From 27a5243d9358e0cbbd1a12350a388cb35a4af71c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 09:57:24 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 01/41] Psa 73:8 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit de-UDB’d --- 19-PSA/073.usfm | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/073.usfm b/19-PSA/073.usfm index 4b1568c3c..eaa11bcd6 100644 --- a/19-PSA/073.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/073.usfm @@ -32,10 +32,10 @@ \s5 \q -\v 8 They mockingly say evil things; -\q they proudly threaten violence. +\v 8 They mock and speak wickedly; +\q they speak loftily of oppression. \q -\v 9 They speak against the heavens, +\v 9 They set their mouth against the heavens, \q and their tongues roam through the earth. \s5 From 580507e6c1f9d291a6d00ce725f2db72b494fdd5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 10:18:41 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 02/41] Update 084.usfm --- 19-PSA/084.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/084.usfm b/19-PSA/084.usfm index 2d6080ed2..ddf0faca3 100644 --- a/19-PSA/084.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/084.usfm @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ \s5 \q \v 5 Blessed is the man whose strength is in you, -\q in whose heart are the highways to Zion. +\q in whose heart are the highways up to Zion. \q \v 6 Passing through the valley of Weeping, they find springs of water to drink. \q The early rains cover it with pools of water. From 51714538c049206a1a978e1b58148fb4af0fc921 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 10:25:52 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 03/41] Update 084.usfm --- 19-PSA/084.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/084.usfm b/19-PSA/084.usfm index ddf0faca3..78edf8ed3 100644 --- a/19-PSA/084.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/084.usfm @@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ \v 5 Blessed is the man whose strength is in you, \q in whose heart are the highways up to Zion. \q -\v 6 Passing through the valley of Weeping, they find springs of water to drink. +\v 6 Passing through the Valley of Tears, they find springs of water to drink. \q The early rains cover it with pools of water. \s5 From 4200ce629364dff3e7f50cc0eb851d1d8644a71a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 10:43:22 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 04/41] Psa 73:10 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Verse 10 in Hebrew is quite unintelligible (see RSV footnote), and most translations resort to emendations (Bratcher, R. G., & Reyburn, W. D. (1991). A translator’s handbook on the book of Psalms (p. 636). New York: United Bible Societies). I have simply updated the KJV and put explanations in the notes. --- 19-PSA/073.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/073.usfm b/19-PSA/073.usfm index eaa11bcd6..896c20cca 100644 --- a/19-PSA/073.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/073.usfm @@ -40,8 +40,8 @@ \s5 \q -\v 10 Therefore God's people turn to them -\q and drink deeply at their words. +\v 10 Therefore his people return to here +\q and waters of fullness are drained by them. \q \v 11 They say, "How does God know? \q Does God know what goes on?" From 2016a8fea2ebcbb76d89754d4403ea537d67279f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 10:52:12 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 05/41] Update 084.usfm --- 19-PSA/084.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/084.usfm b/19-PSA/084.usfm index 78edf8ed3..b4e791546 100644 --- a/19-PSA/084.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/084.usfm @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ \q in whose heart are the highways up to Zion. \q \v 6 Passing through the Valley of Tears, they find springs of water to drink. -\q The early rains cover it with pools of water. +\q The early rains cover it with blessings. \s5 \q From ffeab672d2dc5b4b787a02693a5ee97527de9d59 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 10:56:57 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 06/41] Update 084.usfm --- 19-PSA/084.usfm | 1 + 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+) diff --git a/19-PSA/084.usfm b/19-PSA/084.usfm index b4e791546..07c4aa048 100644 --- a/19-PSA/084.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/084.usfm @@ -29,6 +29,7 @@ \q \v 6 Passing through the Valley of Tears, they find springs of water to drink. \q The early rains cover it with blessings. +\f \ft Some versions have \fqa with pools of water \fqb \f* \s5 \q From 32800a5248b9eb371d6b1fefdc1d3d18e32f0fd6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 10:57:20 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 07/41] trying TW's solution to get it to sync --- 19-PSA/073.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/073.usfm b/19-PSA/073.usfm index 896c20cca..a72edb0f4 100644 --- a/19-PSA/073.