From 10e28485fbc0332df5bbdea97e2e5c864d31af9d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Tue, 3 Jan 2017 09:49:08 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 1/8] Sentence making --- 18-JOB/31.usfm | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/18-JOB/31.usfm b/18-JOB/31.usfm index bae1287e..09999764 100644 --- a/18-JOB/31.usfm +++ b/18-JOB/31.usfm @@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ \s5 \q -\v 22 hen let my shoulder fall from the shoulder blade, +\v 22 If I have done these things, then let my shoulder fall from the shoulder blade, \q and let my arm be broken from its joint. \q \v 23 For I dreaded destruction from God; @@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ \s5 \q -\v 26 if I have seen the sun when it shone, +\v 26 If I have seen the sun when it shone, \q or the moon walking in its brightness, \q \v 27 and if my heart has been secretly attracted, @@ -133,16 +133,16 @@ \q 'Who can find one who has not been filled with Job's food?' \q \v 32 (even the foreigner has never had to stay in the city square, -\q because I have always opened my doors to the traveler), and if that is not so, then bring charges against me! +\q because I have always opened my doors to the traveler), and if that is not so, then bring charges against me! \s5 \q -\v 33 if, like mankind, I have hidden my sins +\v 33 If, like mankind, I have hidden my sins \q by hiding my guilt inside my tunic \q \v 34 —because I feared the great multitude, \q because the contempt of families terrified me, -\q so that I kept silent and would not go outside, +\q so that I kept silent and would not go outside— \q then bring charges against me! \s5 From 51075cecb46096f98f15d0c3a998570ad6159cc6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Tue, 3 Jan 2017 09:50:34 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 2/8] another lc to uc correction --- 18-JOB/31.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/18-JOB/31.usfm b/18-JOB/31.usfm index 09999764..75544d04 100644 --- a/18-JOB/31.usfm +++ b/18-JOB/31.usfm @@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ \s5 \q -\v 19 if I have seen anyone perish for lack of clothing, +\v 19 If I have seen anyone perish for lack of clothing, \q or if I have seen that a needy man had no clothing; \q \v 20 if his heart has not blessed me From 7975d2ee18a7140d3386cac57b86358c97eaf6ac Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Tue, 3 Jan 2017 10:02:53 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 3/8] Various checks and balances --- 20-PRO/07.usfm | 2 +- 23-ISA/22.usfm | 6 +++--- 2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/07.usfm b/20-PRO/07.usfm index 03e7a5a2..9b168948 100644 --- a/20-PRO/07.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/07.usfm @@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ \q he will return on the day of the full moon." \q \v 21 With much talk she turned him; -\q with her smooth lips she mislead him. +\q with her smooth lips she misled him. \s5 \q diff --git a/23-ISA/22.usfm b/23-ISA/22.usfm index fb7b6514..2435d8e4 100644 --- a/23-ISA/22.usfm +++ b/23-ISA/22.usfm @@ -2,11 +2,11 @@ \c 22 \p \v 1 A declaration about the valley of vision: -\q1 +\q1 What is the reason that you have all gone up to the housetops? \b \q1 -\v 2 A noisy city, a town full of revelry; -\q1 your dead were not killed with the sword, and they did not die in battle. +\v 2 Is it so you may hear a city full of noises, a town full of revelry? +\q1 Your dead were not killed with the sword, and they did not die in battle. \s5 \q1 From ce25f683c92e01c0baa9dde33c7c154121a5691c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Tue, 3 Jan 2017 10:36:34 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 4/8] extra word --- 49-GAL/03.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/49-GAL/03.usfm b/49-GAL/03.usfm index f0e7af04..4f0b08a6 100644 --- a/49-GAL/03.usfm +++ b/49-GAL/03.usfm @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ \s5 \v 4 Have you suffered so many things for nothing—if indeed it was for nothing? -\v 5 Does he who gives the Spirit to you and works miracles deeds among you do so by the works of the law or by hearing with faith? +\v 5 Does he who gives the Spirit to you and works miracles among you do so by the works of the law, or by hearing with faith? \s5 \v 6 Just as Abraham "believed God and it was credited to him as righteousness," From 2bbe445925763900a082dee33df4401f9be0606b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Tue, 3 Jan 2017 10:49:14 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 5/8] checking --- 49-GAL/03.