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-# As water disappears from a lake ... and do not rise again
+# Connecting Statement:
 
-The fact that death cannot be reversed is compared to water that dried up and cannot return. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]])
+Job begins to use word pictures to describe how it is that "man dies; he becomes weak" (verse 10).
 
-# As water disappears ... as a river loses
-
-These two phrases are describing the same thought and are repeated to emphasize the fact that death is final. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]])
+# As water disappears from a lake ... dries up
 
+Water that has dried up from a lake or a river cannot return, and once a person dies or grows old, he cannot become young again. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]])