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### Description
In common English, "possession" refers to having something, or to something that a person has. In English that grammatical relationship is shown with of, or an apostrophe and the letter s, or a possessive pronoun.
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### Examples from the Bible
+#### Possession with objects or people
+
##### Ownership
-In the example below, the son owned the money.
>... the younger son ... wasted his money with wildly extravagant living. (Luke 15:13)
+In the example above, the son owned the money.
+
##### Social relationship
-In the example below, the disciples were people who learned from John.
>Then the disciples of John came to him. (Matthew 9:14 ULB)
+In the example above, the disciples were people who learned from John.
+
##### Material
-In the example below, the material used for making the crowns was gold.
-
>On their heads were something like crowns of gold (Revelation 9:7)
+In the example above, the crowns were made of gold. Gold was the material used for making the crowns.
+
##### Contents
-In the example below, the cup has water in it.
-
>Whoever gives you a cup of water to drink ... will not lose his reward. (Mark 9:41 ULB)
+In the example above, the cup has water in it.
+
##### Part of a whole
-In the example below, the door was a part of the palace.
-
>But Uriah slept at the door of the king's palace (2 Samuel 11:9 ULB)
+In the example above, the door was a part of the palace.
+
##### Part of a group
-In the example below, "us" refers to the whole group and "each one" refers to the individual members.
-
>To each one of us has been given a gift (Ephesians 4:7 ULB)
-#### Events and Possession
+In the example above, "us" refers to the whole group, and "each one" refers to the individual members.
+
+#### Possession with Events
Sometimes one or both of the nouns is an abstract noun that refers to an event or action. In the examples below, the abstract nouns are in **bold** print. These are just some of the relationships that are possible between two nouns when one of them refers to an event.
-**Subject** - Sometimes the word after "of" tells who would do the action named by the first noun. In the example below, John baptized people.
+**Subject** - Sometimes the word after "of" tells who would do the action named by the first noun.
+
>The **baptism** of John, was it from heaven or from men? Answer me." (Mark 11:30)
-In the example below, Christ loves us.
+In the example above, John baptized people.
+
>Who will separate us from the **love** of Christ? (Romans 3:35)
-**Object** - Sometimes the word after "of" tells who or what something would happen to. In the example below, people love money.
+In the example below, Christ loves us.
+
+**Object** - Sometimes the word after "of" tells who or what something would happen to.
+
>For the **love** of money is a root of all kinds of evil. (1 Timothy 6:10 ULB)
-**Instrument** - Sometimes the word after "of" tells how something would happen. In the example below, God would punish people by sending enemies to attack them with swords.
+In the example above, people love money.
+
+**Instrument** - Sometimes the word after "of" tells the instrument that would be used to do something.
+
>then be afraid of the sword, because wrath brings the **punishment** of the sword (Job 19:29 ULB)
-**Representation** - In the example below, John was baptizing people who were repenting of their sins. They were being baptized to show that they were repenting. Their baptism represented their repentance.
+In the example above, God would punish people by sending enemies to attack them with swords.
+
+**Representation** - Sometimes the word after "of" tells what the idea before "of" represents.
+
>As John came, he was baptizing in the wilderness and was preaching a **baptism** of repentance for the forgiveness of sins. (Mark 1:4 ULB)
+In the example above, John was teaching people that they should be baptised to show that they were repenting of their sins. Their baptism represented their repentance.
+
### Strategies for learning what the relationship is between the two nouns
1. Read the surrounding verses to see if they help you to understand the relationship between the two nouns.
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* You will only observe and see how Yahweh **punishes** the wicked.
* **... you will receive the gift of the Holy Spirit.** (Acts 2:38 ULB)
* ... you will receive the Holy Spirit, whom God will **give** to you.
-