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/073.usfm @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ \s5 \q \v 8 They mock and speak wickedly; -\q they speak loftily of oppression. +\q they speak loftily of oppression. \q \v 9 They set their mouth against the heavens, \q and their tongues roam through the earth. From d1915e67e90a1a98fd2ec8afd0bd1a0761241440 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 10:58:12 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 08/41] Update 084.usfm --- 19-PSA/084.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/084.usfm b/19-PSA/084.usfm index 07c4aa048..a0c5b256e 100644 --- a/19-PSA/084.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/084.usfm @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ \q \v 6 Passing through the Valley of Tears, they find springs of water to drink. \q The early rains cover it with blessings. -\f \ft Some versions have \fqa with pools of water \fqb \f* +\f + \ft Some versions have \fqa with pools of water \fqb \f* \s5 \q From e9577fdd8ad7d50b3f5be6424d257dc911d85477 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 10:58:46 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 09/41] Update 084.usfm --- 19-PSA/084.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/084.usfm b/19-PSA/084.usfm index a0c5b256e..f81a9d71d 100644 --- a/19-PSA/084.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/084.usfm @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ \q \v 6 Passing through the Valley of Tears, they find springs of water to drink. \q The early rains cover it with blessings. -\f + \ft Some versions have \fqa with pools of water \fqb \f* +\f + \ft Some versions have \fqa with pools of water \fqb . \f* \s5 \q From 63501535dbe8dc81cd703299885c163214c9bfe0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 11:06:19 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 10/41] Psa 73:11 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit de-UDB’d second stich. --- 19-PSA/073.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/073.usfm b/19-PSA/073.usfm index a72edb0f4..c2213b068 100644 --- a/19-PSA/073.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/073.usfm @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ \s5 \q \v 8 They mock and speak wickedly; -\q they speak loftily of oppression. +\q they speak loftily of oppression. \q \v 9 They set their mouth against the heavens, \q and their tongues roam through the earth. @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ \q and waters of fullness are drained by them. \q \v 11 They say, "How does God know? -\q Does God know what goes on?" +\q Is there knowledge with the Most High?" \q \v 12 Take notice: these people are wicked; \q they are always carefree, becoming richer and richer. From efeac9c6a1f4bfba17a78b96cf0cd66c39428a49 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 11:07:26 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 11/41] trying TW's magic potion again --- 19-PSA/073.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/073.usfm b/19-PSA/073.usfm index c2213b068..8c042d6eb 100644 --- a/19-PSA/073.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/073.usfm @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ \s5 \q \v 8 They mock and speak wickedly; -\q they speak loftily of oppression. +\q they speak loftily of oppression. \q \v 9 They set their mouth against the heavens, \q and their tongues roam through the earth. From 63c0555b77bf81938eddaf96c62a80c45b7cfb1d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: lrsallee Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 12:39:27 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 12/41] 1Ch 1:4 - adde space before ellipse in footnote --- 13-1CH/01.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/13-1CH/01.usfm b/13-1CH/01.usfm index b82a4112c..439cae3af 100644 --- a/13-1CH/01.usfm +++ b/13-1CH/01.usfm @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ \v 2 Kenan, Mahalalel, Jared, \v 3 Enoch, Methuselah, Lamech. \v 4 The sons of Noah were Shem, Ham, and Japheth. -\f + \ft Some versions omit \fqa The sons of... \fqa , but others include this expression. \f* +\f + \ft Some versions omit \fqa The sons of ... \fqa , but others include this expression. \f* \s5 \p From d90514af20d21e3209cbdb6468c63a8f5db3184d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: lrsallee Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 12:40:36 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 13/41] 1ki 2:26 - added spaces around ellipse in footnote --- 11-1KI/02.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/11-1KI/02.usfm b/11-1KI/02.usfm index 66cebd8a5..9d154e3ea 100644 --- a/11-1KI/02.usfm +++ b/11-1KI/02.usfm @@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ \s5 \p \v 26 Then to Abiathar the priest the king said, "Go to Anathoth, to your own fields. You are worthy of death, but I will not at this time put you to death, because you carried the ark of the Lord Yahweh before David my father and suffered in every way my father suffered." -\f + \ft Some versions have, \fqa ...the ark of Yahweh.... \fqb \f* +\f + \ft Some versions have, \fqa ... the ark of Yahweh .... \fqb \f* \v 27 So Solomon dismissed Abiathar from being priest to Yahweh, that he might fulfill the word of Yahweh, which he had spoken concerning the house of Eli at Shiloh. \s5 From 416850df744550b40402603be7f8fa458b20a601 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 12:51:12 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 14/41] Psa 73:14 Archaic word order modernized. --- 19-PSA/073.