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-\v 1 The gold has become completely tarnished; the purest gold has changed.
+\v 1 The gold has become tarnished; how the purest gold has changed!
-\q The holy stones have been poured out at the head of every street.
+\q The holy stones are scattered at the corner of every street.
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-\v 2 The sons of Zion were precious, valued greater than pure gold.
+\v 2 The precious sons of Zion were worth their weight in pure gold, 
-\q But now they are regarded as nothing but clay jars made by potter's hands.
+\q but now they are worth no more than clay jars, the work of the potter's hands!
 
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-\v 3 Even the jackals reveal the breast to nurse their cubs, but 
+\v 3 Even the jackals offer the breast to nurse their cubs, but 
-\q the daughter of my people is as cruel as ostriches in the desert.
+\q the daughter of my people has become cruel, like the ostriches in the desert.
 
 
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-\v 4 The tongue of the nursing baby sticks to the roof of his mouth with thirst;
+\v 4 The tongue of the nursing baby sticks to the roof of his mouth by thirst;
-\q children ask for bread, but there is nothing for them.
+\q the children ask for food, but there is none for them.
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-\v 5 The ones who used to eat expensive food are now abandoned, starving in the streets; 
+\v 5 The ones who used to feast on expensive food now starve in the streets; 
-\q those who wore scarlet clothing are now on top of garbage heaps.
+\q those who were brought up wearing purple clothing, now lie dying on piles of garbage. 
 
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-\v 6 The iniquity of the daughter of my people is greater than the sin of Sodom,
+\v 6 The punishment of the daughter of my people is greater than that of Sodom, 
-\q that was overthrown in a moment, though no hands seized her.
+\q and it was overthrown in a moment 
+\q and no one lifted a hand to help her.
 
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-\v 7 Her leaders used to shine like snow and were as white as milk.
+\v 7 Her leaders were purer than snow, whiter than milk;
-\q Their bodies were more ruddy than coral; their form like sapphire.
+\q their bodies were more ruddy than coral, their form was like sapphire.
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-\v 8 Now darkness blackens their appearance, and they are unrecognizable in the streets,
+\v 8 Their appearance now is darker than soot; 
-\q for their skin clings to their withered bones. It has become as dry as wood!
+\q they are not recognized in the streets. 
+\q Their skin has shriveled on their bones; 
+\q it has become as dry as wood. 
 
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-\v 9 Those who have been killed by the sword are better off than those killed by hunger;
+\v 9 Those who have been killed by the sword were happier than those killed by hunger,
-\q they are better off than those who waste away, pierced by hunger for the lack of any crops from fields.
+\q who wasted away, pierced by the lack of any harvest from the field.
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-\v 10 The hands of compassionate women boiled their own children! 
+\v 10 The hands of compassionate women have boiled their own children; 
-\q Their children became their food 
+\q they became their food during the time 
-\q when my people were being destroyed.
+\q when the daughter of my people was being destroyed. 
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-\v 11 Yahweh has satisfied his rage. He has poured out his burning anger; he has kindled a fire
+\v 11 Yahweh showed all his wrath; he poured out his fierce anger.
-\q in Zion, and it has devoured her foundations.
+\q He kindled a fire in Zion that consumed her foundations.
 
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-\v 12 Neither the kings of the earth nor any of the world's inhabitants would believe
+\v 12 The kings of the earth did not believe,
-\q that an adversary and enemy could enter the gates of Jerusalem.
+\q nor did any of the inhabitants of the world believe,
+\q that enemies or opponents could enter the gates of Jerusalem.
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-\v 13 But they did, because of the sins of her prophets, and the iniquities of her priests
+\v 13 The the sins of her prophets, and the iniquities of her priests
 \q who have shed the blood of the righteous in her midst.
 
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-\v 14 Those prophets and priests now wander like blind men in the streets.
+\v 14 They wandered, blind, through the streets.
-\q They are defiled by that blood so no one is able to even touch their clothes.
+\q They were so defiled by that blood that no one was allowed to touch their clothes.
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-\v 15 "Flee! Unclean!" these prophets and priests cry out. "Flee, flee! Do not touch us!"
+\v 15 "Away! Unclean!" people cried at them. "Away! Away! Do not touch!"
-\q So they wander to other lands, but even the Gentiles say, "They can no longer live here as foreigners."
+\q So they wandered about; people said among the nations, "They can stay here no longer."
 
