##### Metaphors #####
 
-Prophecy frequently uses metaphors. This chapter has a slightly different apocalyptic style than the Book of Revelation overall. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
+Prophecy frequently uses metaphors. This chapter has an apocalyptic style that is slightly different from that of the rest of the Book of Revelation. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 
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