diff --git a/1ti/03/16.md b/1ti/03/16.md
index 3e81725b5a..928b899e2c 100644
--- a/1ti/03/16.md
+++ b/1ti/03/16.md
@@ -6,13 +6,13 @@
 
 "that the truth that God has revealed is great"
 
-# He appeared ... up in glory
+# He was revealed ... up in glory
 
 This is most likely a song or poem that Paul is quoting. If your language has a way of indicating that this is poetry you could use it here. If not, you could translate this as regular prose rather than poetry. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-poetry]])
 
-# He appeared
+# He was revealed
 
-Possible meanings are 1) "God appeared" or 2) "Christ appeared." You could translate it as "Christ, who is God, appeared."
+Some versions read, "God was revealed" or "God appeared." If Paul is quoting a song or poem, the word "he" refers to Jesus Christ. If he is not quoting 
 
 # in the flesh
 
diff --git a/1ti/04/10.md b/1ti/04/10.md
index 06a2f63b20..b190e0cbf6 100644
--- a/1ti/04/10.md
+++ b/1ti/04/10.md
@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
 
 "This is the reason"
 
-# struggle and work very hard
+# labor and struggle
 
-The words "struggle" and "work very hard" mean basically the same thing. Paul uses them together to emphasize the intensity with which they serve God. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-doublet]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
+The word "labor" here refers to working very hard, and "struggle" is a metaphor for dealing with difficulties and dangers. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 
 
 # For we hope in the living God ... believers
diff --git a/1ti/06/21.md b/1ti/06/21.md
index 8732d88324..759633b22a 100644
--- a/1ti/06/21.md
+++ b/1ti/06/21.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-# they have missed the faith
+# they have gone astray from the faith
 
-Paul speaks of faith in Christ as if it were a target at which to aim. Alternate translation: "they have not understood or believed the true faith" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
+Paul speaks of those who stop obeying Christ as if they were children or animals who have gone away from where they belong and are safe. Alternate translation: "they have stopped believing the truth" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 
 # May grace be with you