V14-22 corrections

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-\v 14 Now after John was arrested, Jesus came into Galilee and proclaimed the gospel of God, 
+\v 14 Now after John was arrested, Jesus came into Galilee proclaiming the gospel of God,
 \v 15 and saying, "The time is fulfilled, and the kingdom of God is near. Repent and believe in the gospel."
 
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 \v 16 And passing along by the sea of Galilee, he saw Simon and Andrew the brother of Simon casting a net in the sea, for they were fishermen. 
-\v 17 Jesus said to them, "Come after me, and I will make you become fishers of men." 
-\v 18 Immediately they left the nets and went after him.
+\v 17 Jesus said to them, "Come, follow me, and I will make you fishers of men." 
+\v 18 And mmediately they left the nets and followed him.
 
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 \v 19 As Jesus was walking on a little farther, he saw James son of Zebedee and John his brother; they were in the boat mending the nets. 
-\v 20 He immediately called them; they left their father Zebedee in the boat with the hired servants, and they followed him. 
+\v 20 Immediately he called them and they left their father Zebedee in the boat with the hired servants, and they followed him. 
 
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-\v 21 And going into Capernaum, immediately on the Sabbath he entered the synagogue and taught. 
-\v 22 They were astonished at his teaching, for he taught them as one with authority and not as the scribes. 
+\v 21 And they came into Capernaum, and on the Sabbath, Jesus immediately went into the synagogue and taught.
+\v 22 They were astonished at his teaching, for he was teaching them as someone who has authority and not as the scribes. 
 
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 \v 23 Just then there was in their synagogue a man with an unclean spirit. He cried out,