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/073.usfm b/19-PSA/073.usfm index 8c042d6eb..86a881c5a 100644 --- a/19-PSA/073.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/073.usfm @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ \v 13 Surely it is in vain that I have guarded my heart \q and washed my hands in innocence. \q -\v 14 For all the day long have I been afflicted +\v 14 For all the day long I have been afflicted \q and disciplined every morning. \q \v 15 If I had said, "I will say these things," From b761d86e99280e83059cca64785353606db9f34f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: lrsallee Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 13:41:56 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 15/41] 1Pe 1:22 - added space before ellipse in footnote --- 61-1PE/01.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/61-1PE/01.usfm b/61-1PE/01.usfm index 091e4c5c6..eb2c23d78 100644 --- a/61-1PE/01.usfm +++ b/61-1PE/01.usfm @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ \s5 \v 22 You made your souls pure by obedience to the truth. This was for the purpose of sincere brotherly love, so love one another earnestly from the heart. -\f + \ft Some older versions read, \fqa You made your souls pure by obedience to the truth through the Spirit... \fqb \f* +\f + \ft Some older versions read, \fqa You made your souls pure by obedience to the truth through the Spirit ... \fqb \f* \v 23 You have been born again, not from perishable seed, but from imperishable seed, through the living and remaining word of God. \s5 From 939039773c9a9ec67d6192a61203f45a80a34042 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: lrsallee Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 13:42:48 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 16/41] Gen 1:26 - added space before ellipse in footnote --- 01-GEN/01.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/01-GEN/01.usfm b/01-GEN/01.usfm index 562d2a880..16f69768f 100644 --- a/01-GEN/01.usfm +++ b/01-GEN/01.usfm @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ \s5 \v 26 God said, "Let us make man in our image, after our likeness. Let them have dominion over the fish of the sea, over the birds of the sky, over the livestock, over all the earth, and over every creeping thing that creeps on the earth." -\f + \ft Some ancient copies have: \fqa ...Over the livestock, over all the animals of the earth, and over every creeping thing that creeps on the earth. \fqb \f* +\f + \ft Some ancient copies have: \fqa ... Over the livestock, over all the animals of the earth, and over every creeping thing that creeps on the earth. \fqb \f* \v 27 God created man in his own image. In his own image he created him. Male and female he created them. \s5 From f493d9f331188de22be0ef463e3fb7a2b1afa2f4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: lrsallee Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 13:46:01 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 17/41] Update 17.usfm --- 18-JOB/17.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/18-JOB/17.usfm b/18-JOB/17.usfm index 9550bc39d..5215de775 100644 --- a/18-JOB/17.usfm +++ b/18-JOB/17.usfm @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ \s5 \q \v 11 My days are past; my plans are over. -\q As for the wishes of my heart ... +\q As for the wishes of my heart ... \f + \ft Some modern versions have \fqa My days are past, as are my plans. The wishes of my heart are finished \fqb or \fqa ... the strings of my heart have been broken \fqb . Others have \fqa My days are past; my plans are over, as are the wishes of my heart \fqb \f* \q \v 12 These people, these mockers, change the night into day; From 779ca2036d12957f9e3d60b2d781bb6eae9432d9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: lrsallee Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 13:46:47 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 18/41] Lev 20:7 - added space after ellipse in footnote --- 03-LEV/20.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/03-LEV/20.usfm b/03-LEV/20.usfm index 9d123a8bf..3a024b0a6 100644 --- a/03-LEV/20.usfm +++ b/03-LEV/20.usfm @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ \p \v 6 The person who turns to those who talk with the dead, or to those who talk with spirits so as to prostitute themselves with them, I will set my face against that person; I will cut him off from among his people. \v 7 Therefore dedicate yourselves to Yahweh and be holy, because I am Yahweh your God. -\f + \ft Several modern versions have: \fqa ...Because I, Yahweh your God, am holy \fqb \f* +\f + \ft Several modern versions have: \fqa ... Because I, Yahweh your God, am holy \fqb \f* \s5 \p From fee9f9acb2c6981c3a2751f9ea1dc0d2fabd49df Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: lrsallee Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 13:49:32 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 19/41] typo --- 11-1KI/02.