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/49-GAL/03.usfm b/49-GAL/03.usfm index 4f0b08a6..caa0b799 100644 --- a/49-GAL/03.usfm +++ b/49-GAL/03.usfm @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ \s5 \v 6 Just as Abraham "believed God and it was credited to him as righteousness," -\v 7 in the same way, understand, then, that it is those of faith who are the children of Abraham. +\v 7 in the same way, understand, then, that those who are of faith are the children of Abraham. \v 8 The scripture, foreseeing that God would justify the Gentiles by faith, preached the gospel beforehand to Abraham, saying, "In you all the nations will be blessed." \v 9 So then, those who of faith are blessed along with Abraham, the man of faith. From f6a9c916383397328fb2bbbdd7955fe171d8dbd8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Tue, 3 Jan 2017 10:51:08 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 6/8] checking --- 49-GAL/03.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/49-GAL/03.usfm b/49-GAL/03.usfm index caa0b799..05f4f0c5 100644 --- a/49-GAL/03.usfm +++ b/49-GAL/03.usfm @@ -11,9 +11,9 @@ \s5 \v 6 Just as Abraham "believed God and it was credited to him as righteousness," -\v 7 in the same way, understand, then, that those who are of faith are the children of Abraham. +\v 7 in the same way, understand, then, that those of faith who are the children of Abraham. \v 8 The scripture, foreseeing that God would justify the Gentiles by faith, preached the gospel beforehand to Abraham, saying, "In you all the nations will be blessed." -\v 9 So then, those who of faith are blessed along with Abraham, the man of faith. +\v 9 So then, those who are of faith are blessed along with Abraham, the man of faith. \s5 \v 10 All who rely on the works of the law are under a curse; and so it is written, "Cursed is everyone who does not abide by all the things written in the book of the law, and do them." From dd055201a57fc7bb1754d5bf14d2ea761966cc0c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Tue, 3 Jan 2017 10:52:38 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 7/8] checking --- 49-GAL/03.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/49-GAL/03.usfm b/49-GAL/03.usfm index 05f4f0c5..4c98180d 100644 --- a/49-GAL/03.usfm +++ b/49-GAL/03.usfm @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ \s5 \v 6 Just as Abraham "believed God and it was credited to him as righteousness," -\v 7 in the same way, understand, then, that those of faith who are the children of Abraham. +\v 7 in the same way, understand, then, that those of faith are the children of Abraham. \v 8 The scripture, foreseeing that God would justify the Gentiles by faith, preached the gospel beforehand to Abraham, saying, "In you all the nations will be blessed." \v 9 So then, those who are of faith are blessed along with Abraham, the man of faith. From 942addb9bf2e9b4b70d9550bbec7dce7236ed6bb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Tue, 3 Jan 2017 10:53:46 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 8/8] checking --- 49-GAL/03.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/49-GAL/03.usfm b/49-GAL/03.usfm index 4c98180d..8cd766d0 100644 --- a/49-GAL/03.usfm +++ b/49-GAL/03.usfm @@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ \v 6 Just as Abraham "believed God and it was credited to him as righteousness," \v 7 in the same way, understand, then, that those of faith are the children of Abraham. \v 8 The scripture, foreseeing that God would justify the Gentiles by faith, preached the gospel beforehand to Abraham, saying, "In you all the nations will be blessed." -\v 9 So then, those who are of faith are blessed along with Abraham, the man of faith. +\v 9 So then, those of faith are blessed along with Abraham, the man of faith. \s5 \v 10 All who rely on the works of the law are under a curse; and so it is written, "Cursed is everyone who does not abide by all the things written in the book of the law, and do them."