Notes from Aaron Fenlason

03-LEV/04.usfm

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 \v 4 He must bring the bull to the entrance of the tent of meeting before Yahweh, lay his hand on its head, and kill the bull before Yahweh.
-\v 5 The anointed priest will take some of the blood of the bull and bring it to the tent of meeting. 
+\v 5 The anointed priest will take some of the blood of the bull and take it to the tent of meeting. 
 
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 \v 6 The priest will dip his finger into the blood and sprinkle some of it seven times before Yahweh, before the curtain of the most holy place.

03-LEV/11.usfm

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-\v 20 All flying insects that walk on legs must be detested by you.
-\v 21 Yet you may eat any of the flying insects that also walk on legs if they have legs above their feet, which they use to leap on the ground.
+\v 20 All winged insects that walk on four legs are detestable to you.
+\v 21 Yet you may eat any of the flying insects that also walk on four legs if they have a jointed legs for hopping on the ground.
 \v 22 And you may also eat any kind of locust, katydid, cricket, or grasshopper.
 \v 23 But all the flying insects that have four feet must be detested by you.
 

03-LEV/14.usfm

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 \v 36 Then the priest will command that they empty the house before he goes in to see the evidence of mildew, so that nothing in the house will be made unclean. Afterward the priest must go in to see the house.
-\v 37 He must examine the mildew to see if it is in the house walls, and to see whether it appears greenish or reddish in the depressions in the walls' surface.
+\v 37 He must examine the mildew to see if it is in the house walls, and to see whether it appears greenish or reddish in the depressions in the wall's surface.
 \v 38 If the house does have mildew, then the priest will go out of the house and shut the door to the house for seven days.
 
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03-LEV/15.usfm

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-\v 16 If any man's semen goes out from him spontaneously, then he must bathe his whole body in water; he will be unclean until evening.
+\v 16 If any man has an emission of semen, then he must bathe his whole body in water; he will be unclean until evening.
 \v 17 Every garment or leather on which there is semen must be washed with water; it will be unclean until evening.
 \v 18 And if a woman and a man sleep together and there is a transfer of semen to her, they must both bathe themselves in water; they will be unclean until evening.
 

03-LEV/16.usfm

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-\v 20 When he has finished atoning for the most holy place, the tent of meeting, the altar, he must present the live goat.
+\v 20 When he has finished atoning for the most holy place, the tent of meeting, and the altar, he must present the live goat.
 \v 21 Aaron must lay both his hands on the head of the live goat and confess over him all the wickedness of the people of Israel, all their rebellion, and all their sins. Then he must put that sinfulness on the head of the goat and send the goat away in the care of a man who is ready to lead the goat into the wilderness.
 \v 22 The goat must carry on himself all the people's wickedness to a solitary place. There in the wilderness, the man must let the goat go free.
 

03-LEV/23.usfm

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 \v 1 Yahweh spoke to Moses:
-\v 2 "Speak to the people of Israel, and say to them, 'The appointed festivals for Yahweh, which you must proclaim as holy assemblies, are my regular festivals.
+\v 2 "Speak to the people of Israel, and say to them, 'These are the appointed festivals for Yahweh, which you must proclaim as holy assemblies; they are my regular festivals.
 
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 \v 3 You may work for six days, but the seventh day is a Sabbath of complete rest, a holy assembly. You must do no work because it is a Sabbath for Yahweh in all the places where you live.