From f0e0a5d763bf34fbc277951dda03a6a698ae37ca Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 09:21:21 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 01/25] magic --- 19-PSA/097.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/097.usfm b/19-PSA/097.usfm index c3fb0f6e..a06e26dd 100644 --- a/19-PSA/097.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/097.usfm @@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ \s5 \q \v 12 Be glad in Yahweh, you righteous; -\q and give thanks when you remember his holiness. +\q and give thanks when you remember his holiness. From 420a83ccaf175caefa0b19853d9976de334f34c9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 09:25:18 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 02/25] Update 09.usfm --- 28-HOS/09.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/28-HOS/09.usfm b/28-HOS/09.usfm index 7d808bb0..36aa9008 100644 --- a/28-HOS/09.usfm +++ b/28-HOS/09.usfm @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ \q Egypt will gather them, \q and Memphis will bury them. \q As for their treasures of silver— -\q sharp briers will overtake them, +\q sharp briers will possess them, \q and thorns will fill their tents. \s5 From 26eda1403b2085959976112e5005a16d8be429ba Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 09:37:32 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 03/25] Psa 98:1 errant comma --- 19-PSA/098.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/098.usfm b/19-PSA/098.usfm index 56dd90f2..1bbeca57 100644 --- a/19-PSA/098.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/098.usfm @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ \q \v 1 Oh, sing to Yahweh a new song, \q for he has done marvelous things; -\q his right hand and his holy arm, have given us victory. +\q his right hand and his holy arm have given us victory. \q \v 2 Yahweh has made known his salvation; \q he has openly showed his justice to all the nations. From 36c3191a76f0c4553d909fab42b51e72186ec470 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 09:48:58 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 04/25] Psa 98:1 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit All versions translate הוֹשִֽׁיעָה־לּ֥וֹ as "for him," none "for us." --- 19-PSA/098.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/098.usfm b/19-PSA/098.usfm index 1bbeca57..e487f1bb 100644 --- a/19-PSA/098.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/098.usfm @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ \q \v 1 Oh, sing to Yahweh a new song, \q for he has done marvelous things; -\q his right hand and his holy arm have given us victory. +\q his right hand and his holy arm have given him victory. \q \v 2 Yahweh has made known his salvation; \q he has openly showed his justice to all the nations. From 1e4ae88d6580370ef2bda03178ded3421cf06cde Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 09:50:15 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 05/25] Update 09.usfm --- 28-HOS/09.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/28-HOS/09.usfm b/28-HOS/09.usfm index 36aa9008..b372ba2b 100644 --- a/28-HOS/09.usfm +++ b/28-HOS/09.usfm @@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ \v 10 Yahweh says, "When I found Israel, it was like finding grapes in the wilderness. \q Like the firstfruit of the season on the fig tree, I found your fathers. \q But they went to Baal Peor, -\q and they gave themselves to that shameful idol. +\q and they dedicated themselves to that shameful idol. \q They became as detestable as the idol they loved. \s5 From 569f9dc28eef5fdc6c3a954a12d6dcd516496ff1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 10:56:21 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 06/25] Update 09.usfm --- 28-HOS/09.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/28-HOS/09.usfm b/28-HOS/09.usfm index b372ba2b..968c3cee 100644 --- a/28-HOS/09.usfm +++ b/28-HOS/09.usfm @@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ \s5 \q -\v 16 Ephraim is diseased; +\v 16 Ephraim is diseased, \q and their root is dried up; \q they bear no fruit. \q Even if they have children, From 3ccbf771d9afa4674710713dcbed39856123619d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 11:11:44 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 07/25] Update 10.usfm --- 28-HOS/10.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/28-HOS/10.usfm b/28-HOS/10.usfm index dde627df..dbad27d2 100644 --- a/28-HOS/10.usfm +++ b/28-HOS/10.usfm @@ -17,9 +17,9 @@ \s5 \q -\v 3 For now they will say, +\v 3 For then they will say, \q "We have no king, -\q for we do not fear Yahweh. +\q for we did not fear Yahweh. \q And a king—what could he do for us?" \p \q From e855846423e678ff2ff869dfe7faa0dc4338134f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 11:22:11 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 08/25] Update 10.usfm --- 28-HOS/10.