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/11-1KI/02.usfm b/11-1KI/02.usfm index 9d154e3ea..60c7288eb 100644 --- a/11-1KI/02.usfm +++ b/11-1KI/02.usfm @@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ \s5 \p \v 26 Then to Abiathar the priest the king said, "Go to Anathoth, to your own fields. You are worthy of death, but I will not at this time put you to death, because you carried the ark of the Lord Yahweh before David my father and suffered in every way my father suffered." -\f + \ft Some versions have, \fqa ... the ark of Yahweh .... \fqb \f* +\f + \ft Some versions have, \fqa ... the ark of Yahweh ... \fqb \f* \v 27 So Solomon dismissed Abiathar from being priest to Yahweh, that he might fulfill the word of Yahweh, which he had spoken concerning the house of Eli at Shiloh. \s5 From b0bf335f5bcc4bc410d5a2b48b74b3f1a8a5d471 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: lrsallee Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 13:51:48 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 20/41] Mrk 11:32 - added space after ellipse --- 42-MRK/11.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/11.usfm b/42-MRK/11.usfm index 1284b2037..1b4ed79da 100644 --- a/42-MRK/11.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/11.usfm @@ -68,5 +68,5 @@ \s5 \v 31 They discussed between themselves and argued and said, "If we say, 'From heaven,' he will say, 'Why then did you not believe him?' -\v 32 But if we say, 'From men,' ..." They feared the people, for they all held that John was a prophet. +\v 32 But if we say, 'From men,' ... " They feared the people, for they all held that John was a prophet. \v 33 Then they answered Jesus and said, "We do not know." Then Jesus said to them, "Neither will I tell you by what authority I do these things." From a2c6d7efbf4c5319a5662f7137091b635c74c7dd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: lrsallee Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 13:52:46 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 21/41] Mrk 13:33 - added space around ellipse in footnote --- 42-MRK/13.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/13.usfm b/42-MRK/13.usfm index 2b3777385..150c13150 100644 --- a/42-MRK/13.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/13.usfm @@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ \p \v 33 Be alert! Watch, because you do not know what time it is. \f + \ft Some ancient authorities read: -\fqa Be alert! Watch and pray, because...\f* +\fqa Be alert! Watch and pray, because ... \f* \v 34 It is like a man who goes on a journey: he leaves his house and puts his servants in charge of the house, each one with his work. And he commands the watchman to stay awake. \s5 From 2bb6d124773ac7dd00a3162f70fbb13d84e1f1c0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: lrsallee Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 13:53:45 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 22/41] Mat 9:6 added spaces around ellipse in footnote --- 41-MAT/09.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/41-MAT/09.usfm b/41-MAT/09.usfm index b194af6a3..39584e93c 100644 --- a/41-MAT/09.usfm +++ b/41-MAT/09.usfm @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ \v 3 Behold, some of the scribes said among themselves, "This man is blaspheming." \v 4 Jesus knew their thoughts and said, "Why are you thinking evil in your hearts? \v 5 For which is easier to say, 'Your sins are forgiven,' or to say, 'Get up and walk'? -\v 6 But that you may know that the Son of Man has authority on earth to forgive sins,..." he said to the paralytic, "Get up, pick up your mat, and go to your house." +\v 6 But that you may know that the Son of Man has authority on earth to forgive sins, ... " he said to the paralytic, "Get up, pick up your mat, and go to your house." \s5 \v 7 Then the man got up and went away to his house. From fcd3699cc75608363830931e23fe465b91313d4c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: lrsallee Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 13:56:11 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 23/41] Num 5 - added spaces around ellipses --- 04-NUM/05.