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@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ REV	2	24	scu6	figs-abstractnouns	οὐκ ἔχουσιν τὴν διδαχὴν
 REV	2	24	d5i9	figs-metaphor	τὰ βαθέα	1	deep things	Here, the adjective **deep** describes matters that that the disciples of Jezebel consider to be profound and very important. The adherents to Jezebel's instruction kept this type of subject matter secret which they also thought to be **deep** in the sense of important or profound. Alternate translation: “the secret things” or "the profound matters" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 REV	2	24	y2t5	figs-possession	τὰ βαθέα τοῦ Σατανᾶ	1		Jesus is using the possessive form to describe **the deep things** that Satan supposedly taught the disciples of Jezebel. If this is not clear in your language, you could say the meaning explicitly with a verb. Alternate translation: “the deep things that Satan revealed to them" or "the deep things that Satan taught them" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-possession]])
 REV	2	24	sgil	figs-idiom	οὐ βάλλω ἐφ’ ὑμᾶς ἄλλο βάρος	1		Here, to **put any other burden** literally translates as "to throw another heavy load"  onto someone to carry in a metaphorical manner. The phrase is an idiom for requiring another difficult command or burdensome order that one must perform besides already existing commands. If this might confuse your readers, you could use an equivalent expression or explicit language. Alternate translation: "I do not place any other burden on you" or "I do not impose any other burden upon you" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-idiom]])
-REV	2	24	ikkh	grammar-connect-exceptions	οὐ βάλλω ἐφ’ ὑμᾶς ἄλλο βάρος	1		Here, **I do not put any other burden on you** expresses a connected thought with the next verse’s initial clause as well. The next verse’s initial clause combines the thought that Jesus is promising to not impose any more burdens of additional commands. However, Jesus’ promise of stipulating no more commands does not negate the instructions which Jesus has already imposed, as stated explicitly in the next verse’s initial clause. If it would appear in your language that Jesus was making a statement here with the next verse’s initial clause and then contradicting it, you could reword this to avoid using an exception clause. Alternate translate: \n"I do not throw any other burden upon you" or "I do not require any other burden from you"\n(See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/grammar-connect-exceptions]])
+REV	2	24	ikkh	grammar-connect-exceptions	οὐ βάλλω ἐφ’ ὑμᾶς ἄλλο βάρος	1		Here, **other** refers to the phrase “what you have” in the next verse. In other words, Jesus is saying that he will not give these people any additional command beyond what they already have from him. If this is confusing or if it would appear in your language that Jesus was making a statement here and then contradicting it in the next verse, you could connect these ideas in a different way. If you do this, you will need to delete the word “However” in the next verse. Alternate translation: “the only burden I will put on you is this:” or “I will only burden you with obeying what I have already commanded you” (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/grammar-connect-exceptions]])
 REV	2	25	tfzk	grammar-connect-exceptions	πλὴν ὃ ἔχετε	1		Here, **what you have** expresses the idea from the previous clause in the previous verse. The previous verse's last clause indicates that Jesus promises to not impose any more burdens of additional commands. However, Jesus' promise of stipulating no more commands does not negate the instructions which Jesus has already imposed, as stated explicitly in this phrase here. If it would appear in your language that Jesus was making a statement here with the previous verse and then contradicting it, you could reword this to avoid using an exception clause. Alternate translate: "Except only what you have" or "Just what you have already" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/grammar-connect-exceptions]])
 REV	2	25	vgxm	figs-idiom	κρατήσατε	1		See how you translated the verb to **hold on tightly to** in [Revelation 2:13](../02/13.md) (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-idiom]])
 REV	2	26	z5xi	figs-metaphor	ὁ νικῶν	1	The one who conquers	See how you translated this phrase in [Revelation 2:7](../02/07.md). Alternate translation: “Anyone who conquers" or "All who conquer" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])