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/28-HOS/10.usfm b/28-HOS/10.usfm index dbad27d2..1afe423c 100644 --- a/28-HOS/10.usfm +++ b/28-HOS/10.usfm @@ -38,9 +38,9 @@ \q but they are no longer there. \q \v 6 They will be carried to Assyria -\q for a present for the great king. +\q as a present for the great king. \q Ephraim will be disgraced, -\q and Israel will be ashamed for following the advice of idols. +\q and Israel will be ashamed for having followed the advice of idols. \s5 \q From 061c75ebf1348713767b18cf262d9f8d643b8043 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 11:26:39 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 09/25] Update 10.usfm --- 28-HOS/10.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/28-HOS/10.usfm b/28-HOS/10.usfm index 1afe423c..7d85f1a3 100644 --- a/28-HOS/10.usfm +++ b/28-HOS/10.usfm @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ \v 6 They will be carried to Assyria \q as a present for the great king. \q Ephraim will be disgraced, -\q and Israel will be ashamed for having followed the advice of idols. +\q and Israel will be ashamed its disobedience. \s5 \q From 83e87d5fe0bb9d1d7524f68f707531ca2195f625 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 11:45:13 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 10/25] Update 10.usfm --- 28-HOS/10.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/28-HOS/10.usfm b/28-HOS/10.usfm index 7d85f1a3..294cab8c 100644 --- a/28-HOS/10.usfm +++ b/28-HOS/10.usfm @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ \v 6 They will be carried to Assyria \q as a present for the great king. \q Ephraim will be disgraced, -\q and Israel will be ashamed its disobedience. +\q and Israel will be ashamed its idol. \s5 \q From 10184d68d5138230e886279fdc5287c32f6c6330 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 11:58:30 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 11/25] Update 10.usfm --- 28-HOS/10.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/28-HOS/10.usfm b/28-HOS/10.usfm index 294cab8c..6ab0449a 100644 --- a/28-HOS/10.usfm +++ b/28-HOS/10.usfm @@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ \v 9 "Israel, \q you have sinned since the days of Gibeah; \q there you have remained. -\q Did not war overtake the evildoers in Gibeah? +\q Will not war overtake the sons of wrong in Gibeah? \s5 \p From 123f3e0110df1d27f1d89ba29b338ac1204ebe83 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 12:01:16 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 12/25] Update 10.usfm --- 28-HOS/10.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/28-HOS/10.usfm b/28-HOS/10.usfm index 6ab0449a..c9ba2894 100644 --- a/28-HOS/10.usfm +++ b/28-HOS/10.usfm @@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ \v 9 "Israel, \q you have sinned since the days of Gibeah; \q there you have remained. -\q Will not war overtake the sons of wrong in Gibeah? +\q Will not war overtake the sons of wrong in Gibeah? \s5 \p From c365201d03abec8cd8ea83c0d1188ab1052e466a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 12:20:26 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 13/25] 1co 7:31 Eliminated "passive." --- 47-1CO/07.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/47-1CO/07.usfm b/47-1CO/07.usfm index 08248c1e..80644396 100644 --- a/47-1CO/07.usfm +++ b/47-1CO/07.usfm @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ \s5 \v 29 But this I say, brothers: The time is short. From now on, let those who have wives live as though they had none. \v 30 Those who weep should act as though they were not weeping, and those who rejoice as though they were not rejoicing, and those who are buying anything as though they did not possess anything. -\v 31 And those who deal with the world should not act as though they are totally involved with it, for the system of this world is coming to an end. +\v 31 And those who make use of the world should not act as though they are making total use of it, for the system of this world is coming to an end. \s5 \v 32 I would like you to be free from worries. The unmarried man is concerned about the things of the Lord, how to please him. From ddeff5cdd211d7f3edc7e26432492820bdf0a624 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 12:22:42 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 14/25] magic --- 47-1CO/07.