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-\v 16 Yahweh has scattered them from his presence; he does not look on them with favor any longer.
+\v 16 Yahweh himself scattered them; he does not watch over them any more. 
-\q No one receives the priests with any respect any more, and they show no concern for the elders.
+\q They do not honor the priests, 
+\q and they did not show any favor to the elders. 
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-\v 17 Our eyes constantly failed to find even worthless help,
+\v 17 Our eyes failed, looking in vain for help; 
-\q though they eagerly watched for a nation that would not save us.
+\q from our watchtowers we watched 
+\q for a nation that could not rescue us. 
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-\v 18 They hunted our steps going through our streets.
+\v 18 They followed our steps, 
-\q Our end was near and our days were finished, for our end had come.
+\q we could not walk in our streets.
+\q Our end was near and our days were numbered,
+\q our end had come. 
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 \v 19 Our pursuers were swifter than the eagles in the sky.
 \q They chased us to the mountains and lay in wait for us in the wilderness.
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-\v 20 The breath in our nostrils, Yahweh's anointed one—our king, was captured in their pits;
+\v 20 The breath in our nostrils—Yahweh's anointed one—he was the one who was captured in their pits;
-\q it was our king of whom we said, "We will live under his protection among the nations."
+\q of whom it was said, "Under his shadow we would live among the nations."
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-\v 21 Rejoice and be glad, daughter of Edom living in the land of Uz,
+\v 21 Rejoice and be glad, daughter of Edom, 
-\q for the cup will also pass to you. You will become drunk and strip yourself naked.
+\q you who live in the land of Uz.
+\q But to you also the cup will be passed; 
+\q you will be drunk and strip yourself naked.
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-\v 22 Daughter of Zion, the punishment for your iniquity has come to an end. He will no longer keep you in exile.
+\v 22 Daughter of Zion, your punishment will come to an end, 
-\q But daughter of Edom, he will punish your sins and uncover your wickedness.
+\q he will not extend your exile
+\q But daughter of Edom, he will punish;
+\q he will uncover your sins.
 
 
 

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-\v 1 Call to mind, Yahweh, what has happened to us.
+\v 1 Remember, Yahweh, what has happened to us
-\q Look and see our shame.
+\q look and see our disgrace.
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 \v 2 Our inheritance has been turned over to strangers;
 \q our houses to foreigners.
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-\v 3 We have become orphans, for there are no more fathers,
+\v 3 We have become orphans, the fatherless,
 \q and our mothers are like widows.
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-\v 4 Our water costs silver to drink, 
+\v 4 We must pay silver for the water we drink, 
-\q and our own wood is sold to us.
+\q and we must pay silver to get our own wood.
 
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-\v 5 Our enemies run after us; they are so close that they are breathing down our necks.
+\v 5 Those who are coming after us are close behind us; 
-\q We are weary; there is no rest for us.
+\q we are weary and we can find no rest.
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-\v 6 We have reached out with our hands to the Egyptians
+\v 6 We have given ourselves to Egypt and to Assyria 
-\q and the Assyrians to be filled with food.
+\q to get enough food.
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-\v 7 Our fathers sinned; they are no more,
+\v 7 Our fathers sinned, and they are no more,
-\q and we bear their sins.
+\q and we bear their iniquities.
 
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 \v 8 Slaves rule over us,
-\q and there is no one to rescue us out of their hand.
+\q and there is no one to deliver us from their hand.
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-\v 9 We are risking our lives to get our bread
+\v 9 We get our bread only by risking our lives, 
-\q in the face of the sword of the wilderness.
+\q because of the sword in the wilderness.
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-\v 10 Our skin is like an oven,
+\v 10 Our skin has grown as hot as an oven 
-\q burned up from the fever of famine.
+\q because of the burning heat of hunger.
 
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-\v 11 They have violated the women in Zion,
+\v 11 Women are raped in Zion,
-\q the virgins in the cities of Judah.
+\q and virgins in the cities of Judah.
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-\v 12 They hung princes by their own hands,
+\v 12 Princes are hung up by their own hands,
-\q and they have not honored the elders.
+\q and no honor is shown to the elders.
 
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-\v 13 They have brought up the vigorous men to the grinding house,
+\v 13 Young men are forced to grind grain with a millstone, 
-\q and youthful men stagger beneath logs.
+\q and boys stagger under heaven loads of wood.
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-\v 14 They have removed the elders from the city gate
+\v 14 The elders have left the city gate,
-\q and the vigorous men from their music.
+\q and the young men have left their music.
 
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-\v 15 The joy of our heart has ceased;
+\v 15 The joy of our heart has ceased
-\q our dances have changed into mourning.
+\q and our dancing has turned into mourning.
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-\v 16 The crown has fallen from our head!
+\v 16 The crown has fallen from our head;
-\q Woe to us, for we have sinned!
+\q woe to us, for we have sinned!
 
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-\v 17 Our hearts have become sick,
+\v 17 For this our heart has become sick,
 \q and our eyes have grown dim,
+\q for these things our eyes grow dim
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-\v 18 because jackals wander on Mount Zion, which is deserted.
+\v 18 for Mount Zion lies desolate, with jackals prowling over it. 
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-\v 19 But you are Yahweh; you reign forever,
+\v 19 But you, Yahweh, reign forever,
-\q and your throne is from generation to generation.
+\q and you will sit upon your throne from generation to generation.
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 \v 20 Why do you forget us forever?
-\q Will you forsake us for so very long?
+\q Will do you forsake us for so many days?
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-\v 21 Turn us back to you, Yahweh, and we will repent.
+\v 21 Restore us to yourself, Yahweh, and we will be restored.
-\q Restore our days as in ancient times,
+\q Renew our days as they were long ago—
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-\v 22 unless we truly are rejected
+\v 22 unless you have utterly rejected us
-\q and your anger toward us is too great!
+\q and you are angry with us beyond measure. 
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