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@@ -2050,14 +2050,14 @@ EXO	30	14	uqt6	figs-idiom	כֹּ֗ל הָ⁠עֹבֵר֙ עַל־הַ⁠פְּק
 EXO	30	14	vhim	figs-idiom	מִ⁠בֶּ֛ן עֶשְׂרִ֥ים שָׁנָ֖ה	1	from twenty years old and up	This is an idiom that refers to age. See the UST and how you translated the same idiom in [Exo 7:7](../07/07.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-idiom]])
 EXO	30	14	k4h9	figs-metaphor	מִ⁠בֶּ֛ן עֶשְׂרִ֥ים שָׁנָ֖ה וָ⁠מָ֑עְלָ⁠ה	1	from twenty years old and up	Larger numbers are spoken of as being up or above smaller numbers. If your readers would not understand what this image means in this context, you could use an equivalent metaphor from your culture. Alternatively, you could express the meaning in a non-figurative way. Alternate translation: “from twenty years old and more” or “who is twenty years old or older” (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 EXO	30	15	e8xa	translate-bmoney	מִֽ⁠מַּחֲצִ֖ית הַ⁠שָּׁ֑קֶל	1	the half shekel	See how you translated this in [Exodus 3:13](../03/13.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-bmoney]])
-EXO	30	15	ew8p	figs-123person	נַפְשֹׁתֵי⁠כֶֽם	1	the half shekel	The plural form of you is used here. In many cases, since Yahweh is speaking to Moses about the people that will be counted, it may make more sense to change to the third person. However, Moses would be counted as well and would have to pay the ransom, so a form of you that could include Moses and all the other Israelite men would also be an appropriate translation. Alternate translation: “for their lives” (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-123person]])
+EXO	30	15	ew8p	figs-123person	נַפְשֹׁתֵי⁠כֶֽם	1	the half shekel	The plural form of you is used here. In many cases, since Yahweh is speaking to Moses about the people that will be counted, it may make more sense to change to the third person. However, Moses would be counted as well and would have to pay the ransom, so a form of you that could include Moses and all the other Israelite men would also be an appropriate translation. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-123person]])
 EXO	30	16	z6tn		וְ⁠הָיָה֩ לִ⁠בְנֵ֨י יִשְׂרָאֵ֤ל לְ⁠זִכָּרוֹן֙ לִ⁠פְנֵ֣י יְהוָ֔ה לְ⁠כַפֵּ֖ר עַל־נַפְשֹׁתֵי⁠כֶֽם	1	It must be a reminder to the Israelites before me, to make atonement for your lives	This sentence is very unclear. It is not clear who is being reminded of what. This could mean: (1) that it will remind Yahweh that the Israelites have given money for their lives, and therefore he should welcome them. (2) that it will remind the Israelites that they have given Yahweh money for their lives. Therefore, Yahweh will welcome them.
 EXO	30	16	mwix	figs-metonymy	לִ⁠פְנֵ֣י יְהוָ֔ה	1	It must be a reminder to the Israelites before me, to make atonement for your lives	Here, **face** figuratively represents the presence of Yahweh. Alternate translation: “before Yahweh” (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 EXO	30	18	v88y	translate-unknown	כִּיּ֥וֹר נְחֹ֛שֶׁת	1	bronze basin	Alternate translation: “bronze bowl” or “bronze tub” (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-unknown]])
 EXO	30	18	bh82		וְ⁠כַנּ֥⁠וֹ	1	a bronze stand	The **base** is what the basin would be put upon.
 EXO	30	18	iq8n		לְ⁠רָחְצָ֑ה	1	a basin for washing	This phrase, **for washing**, explains the purpose for which the priests were to use the bronze basin.
 EXO	30	19	ivb1		מִמֶּ֑⁠נּוּ	1	water in it	Alternate translation: “in the water in the basin”
-EXO	30	20	dyku	grammar-connect-logic-goal	וְ⁠לֹ֣א יָמֻ֑תוּ	1	water in it	The priests must wash in order that God would not put them to death. If the goal of some action needs to be placed elsewhere in the structure of your language, move it to the usual location. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/grammar-connect-logic-goal]])
+EXO	30	20	dyku	grammar-connect-logic-goal	וְ⁠לֹ֣א יָמֻ֑תוּ	1	water in it	The priests must wash so God would not kill them. If the goal of some action needs to be placed elsewhere in the structure of your language, move it to the usual location. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/grammar-connect-logic-goal]])
 EXO	30	20	it0h	grammar-connect-logic-goal	וְ⁠לֹ֣א יָמֻ֑תוּ	1	water in it	The priests must wash in order to remain alive. If the goal of some action needs to be placed elsewhere in the structure of your language move it to the usual location. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/grammar-connect-logic-goal]])
 EXO	30	21	hp35		וְ⁠הָיְתָ֨ה לָ⁠הֶ֧ם חָק־עוֹלָ֛ם ל֥⁠וֹ וּ⁠לְ⁠זַרְע֖⁠וֹ לְ⁠דֹרֹתָֽ⁠ם	1	for Aaron and his descendants throughout their people’s generations	See how you translated a similar phrase in [Exodus 12:17](../12/17.md).
 EXO	30	23	m9g7	translate-unknown	בְּשָׂמִ֣ים	1	spices	These are parts of dried plants (other than the leaves) which people grind into a powder and put in oil or food to give it a nice smell or flavor. See how you translated this in [Exodus 25:6](../25/06.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-unknown]])