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/04-NUM/05.usfm b/04-NUM/05.usfm index 841f73010..341644119 100644 --- a/04-NUM/05.usfm +++ b/04-NUM/05.usfm @@ -40,8 +40,8 @@ \v 19 The priest must cause her to swear an oath. He must say to the woman, "If no man has slept with you, and if you have not gone astray and committed impurity, then you will certainly be free from this bitter water that can bring a curse. \s5 -\v 20 But if you, a woman under her husband, have gone astray, if you are defiled, and if some other man has slept with you..." -\v 21 Then the priest must cause the woman to swear an oath that can bring down a curse on her, and then he must continue speaking to the woman, "...then Yahweh will make you into a curse that will be shown to your people to be such. This will happen if Yahweh causes your thigh to waste away and your abdomen to swell. +\v 20 But if you, a woman under her husband, have gone astray, if you are defiled, and if some other man has slept with you ... " +\v 21 Then the priest must cause the woman to swear an oath that can bring down a curse on her, and then he must continue speaking to the woman, " ... then Yahweh will make you into a curse that will be shown to your people to be such. This will happen if Yahweh causes your thigh to waste away and your abdomen to swell. \v 22 This water that brings the curse will go into your stomach, swell your abdomen, and waste away your thighs." The woman is to reply, "Yes, let that happen if I am guilty." \s5 From afd933518eb9c74ea9f8f6d56555080ecd9c42e5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 14:01:10 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 24/41] Update 08.usfm --- 20-PRO/08.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/08.usfm b/20-PRO/08.usfm index 14d9df426..3713e2e6f 100644 --- a/20-PRO/08.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/08.usfm @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ \s5 \q \v 14 I have good advice and sound wisdom; -\q I have insight, and strength belongs to me. +\q I am insight; strength belongs to me. \q \v 15 By me kings reign— \q also noblemen, and all who govern justly. From 7c13d5ce062c5a24a20bd01fdfc513e293d9e88d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 14:16:13 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 25/41] Update 10.usfm --- 20-PRO/10.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/10.usfm b/20-PRO/10.usfm index 315397240..46e1d3dd4 100644 --- a/20-PRO/10.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/10.usfm @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ \s5 \q \v 10 He who winks the eye causes grief, -\q but a talkative fool will be ruined. +\q but a talkative fool will be thrown down. \q \v 11 The mouth of one who does right is a fountain of life, \q but the mouth of the wicked hides violence. From a6aeacc84c9d5e405c350f75b1d46e8357b054e9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 14:18:16 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 26/41] Update 10.usfm --- 20-PRO/10.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/10.usfm b/20-PRO/10.usfm index 46e1d3dd4..20a022912 100644 --- a/20-PRO/10.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/10.usfm @@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ \v 10 He who winks the eye causes grief, \q but a talkative fool will be thrown down. \q -\v 11 The mouth of one who does right is a fountain of life, +\v 11 The mouth of one who does right is a water spring of life, \q but the mouth of the wicked hides violence. \s5 From 851b6c7577b3a425678dff591aa205057a07d343 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 14:29:31 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 27/41] Update 10.usfm --- 20-PRO/10.usfm | 1 + 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+) diff --git a/20-PRO/10.usfm b/20-PRO/10.usfm index 20a022912..2ff498e9c 100644 --- a/20-PRO/10.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/10.usfm @@ -41,6 +41,7 @@ \q \v 10 He who winks the eye causes grief, \q but a talkative fool will be thrown down. +\f + \ft Some modern versions have \fqa but one who bravely corrects makes peace \fqb \f* \q \v 11 The mouth of one who does right is a water spring of life, \q but the mouth of the wicked hides violence. From 4dd4c731fe6139dba3c9c33804ab4fbca22ffa4e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 14:30:12 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 28/41] Update 10.usfm --- 20-PRO/10.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/10.usfm b/20-PRO/10.usfm index 2ff498e9c..7c93532f6 100644 --- a/20-PRO/10.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/10.usfm @@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ \q \v 10 He who winks the eye causes grief, \q but a talkative fool will be thrown down. -\f + \ft Some modern versions have \fqa but one who bravely corrects makes peace \fqb \f* +\f + \ft Some modern versions have \fqa but one who bravely corrects makes peace \fqb . \f* \q \v 11 The mouth of one who does right is a water spring of life, \q but the mouth of the wicked hides violence. From 66a786ec3e921b7fcebd5be03f6264f9689900da Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 14:34:34 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 29/41] Update 10.usfm --- 20-PRO/10.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/10.usfm b/20-PRO/10.usfm index 7c93532f6..f2a2455c1 100644 --- a/20-PRO/10.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/10.usfm @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ \f + \ft Some modern versions have \fqa but one who bravely corrects makes peace \fqb . \f* \q \v 11 The mouth of one who does right is a water spring of life, -\q but the mouth of the wicked hides violence. +\q but the mouth of the wicked covers up violence. \s5 \q From e7235bb52eca98dd80bc98fa5ca6cf136edef809 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 14:47:04 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 30/41] Psa 74:2 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit ULB had verbs backwards. "Tribe" seems to be something that shouldn’t be elided. --- 19-PSA/074.