review "deep darkness" with changed

18-JOB.usfm

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 \q
 \v 22 He reveals the deep things of darkness
-\q and brings deep shadows into the light.
+\q and brings utter darkness into the light.
 \q
 \v 23 He makes nations strong, and he also destroys them;
 \q He enlarges nations, and he also leads them along as prisoners.
@@ -1466,8 +1466,8 @@
 \v 15 I have sewn sackcloth on my skin;
 \q I have thrust my horn into the ground.
 \q
-\v 16 My face is red with weeping;
-\q on my eyelids is the shadow of death
+\v 16 My face is red with weeping,
+\q on my eyelids is utter darkness;
 \q
 \v 17 although there is no violence in my hands,
 \q and my prayer is pure.
@@ -2465,8 +2465,8 @@
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 \q
 \v 3 A man sets an end to darkness
-\q and searches out, to the farthest limit,
-\q the stones in obscurity and thick darkness.
+\q and searches out to the farthest limit,
+\q the stones in the blackest darkness.
 \q
 \v 4 He breaks open a shaft away from where people live,
 \q places that are forgotten by anyone's foot.
@@ -3260,7 +3260,7 @@
 \v 21 For God's eyes are upon a person's ways;
 \q he sees all his steps.
 \q
-\v 22 There is no darkness, no thick gloom
+\v 22 There is no darkness and there is no deep shadow
 \q where the doers of iniquity may hide themselves.
 \q
 \v 23 For God does not need to examine a person further;

19-PSA.usfm

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 \q
-\v 4 Even though I walk through a valley of darkest shadow,
-\q I will not fear harm since you are with me;
+\v 4 Even though I walk through a valley of the shadow of death,
+\q I will fear no harm, for you are with me;
 \q your rod and your staff comfort me.
 
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@@ -7621,7 +7621,7 @@
 \v 9 For he satisfies the longings of those who are thirsty,
 \q and the desires of those who are hungry he fills up with good things.
 \q
-\v 10 Some sat in darkness and in gloom,
+\v 10 Some sat in darkness and in the shadow of death,
 \q prisoners in affliction and chains.
 
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23-ISA.usfm

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 \p
 \v 2 The people who walked in darkness have seen a great light;
-\q1 those who have lived in the land of the shadow of death, the light has shone on them. \f + \ft Instead of \fqa the shadow of death \fqa* , some modern translations have \fqa darkness \fqa* . \f*
+\q1 those who have lived in the land of the shadow of death, the light has shone on them. 
 
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24-JER.usfm

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 \v 6 They did not say, 'Where is Yahweh, who brought us up from the land of Egypt?
 \q Where is Yahweh, who led us to the wilderness, into the land of the Arabah and pits,
-\q in a land of drought and deep darkness,
+\q in a land of drought and utter darkness,
 \q a land through which no one passes and where no one lives?'
 
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@@ -1065,7 +1065,9 @@
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 \v 16 Give honor to Yahweh your God before he brings darkness,
 \q and before he causes your feet to stumble on the mountains at twilight.
-\q For you are hoping for light, but he will turn the place into a deep darkness, into a dark cloud.
+\q For you are hoping for light, 
+\q but he will turn it to deep darkness 
+\q and change it to deep gloom.
 \q
 \v 17 So if you will not listen, I will weep alone because of your arrogance.
 \q My eyes will certainly weep and flow with tears, for Yahweh's flock has been taken captive.

30-AMO.usfm

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 \q
 \v 8 God made the Pleiades and Orion;
-\q he turns darkness into the morning;
+\q he turns deep darkness into the morning;
 \q he makes the day dark with night
 \q and calls for the waters of the sea;
 \q he pours them out on the surface of the earth.