diff --git a/1th/04/06.md b/1th/04/06.md
index 7bf46e51c3..a707f27791 100644
--- a/1th/04/06.md
+++ b/1th/04/06.md
@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
 
 Here "man" refers to a man or a woman. "no one" or "no person" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-gendernotations]])
 
-# transgress and wrong
+# transgress and wrong his brother
 
-This is a doublet stating the same idea in two ways to reinforce the concept. Alternate translation: "do wrong things" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-doublet]])
+Possible meanings: 1) The words "transgress" and "wrong" are a doublet that emphasizes the idea of harming the brother.  Alternate translation: "do very wrong things to his brother" 2) The word "transgress" refers to sinning against God, and "wrong his brother" refers to harming the brother. Alternate translation: "do what God had forbidden and wrong his brother" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-doublet]])
 
 # the Lord is an avenger
 
diff --git a/1th/04/11.md b/1th/04/11.md
index e8e6673543..cc12cc0abd 100644
--- a/1th/04/11.md
+++ b/1th/04/11.md
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Paul uses the word "quietly" as a metaphor to describe living at peace in one's
 
 # take care of your own responsibilities
 
-"do your own work" or "take care of the things that your are responsible to do." This may also imply that we should not gossip and interfere in other people's concerns. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
+"do your own work" or "take care of the things that you are responsible for" or "do the things that you are responsible to do." This may also imply that we should not gossip and interfere in other people's concerns. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
 
 # work with your hands
 
diff --git a/1th/04/12.md b/1th/04/12.md
index c9a29b53a9..c81d5cec5c 100644
--- a/1th/04/12.md
+++ b/1th/04/12.md
@@ -8,5 +8,5 @@ in a way that shows respect to others and earns their respect
 
 # before outsiders
 
-Paul speaks of those who do not believer in Christ as if they are outside of a place away from the believers. Alternate translation: "in the sight of those who do not believe in Christ" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
+Paul speaks of those who do not believe in Christ as if they are outside, in a place away from the believers. Alternate translation: "in the sight of those who do not believe in Christ" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 
diff --git a/1th/04/13.md b/1th/04/13.md
index b861af8e89..f233d17c15 100644
--- a/1th/04/13.md
+++ b/1th/04/13.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # General Information:
 
-Paul talks about believers who have died, who are still alive, and those who will be alive when Christ returns.
+Paul talks about believers who have died, those who are now alive, and those who will be alive when Christ returns.
 
 # We do not want you to be uninformed
 
@@ -24,5 +24,5 @@ mourn, be sad about something
 
 # like the rest who do not have hope
 
-"like people who do not confidence in the future promise." It can be stated clearly what those people do not have confidence about. Alternate translation: "like the people who are not sure that they will rise from the dead" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
+What those people do not have confidence about can be stated clearly. Alternate translation: "like people who do not have confidence in the future promise" or "like the people who are not sure that they will rise from the dead" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
 
diff --git a/1th/04/17.md b/1th/04/17.md
index 775dfe8c49..68c081e065 100644
--- a/1th/04/17.md
+++ b/1th/04/17.md
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Here "we" refers to all believers who have not died. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/tran
 
 The word "them" refers to the dead believers who were made alive again.
 
-# caught up in the clouds to meet the Lord in the air
+# be caught up in the clouds to meet the Lord in the air
 
 "meet the Lord Jesus in the sky"