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 Abram was a Chaldean man from the city of Ur who was chosen by God to be the forefather of the Israelites. God changed his name to "Abraham."
 
-* The name "Abram" means "exalted father"
-* "Abraham" means, "father of many."
+* The name "Abram" means "exalted father."
+* "Abraham" means "father of many."
 * God promised Abraham that he would have many descendants, who would become a great nation.
 * Abraham believed God and obeyed him. God led Abraham to move from Chaldea to the land of Canaan.
-* While living in the land of Canaan, when they were very old, Abraham and his wife Sarah had a son, Isaac.
+* Abraham and his wife Sarah, when they were very old and living in the land of Canaan, had a son, Isaac.
 
 (Translation suggestions: [Translate Names](en/ta-vol1/translate/man/translate-names))