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/074.usfm b/19-PSA/074.usfm index 1b821bbbe..c634869c4 100644 --- a/19-PSA/074.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/074.usfm @@ -8,8 +8,8 @@ \v 1 God, why have you rejected us forever? \q Why does your anger burn against the sheep of your pasture? \q -\v 2 Call to mind your people, whom you redeemed in ancient times, -\q whom you have purchased to be your own heritage, +\v 2 Call to mind your people, whom you purchased in ancient times, +\q the tribe whom you have redeemed to be your own heritage, \q and Mount Zion, where you live. \s5 From 235d2c30d5039de016cc91a672731ff8ec5f8ca3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 14:48:54 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 31/41] magic --- 19-PSA/074.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/074.usfm b/19-PSA/074.usfm index c634869c4..7ee50a3ee 100644 --- a/19-PSA/074.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/074.usfm @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ \q \v 2 Call to mind your people, whom you purchased in ancient times, \q the tribe whom you have redeemed to be your own heritage, -\q and Mount Zion, where you live. +\q and Mount Zion, where you live. \s5 \q From 25168550c595384ef845e19ccc0d7d9b254270e4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 14:49:24 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 32/41] undo magic --- 19-PSA/074.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/074.usfm b/19-PSA/074.usfm index 7ee50a3ee..c634869c4 100644 --- a/19-PSA/074.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/074.usfm @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ \q \v 2 Call to mind your people, whom you purchased in ancient times, \q the tribe whom you have redeemed to be your own heritage, -\q and Mount Zion, where you live. +\q and Mount Zion, where you live. \s5 \q From c552d0833085480105dedaef94b781366deaced5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 15:02:30 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 33/41] Psa 74:9 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit De-UDB’d. --- 19-PSA/074.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/074.usfm b/19-PSA/074.usfm index c634869c4..ac6e536da 100644 --- a/19-PSA/074.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/074.usfm @@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ to the ground. \s5 \q -\v 9 We do not see any more miraculous signs from God; +\v 9 We do not see any more signs; \q there is no prophet any more, \q and no one among us knows how long this will last. \q From fb0c32fd428fd80d72de896fdd4da9d5e31d3e62 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 15:24:24 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 34/41] Update 21.usfm --- 20-PRO/21.usfm | 5 +++-- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/21.usfm b/20-PRO/21.usfm index a98c877ff..bdff758df 100644 --- a/20-PRO/21.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/21.usfm @@ -115,8 +115,9 @@ \s5 \q -\v 29 A wicked man makes himself seem strong, -\q but an upright person is careful about his actions. +\v 29 A wicked man makes his face hard, +\q but an upright person is certain about his ways. +\f + \ft Some modern versions have \fqa but an upright person thinks about his way \fqb \f* \s5 \q From 03c82f8d84e716b708d6a3703a9ec82c234c7d1d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 15:24:59 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 35/41] Update 21.usfm --- 20-PRO/21.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/21.usfm b/20-PRO/21.usfm index bdff758df..8fe90f804 100644 --- a/20-PRO/21.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/21.usfm @@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ \q \v 29 A wicked man makes his face hard, \q but an upright person is certain about his ways. -\f + \ft Some modern versions have \fqa but an upright person thinks about his way \fqb \f* +\f + \ft Some modern versions have \fqa but an upright person thinks about his way \fqb . \f* \s5 \q From 0ad4df998fd4c83a1f656d0bec3a3a81781a5319 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 15:56:29 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 36/41] Update 25.usfm --- 20-PRO/25.usfm | 3 ++- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/25.usfm b/20-PRO/25.usfm index 767e7fdf6..312153f78 100644 --- a/20-PRO/25.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/25.usfm @@ -113,7 +113,8 @@ \s5 \q \v 27 It is not good to eat too much honey; -\q that is like searching for honor upon honor. +\q that is like searching for honor after honor. +\f + \ft Modern versions have different interpretations of this difficult verse. \f* \q \v 28 A person without self-control \q is like a city breached and without walls. From a690ab440c88f6fbe4a2241fa4e8fdddfc936832 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 17:40:01 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 37/41] Psa 74:21 Eliminated possible misreading as "do not permit" and unnecessary passive. --- 19-PSA/074.