From 7e85093129fbecfddbb3de02f250ccef7c4a50bb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Grant_Ailie Date: Wed, 21 Jul 2021 16:14:09 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Update 'en_tn_15-EZR.tsv' (#1928) Reviewed-on: https://git.door43.org/unfoldingWord/en_tn/pulls/1928 Co-authored-by: Grant_Ailie Co-committed-by: Grant_Ailie --- en_tn_15-EZR.tsv | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/en_tn_15-EZR.tsv b/en_tn_15-EZR.tsv index ba9ab2a4f1..325b66c79f 100644 --- a/en_tn_15-EZR.tsv +++ b/en_tn_15-EZR.tsv @@ -587,7 +587,7 @@ EZR 6 2 vcxt grammar-connect-logic-result וְ⁠הִשְׁתְּכַ֣ח…מְ EZR 6 2 i390 figs-explicit וְ⁠הִשְׁתְּכַ֣ח…מְגִלָּ֣ה חֲדָ֑ה 1 a scroll was found It is implied that the officials searched before they found the scroll. If it would be clearer in your language, you can say that explicitly. Alternate translation: “After searching in the archives, they found one scroll” (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]]) EZR 6 2 gfa8 figs-activepassive וְ⁠הִשְׁתְּכַ֣ח…מְגִלָּ֣ה חֲדָ֑ה 1 a scroll was found If it would be clearer in your language, you could say this with an active form, and you could say who did the action. Alternate translation: “As a result, the officials found one scroll” (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) EZR 6 2 f8w5 translate-names בְּ⁠אַחְמְתָ֗א…דִּ֛י בְּ⁠מָדַ֥י מְדִינְתָּ֖⁠ה 1 Ecbatana **Ecbatana** is the name of a city, and **Media** is the name of the province in which it was located. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]]) -EZR 6 2 lrvg translate-names וְ⁠כֵן־כְּתִ֥יב בְּ⁠גַוַּ֖⁠הּ דִּכְרוֹנָֽ⁠ה 1 Ecbatana If it would be clearer in your language, you could say this with an active form. Alternate translation: “and the writing in the scroll said this” or “and the message in the scroll was”(See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) +EZR 6 2 lrvg figs-activepassive וְ⁠כֵן־כְּתִ֥יב בְּ⁠גַוַּ֖⁠הּ דִּכְרוֹנָֽ⁠ה 1 Ecbatana If it would be clearer in your language, you could say this with an active form. Alternate translation: “and the writing in the scroll said this” or “and the message in the scroll was”(See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) EZR 6 3 i2dk figs-quotemarks בִּ⁠שְׁנַ֨ת חֲדָ֜ה לְ⁠כ֣וֹרֶשׁ מַלְכָּ֗⁠א 1 General Information: Here the book begins to quote what was said on the scroll that the officials found in Ecbatana. It may be helpful to your readers to indicate this with an opening quotation mark or with whatever other punctuation or convention your language uses to indicate the beginning of a quotation. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-quotemarks]]) EZR 6 3 ev3b translate-ordinal בִּ⁠שְׁנַ֨ת חֲדָ֜ה לְ⁠כ֣וֹרֶשׁ מַלְכָּ֗⁠א 1 In the first year of King Cyrus The Hebrew uses a cardinal number here, **one**, but there is not a significant difference in meaning between that and the way the Hebrew uses an ordinal number, “first,” in similar contexts elsewhere. If your language customarily uses ordinals for the numbers of years, you can do that here in your translation. Alternate translation: “In the first year of the reign of Cyrus as king” (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-ordinal]]) EZR 6 3 lyht translate-names לְ⁠כ֣וֹרֶשׁ 1 In the first year of King Cyrus **Cyrus** is the name of a man. See how you translated it in [1:1](../01/01.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])