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-# let us eat and drink, for tomorrow we will die
+# Let us eat and drink, for tomorrow we will die
 
-Here "eat and drink" represents having a party and over indulging in food and wine. Alternate translation: "we may as well have fun now by eating and drinking all we want, for we will die soon" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
+Here "eat and drink" represents having a party and eating a lot of food and drinking a lot of wine. It can be stated clearly that this is what the people were saying. Alternate translation: "You say, 'Let us feast and drink all we want, for we will die soon.'" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]])