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/074.usfm b/19-PSA/074.usfm index ac6e536da..ef1d1e348 100644 --- a/19-PSA/074.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/074.usfm @@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ to the ground. \v 20 Call to mind your covenant, \q for the dark regions of the earth are full of places of violence. \q -\v 21 Do not let the oppressed be turned back in shame; +\v 21 May the oppressed not turn back in shame; \q may the poor and oppressed praise your name. \s5 From 880b3b84c81014953344eb0aaf3a016b55c0d5c0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Wed, 7 Sep 2016 08:35:37 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 38/41] magic --- 19-PSA/074.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/074.usfm b/19-PSA/074.usfm index ef1d1e348..7f35659ed 100644 --- a/19-PSA/074.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/074.usfm @@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ to the ground. \q for the dark regions of the earth are full of places of violence. \q \v 21 May the oppressed not turn back in shame; -\q may the poor and oppressed praise your name. +\q may the poor and oppressed praise your name. \s5 \q From 5f43e11d780fb2296694e8cef8eb16f9b40597d6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Wed, 7 Sep 2016 08:46:58 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 39/41] Psa 74:21 "Poor and needy" is a common phrase (12x in ULB OT). --- 19-PSA/074.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/074.usfm b/19-PSA/074.usfm index 7f35659ed..88b248c47 100644 --- a/19-PSA/074.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/074.usfm @@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ to the ground. \q for the dark regions of the earth are full of places of violence. \q \v 21 May the oppressed not turn back in shame; -\q may the poor and oppressed praise your name. +\q may the poor and needy praise your name. \s5 \q From d64ac83913c1af74f6f824166e3e857b77bdaea7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Wed, 7 Sep 2016 08:59:49 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 40/41] Update 08.usfm --- 21-ECC/08.usfm | 1 + 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+) diff --git a/21-ECC/08.usfm b/21-ECC/08.usfm index f600f8cd5..4b9d8731d 100644 --- a/21-ECC/08.usfm +++ b/21-ECC/08.usfm @@ -36,6 +36,7 @@ There is a time when a person has power to do evil to others. \s5 \v 10 So I saw the wicked buried publicly. They were taken from the holy area and buried and were praised by people in the city where they had done their wicked deeds. This also is uselessness. +\f + \ft Some modern versions have other interpretations of this difficult verse: \fga I saw wicked people come and go into the holy place. They proudly spoke in the city about the things they had done. This also is uselessness. \fqb Other versions have \fqa I saw wicked people come and go into the holy place. They were praised in the city for the things they had done. This also is uselessness. \fqb \f* \v 11 When a sentence against an evil crime is not executed quickly, it entices the hearts of human beings to do evil. \s5 From ee8011b4618bf39032d91c8e9acdea4852d04ad7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Wed, 7 Sep 2016 09:12:30 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 41/41] Update 08.usfm --- 21-ECC/08.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/21-ECC/08.usfm b/21-ECC/08.usfm index 4b9d8731d..15ccbb84f 100644 --- a/21-ECC/08.usfm +++ b/21-ECC/08.usfm @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ There is a time when a person has power to do evil to others. \s5 \v 10 So I saw the wicked buried publicly. They were taken from the holy area and buried and were praised by people in the city where they had done their wicked deeds. This also is uselessness. -\f + \ft Some modern versions have other interpretations of this difficult verse: \fga I saw wicked people come and go into the holy place. They proudly spoke in the city about the things they had done. This also is uselessness. \fqb Other versions have \fqa I saw wicked people come and go into the holy place. They were praised in the city for the things they had done. This also is uselessness. \fqb \f* +\f + \ft Some modern versions have other interpretations of this difficult verse: \fqa I saw wicked people come and go into the holy place. They proudly spoke in the city about the things they had done. This also is uselessness. \fqb Other versions have \fqa I saw wicked people come and go into the holy place. They were praised in the city for the things they had done. This also is uselessness. \fqb \f* \v 11 When a sentence against an evil crime is not executed quickly, it entices the hearts of human beings to do evil. \s5