From d7db4b23ca8fa3949d566899e7711bec2d5e9a5f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: chrisjarka Date: Fri, 19 Oct 2018 19:48:29 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Update 'translate/writing-background/01.md' --- translate/writing-background/01.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/translate/writing-background/01.md b/translate/writing-background/01.md index 4f586d0..745fe1f 100644 --- a/translate/writing-background/01.md +++ b/translate/writing-background/01.md @@ -63,6 +63,6 @@ To keep translations clear and natural you will need to study how people tell st 1. Reorder the information so that earlier events are mentioned first. (This is not always possible when the background information is very long.) * **Hagar gave birth to Abram's son, and Abram named his son, whom Hagar bore, Ishmael. Abram was eighty-six years old when Hagar bore Ishmael to Abram.** (Genesis 16:16 ULB) * When Abram was eighty-six years old, Hagar gave birth to his son, and Abram named his son Ishmael. - * **John also rebuked Herod the tetrarch for marrying his brother's wife, Herodias, and for all the other evil things that Herod had done. But then Herod did another very evil thing. He had John locked up in prison.** (Luke 3:18-20) - The translation below reorders John's rebuke and Herod's actions. + * **John also rebuked Herod the tetrarch for marrying his brother's wife, Herodias, and for all the other evil things that Herod had done. But then Herod did another very evil thing. He had John locked up in prison.** (Luke 3:18-20) The translation below reorders John's rebuke and Herod's actions. * Now Herod the tetrarch married his brother's wife, Herodias, and he did many other evil things, so John rebuked him. But then Herod did another very evil thing. He had John locked up in prison.