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 # the anger of Yahweh and his jealousy will smolder
 
-Just as a fire can grow in intensity, so can God's anger and Jealousy grow in intensity. Alternate translation: "Yahweh's jealous anger will grow like a fire" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
+Just as a fire can grow in intensity, so can God's anger and jealousy grow in intensity. Alternate translation: "Yahweh's jealous anger will grow like a fire" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
 
 # the anger of Yahweh and his jealousy
 
@@ -10,11 +10,11 @@ Here the word "jealousy" describes "the anger of Yahweh." Alternate translation:
 
 This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "that I have written" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]])
 
-# the curses that are written in this book will come on him
+# all the curses that are written in this book will come on him
 
-Moses describes the curses as a person who would attack them by surprise. See how you translated these words in [Deuteronomy 28:15](../28/15.md). Alternate translation: "Yahweh will curse him with the curses written in this book in ways that will completely surprise him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-personification]])
+Moses describes the curses as a person who would attack them by surprise. See how you translated these words in [Deuteronomy 28:15](../28/15.md). Alternate translation: "Yahweh will curse him with all the curses written in this book in ways that will completely surprise him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-personification]])
 
 # Yahweh will blot out his name from under heaven
 
-This means God will completely destroy the person and his family. In the future people will not remember him. A similar phrase appears in [Deuteronomy 7:24](../07/24.md).
+This means that God will completely destroy the person and his family. In the future people will not remember him. A similar phrase appears in [Deuteronomy 7:24](../07/24.md).