en_tn/lev/04/31.md

# He will cut away

Here "He" refers to the person offering the sacrifice.

# just as the fat is cut away

This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "just as a person cuts away the fat" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])

# will burn it

"will burn the fat"

# to produce a sweet aroma for Yahweh

Yahweh being pleased with the sincere worshiper who offered the sacrifice is spoken of as if God were pleased with the aroma of the burning sacrifice. See how you translated this in [Leviticus 1:9](../01/09.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])

# The priest will make atonement for the man

The abstract noun "atonement" can be stated as a verb. Alternate translation: "The priest will atone for the man's sins" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-abstractnouns]])

# he will be forgiven

This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "Yahweh will forgive the man's sins" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
initial v6 rc conversion 2017-06-21 20:50:04 +00:00			`# He will cut away`
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initial v6 rc conversion 2017-06-21 20:50:04 +00:00			`Here "He" refers to the person offering the sacrifice.`
Initial commit of translationNotes 2016-02-23 02:42:46 +00:00
initial v6 rc conversion 2017-06-21 20:50:04 +00:00			`# just as the fat is cut away`
Initial commit of translationNotes 2016-02-23 02:42:46 +00:00
Replace all AT: with Alternate translation: 2018-02-10 00:34:10 +00:00			`This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "just as a person cuts away the fat" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])`
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initial v6 rc conversion 2017-06-21 20:50:04 +00:00			`# will burn it`
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initial v6 rc conversion 2017-06-21 20:50:04 +00:00			`"will burn the fat"`

			`# to produce a sweet aroma for Yahweh`

Remainder of books formated per verse 2017-12-12 06:13:24 +00:00			`Yahweh being pleased with the sincere worshiper who offered the sacrifice is spoken of as if God were pleased with the aroma of the burning sacrifice. See how you translated this in [Leviticus 1:9](../01/09.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])`
initial v6 rc conversion 2017-06-21 20:50:04 +00:00
			`# The priest will make atonement for the man`

Replace all AT: with Alternate translation: 2018-02-10 00:34:10 +00:00			`The abstract noun "atonement" can be stated as a verb. Alternate translation: "The priest will atone for the man's sins" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-abstractnouns]])`
initial v6 rc conversion 2017-06-21 20:50:04 +00:00
			`# he will be forgiven`

Replace all AT: with Alternate translation: 2018-02-10 00:34:10 +00:00			`This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "Yahweh will forgive the man's sins" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])`
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