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@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 This returns to the account of Jesus bringing the daughter of the Jewish official back to life.
 
-# the flute players and the crowd in tumult
+# the flute players and the crowd making a commotion
 
 This was a common way to mourn for someone who has died.
 
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ This was a common way to mourn for someone who has died.
 
 "people who play flutes"
 
-# crowd in tumult
+# and the crowd making a commotion
 
-The phrase "in tumult" applies only to "the crowds" and does not include "the flute players."
+The phrase "making a commotion" applies only to "the crowd" and does not include the flute players. Alternation translation: "and the crowd making a lot of noise" or "and the noisy crowd"