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@@ -5,9 +5,9 @@ REV	1	1	kv41	translate/translate-names	ἀποκάλυψις Ἰησοῦ Χρι
 REV	1	1	ik5v		τοῖς δούλοις αὐτοῦ	1	his servants	Here, **his slaves** refers to people who believe in Jesus Christ. Alternative translation: "his servants"
 REV	1	1	x8bu		ἃ δεῖ γενέσθαι ἐν τάχει	1	what must soon take place	Alternate translation: “the events that must happen soon”
 REV	1	1	kez4	writing-pronoun	ἐσήμανεν	1	made it known	Alternate translation: “He communicated it.” The subject of the sentence is a pronoun that refers to Jesus Christ. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-pronoun]])
-REV	1	1	pb4u	figs-123person	τῷ δούλῳ αὐτοῦ, Ἰωάννῃ	1	to his servant John	The Apostle **John** wrote this book and was referring to himself here. Alternate translation: “to me, John, his servant” (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-123person]])
-REV	1	2	tgts	writing-pronoun	ὃς ἐμαρτύρησεν	1		Alternate translation: “He affirmed.” The subject of the sentence is a relative pronoun that refers to the author John. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-pronoun]])
-REV	1	2	va4c		τὸν λόγον τοῦ Θεοῦ	1	the word of God	Alternate translation: “the message that God spoke”
+REV	1	1	pb4u	figs-123person	τῷ δούλῳ αὐτοῦ, Ἰωάννῃ	1	to his servant John	The Apostle **John** wrote this book and was referring to himself here. Alternate translation: “to me, John, his servant” (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-123person]])\n\n\n\n
+REV	1	2	tgts	writing-pronoun	ὃς ἐμαρτύρησεν	1		The subject of this sentence is the author John. If this might confuse your readers, you could say the meaning explicitly. Alternate translation: “John testified” (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-pronoun]])\n
+REV	1	2	va4c	figs-metonymy	τὸν λόγον τοῦ Θεοῦ	1	the word of God	Here, John uses **word** figuratively to refer to the message that God said by using words. If this might confuse your readers, you could say the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: “the message that God spoke” (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 REV	1	2	wb7z	figs-abstractnouns	τὴν μαρτυρίαν Ἰησοῦ Χριστοῦ	1		If your language does not use an abstract noun for the idea of **testimony**, you could express the same idea in another way. Alternate translation: “what Jesus Christ testified” (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-abstractnouns]])
 REV	1	2	b5se	figs-possession	τὴν μαρτυρίαν Ἰησοῦ Χριστοῦ	1	the testimony of Jesus Christ	John is using the possessive form to describe the **testimony** that **Jesus Christ** has given about the personal revelation received directly from God. If this is not clear in your language, you could say the meaning explicitly. Alternate translation: “the testimony that Jesus Christ has given him” (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-possession]])
 REV	1	3	le65	figs-genericnoun	ὁ ἀναγινώσκων	1	the one who reads aloud	Here, **the one who reads** does not refer to a specific person. It refers to anyone **who reads** the words of the prophecy aloud or in public. If your readers would misunderstand this, you could use a more natural phrase. Alternate translation: “anyone who reads aloud” (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-genericnoun]])