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/47-1CO/07.usfm b/47-1CO/07.usfm index 80644396..9c8ad506 100644 --- a/47-1CO/07.usfm +++ b/47-1CO/07.usfm @@ -73,4 +73,4 @@ \s5 \v 39 A woman is bound to her husband for as long as he lives. But if her husband dies, she is free to marry whomever she wishes to marry, but only in the Lord. -\v 40 Yet in my judgment she would be happier if she lives as she is. And I think that I also have the Spirit of God. +\v 40 Yet in my judgment she would be happier if she lives as she is. And I think that I also have the Spirit of God. From 3a17d0d4772cd7e4f36df318d69e902b4dcda990 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 12:52:42 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 15/25] Psa 98:4 Smoothed out clause chaining. --- 19-PSA/098.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/098.usfm b/19-PSA/098.usfm index e487f1bb..5981f608 100644 --- a/19-PSA/098.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/098.usfm @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ \q all the ends of the earth will see the victory of our God. \q \v 4 Shout for joy to Yahweh, all the earth; -\q burst into song and sing for joy, sing praises. +\q burst into song, sing for joy, and sing praises. \s5 \q From 61eeb53e552b225e1208db340c05d6b990a2d3f4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 13:35:44 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 16/25] Update 11.usfm --- 28-HOS/11.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/28-HOS/11.usfm b/28-HOS/11.usfm index b628c63b..c8760e08 100644 --- a/28-HOS/11.usfm +++ b/28-HOS/11.usfm @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ \q because of their own plans. \q \v 7 My people are determined to turn away from me. -\q Though they call to me, I who am on high, +\q Though they call to the Most High, \q no one will help them. \s5 From ae54e795909cacd06eab4d969d27c0ac14a32348 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 13:50:49 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 17/25] Ps 29:1-2, Ps 96:7-8 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Updating repo according to Tom W’s email about what he had done. --- 19-PSA/029.usfm | 8 ++++---- 19-PSA/096.usfm | 6 +++--- 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/029.usfm b/19-PSA/029.usfm index 39cee9ce..ec5c9c10 100644 --- a/19-PSA/029.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/029.usfm @@ -5,11 +5,11 @@ \d A psalm of David. \b \q -\v 1 Acknowledge that Yahweh—you sons of the mighty— -\q acknowledge that Yahweh has glory and power! +v 1 Give praise to Yahweh, you sons of God! +\q Give praise to Yahweh for his glory and strength. \q -\v 2 Give to Yahweh the glory that his name demands. -\q Bow down to Yahweh wearing clothing that honors his holiness. +\v 2 Give to Yahweh the glory that his name deserves. +\q Bow down to Yahweh and wear clothing that honors his holiness. \b \s5 diff --git a/19-PSA/096.usfm b/19-PSA/096.usfm index 53490d1c..aec08ff3 100644 --- a/19-PSA/096.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/096.usfm @@ -28,10 +28,10 @@ \s5 \q -\v 7 Ascribe to Yahweh, you clans of peoples, -\q ascribe to Yahweh glory and strength. +\v 7 Give praise to Yahweh, you clans of peoples, +\q give praise to Yahweh for his glory and strength. \q -\v 8 Ascribe to Yahweh the glory due to his name. +\v 8 Give to Yahweh the glory that his name deserves. \q Bring an offering and come into his courts. \s5 From b1f4b3c18bb6026747a210fa42c8c04ecb75405b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 13:52:22 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 18/25] magic --- 19-PSA/029.usfm | 2 +- 19-PSA/096.usfm | 2 +- 2 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/029.usfm b/19-PSA/029.usfm index ec5c9c10..2283be21 100644 --- a/19-PSA/029.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/029.usfm @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ v 1 Give praise to Yahweh, you sons of God! \q Give praise to Yahweh for his glory and strength. \q \v 2 Give to Yahweh the glory that his name deserves. -\q Bow down to Yahweh and wear clothing that honors his holiness. +\q Bow down to Yahweh and wear clothing that honors his holiness. \b \s5 diff --git a/19-PSA/096.usfm b/19-PSA/096.usfm index aec08ff3..374f8a10 100644 --- a/19-PSA/096.