diff --git a/checking/re-refine-revise/01.md b/checking/re-refine-revise/01.md index da652de..483a111 100644 --- a/checking/re-refine-revise/01.md +++ b/checking/re-refine-revise/01.md @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ In the refinement process, the community and church leadership use the rubric cr ### Revision -Revision is the process of improving a translation after a translation project has been completed. Revision provides an opportunity for the church to improve a translation whenever they determine there is sufficient need for a revision. There are a variety of needs for a translation to be revised; this is a natural part of ongoing Church-owned Bible Translation. +Revision is the process of improving a translation after a translation project has been completed. Revision provides an opportunity for the church to improve a translation whenever they determine there is sufficient need for a revision. There are a variety of needs for a translation to be revised; this is a natural part of ongoing church-owned Bible translation. One marked difference between refinement and revision is that refinement always uses the rubric established by the translation team, while a revision often establishes a new rubric for assessing the quality of their work. This new rubric can be adapted from the original rubric. However if the language community determines that the standards established in the original rubric were not met, they may do a revision that meets those standards.