From e379573ccb81eee0caff998fb4ee1d66cb701b9d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Tue, 23 Oct 2018 16:29:48 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] From work for interleaved PDF --- mrk/05/36.md | 4 ++++ mrk/06/12.md | 4 ++-- mrk/06/21.md | 4 ++++ 3 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/mrk/05/36.md b/mrk/05/36.md index d757e29dc1..ea2ef36a39 100644 --- a/mrk/05/36.md +++ b/mrk/05/36.md @@ -1,3 +1,7 @@ +# the message that was spoken + +This can be stated as in active form. Alternate translation: "the message that they told Jairus" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) + # Just believe If necessary, you can state what Jesus is commanding Jairus to believe. Alternate translation: "Just believe I can make you daughter live" diff --git a/mrk/06/12.md b/mrk/06/12.md index e11b324969..2ab67c0a70 100644 --- a/mrk/06/12.md +++ b/mrk/06/12.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ The word "They" refers to the twelve and does not include Jesus. Also, it may be helpful to state that they went out to various towns. Alternate translation: "They went out to various towns" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) -# turn away from their sins +# repent -Here "turn away from" is a metaphor that means to stop doing something. Alternate translation: "stop sinning" or "repent of their sins" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) +"stop sinning" diff --git a/mrk/06/21.md b/mrk/06/21.md index dfb203a94d..1dcae80988 100644 --- a/mrk/06/21.md +++ b/mrk/06/21.md @@ -2,6 +2,10 @@ The author continues to give background information about Herod and the beheading of John the Baptist. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-background]]) +# a convenient day + +This is a general term for "a convenient time." + # he made a dinner for his officials ... of Galilee Here the word "he" refers to Herod and is a metonym for his servant whom he would have commanded to prepare a meal. Alternate translation: "he had a dinner made for his officials ... of Galilee" or "he invited his officials ... of Galilee to eat and celebrate with him"