From 8498437341c869609db43ef4ff584145f6a083c2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Richard Mahn Date: Sun, 11 Jun 2023 15:08:48 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Update 'tn_GEN.tsv' --- tn_GEN.tsv | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/tn_GEN.tsv b/tn_GEN.tsv index a40fbcc579..48c57da486 100644 --- a/tn_GEN.tsv +++ b/tn_GEN.tsv @@ -5702,7 +5702,7 @@ front:intro d9wn 0 # Introduction to Genesis\n\n## Part 1: General Introducti 47:20 fxi5 rc://*/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit וַ⁠יִּ֨קֶן יוֹסֵ֜ף 1 For some languages it may be necessary to make explicit that Joseph agreed to do what the people suggested. Do what is best in your language. Alternate translation: “So Joseph agreed and bought” or “Joseph did what they asked and bought” 47:20 aon4 אֶת כָּל אַדְמַ֤ת מִצְרַ֨יִם֙ לְ⁠פַרְעֹ֔ה 1 Alternate translation: “all the farmland in the country of Egypt for Pharaoh.” 47:20 b8rh כִּֽי מָכְר֤וּ מִצְרַ֨יִם֙ אִ֣ישׁ שָׂדֵ֔⁠הוּ 1 Consider whether or not it is better in your language to begin a new sentence here. Alternate translation: “All the Egyptians gave their fields to him in exchange for grain” -47:20 s34v כִּֽי־ & הָ⁠רָעָ֑ב 2 Consider again how you translated **famine** in the book of Genesis. See Gen 12:10; 26:1; 41:27, 30-31, 36, 50, 54-57; 42:5; 43:1; 45:6, 11; 47:4, 13, 20. It may be necessary to translate it in different ways, depending on the context. Alternate translation: “because the food scarcity” +47:20 s34v כִּֽי־ & הָ⁠רָעָ֑ב 1 Consider again how you translated **famine** in the book of Genesis. See Gen 12:10; 26:1; 41:27, 30-31, 36, 50, 54-57; 42:5; 43:1; 45:6, 11; 47:4, 13, 20. It may be necessary to translate it in different ways, depending on the context. Alternate translation: “because the food scarcity” 47:20 ddcp rc://*/ta/man/translate/figs-infostructure חָזַ֥ק עֲלֵ⁠הֶ֖ם 1 See how you translated **heavy** in verses 4 and 13. For some languages, it may be clearer or more natural to change the order of clauses in this verse and say, “The famine was very severe for all the Egyptian people, so Joseph agreed with their request/suggestion and let them sell their fields to him in exchange for grain/food. In that way, Joseph/he bought/acquired all the land/farmland in the country of Egypt for King Pharaoh, so that all the land became Pharaoh’s property.” Do what is best in your language. Alternate translation: “was very severe” or “was so severe that they did not have enough to eat.” 47:20 dnbd וַ⁠תְּהִ֥י הָ⁠אָ֖רֶץ לְ⁠פַרְעֹֽה 1 Alternate translation: “That is how all the farmland eventually belonged to King Pharaoh.” 47:21 ioj0 rc://*/ta/man/translate/translate-textvariants וְ⁠אֶ֨ת הָ⁠עָ֔ם הֶעֱבִ֥יר אֹת֖⁠וֹ לֶ⁠עָרִ֑ים 1 The Masoretic Hebrew text has **moved them to the cities** here, which Joseph may have done in order to make the grain more readily accessible to them. The Samaritan Pentateuch (a different Hebrew version) and the Septuagint (Greek translation of the Hebrew text) have “made the people slaves” instead, which may refer to the fact that all the people would now be working for Pharaoh, since all the fields belonged to him. The textual variant that is not used in your translation could be put in a footnote. Alternate translation: “Joseph also moved all the people from their farmlands to the nearby cities”