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/096.usfm @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ \s5 \q -\v 9 Bow down to Yahweh wearing clothing that honors his holiness. +\v 9 Bow down to Yahweh wearing clothing that honors his holiness. \q Tremble before him, all the earth. \q \v 10 Say among the nations, "Yahweh reigns." From 0f0e947f6684b13373a01971c3a48fb407793391 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 13:54:25 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 19/25] magic --- 19-PSA/029.usfm | 2 +- 19-PSA/096.usfm | 2 +- 2 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/029.usfm b/19-PSA/029.usfm index 2283be21..ec5c9c10 100644 --- a/19-PSA/029.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/029.usfm @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ v 1 Give praise to Yahweh, you sons of God! \q Give praise to Yahweh for his glory and strength. \q \v 2 Give to Yahweh the glory that his name deserves. -\q Bow down to Yahweh and wear clothing that honors his holiness. +\q Bow down to Yahweh and wear clothing that honors his holiness. \b \s5 diff --git a/19-PSA/096.usfm b/19-PSA/096.usfm index 374f8a10..aec08ff3 100644 --- a/19-PSA/096.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/096.usfm @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ \s5 \q -\v 9 Bow down to Yahweh wearing clothing that honors his holiness. +\v 9 Bow down to Yahweh wearing clothing that honors his holiness. \q Tremble before him, all the earth. \q \v 10 Say among the nations, "Yahweh reigns." From abcea23e2d1c8b1531db6376bc123ffa7a03bb05 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 13:57:28 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 20/25] Update 096.usfm --- 19-PSA/096.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/096.usfm b/19-PSA/096.usfm index aec08ff3..9c8e76c5 100644 --- a/19-PSA/096.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/096.usfm @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ \q sing to Yahweh, all the earth. \q \v 2 Sing to Yahweh, bless his name; -\q announce his salvation day after day. +\q announce his salvation day after day. \s5 \q From 07a9b1f21f46d9ef158f0773e68e18b6200452b0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 13:57:43 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 21/25] Update 096.usfm --- 19-PSA/096.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/096.usfm b/19-PSA/096.usfm index 9c8e76c5..aec08ff3 100644 --- a/19-PSA/096.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/096.usfm @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ \q sing to Yahweh, all the earth. \q \v 2 Sing to Yahweh, bless his name; -\q announce his salvation day after day. +\q announce his salvation day after day. \s5 \q From 33c60d7070865a6ebf6f93201690f1cd10c38516 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 13:58:33 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 22/25] Update 029.usfm --- 19-PSA/029.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/029.usfm b/19-PSA/029.usfm index ec5c9c10..345fb3be 100644 --- a/19-PSA/029.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/029.usfm @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ \s5 \c 29 \p -\d A psalm of David. +\d A psalm of David. \b \q v 1 Give praise to Yahweh, you sons of God! From eb916c69e91f826840098a04aeb2f24afb82c9c4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 13:58:44 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 23/25] Update 029.usfm --- 19-PSA/029.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/029.usfm b/19-PSA/029.usfm index 345fb3be..ec5c9c10 100644 --- a/19-PSA/029.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/029.usfm @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ \s5 \c 29 \p -\d A psalm of David. +\d A psalm of David. \b \q v 1 Give praise to Yahweh, you sons of God! From 71e01180a728b11b2f70c5c93ced9be7b552c21f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 14:00:08 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 24/25] Update 029.usfm --- 19-PSA/029.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/029.usfm b/19-PSA/029.usfm index ec5c9c10..345fb3be 100644 --- a/19-PSA/029.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/029.usfm @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ \s5 \c 29 \p -\d A psalm of David. +\d A psalm of David. \b \q v 1 Give praise to Yahweh, you sons of God! From 5f6d85e864e8ce5941ffe0e86de48cf22a6dc9b0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 14:01:48 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 25/25] Update 029.usfm --- 19-PSA/029.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/029.usfm b/19-PSA/029.usfm index 345fb3be..ec5c9c10 100644 --- a/19-PSA/029.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/029.usfm @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ \s5 \c 29 \p -\d A psalm of David. +\d A psalm of David. \b \q v 1 Give praise to Yahweh, you sons of God!