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 # he came near death
 
-Paul here speaks of death as if it were a place that one could go to. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
+"he almost died." Paul speaks of dying as if death were a place that people could go to. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])