From 1ea357abe4d67ea22044660d23db6abef8312d57 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Tue, 11 Jul 2017 13:46:48 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Edit on Jer 3:3 Rework from note of Henry Whitney. Thanks, Tom Warren --- jer/03/03.md | 11 ++++------- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/jer/03/03.md b/jer/03/03.md index 9d9d2a5b77..df1ef76d76 100644 --- a/jer/03/03.md +++ b/jer/03/03.md @@ -1,14 +1,11 @@ -# So the spring rains were withheld +# So the showers have been withheld -This can be stated in active form. AT: "So I withheld the spring rains from you" or "So I prevented the spring rains from falling" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) +This can be stated in active form. AT: "So I withheld the showers from you" or "So I prevented the rains from falling" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) -# But your face is arrogant +# you have the forehead of a prostitute -The arrogance showing on a person's face is spoken of as if the face itself were arrogant. AT: "But the expression on your face shows that you arrogant" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) +The arrogance showing on a person's face is spoken of as if the face itself were arrogant. AT: "But the expression on your face shows that you arrogant, like the face of a prostitute" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) -# a promiscuous woman - -a woman who sleeps with many men # Have you not just now called to me: 'My father ... end?'