From f0090fcfa98603639fdff6fa9cf38dad1ca707ec Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Grant_Ailie <grant_ailie@noreply.door43.org>
Date: Tue, 19 Apr 2022 19:54:35 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Update 'docs/gl_appendixB.rst'

Replaced passive "If this would be misunderstood in your language" in 4 TN templates with updated non-passive phrase
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@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ See `figs-idiom <https://git.door43.org/unfoldingWord/en_ta/src/branch/master/tr
 
 *he has visited … his people* (Luke 1:68)
 
-Here, the term **visited** is an idiom meaning “helped.” If this would be misunderstood in your language, you could use an equivalent idiom or use plain language. Alternate translation: “he has come to help … his people” (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-idiom]])
+Here, the term **visited** is an idiom meaning “helped.” If your readers would not understand this, you could use an equivalent idiom or use plain language. Alternate translation: “he has come to help … his people” (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-idiom]])
 
 
 Irony
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ See `figs-metonymy <https://git.door43.org/unfoldingWord/en_ta/src/branch/master
 
 *something from his mouth* (Luke 11:54)
 
-Luke is figuratively describing something Jesus would say by association with his **mouth**, which he would use to say something. If this would be misunderstood in your language, you could use an equivalent expression or plain language. Alternate translation: “something he said” (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
+Luke is figuratively describing something Jesus would say by association with his **mouth**, which he would use to say something. If your readers would not understand this, you could use an equivalent expression or plain language. Alternate translation: “something he said” (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 
 
 Parallelism
@@ -603,10 +603,10 @@ See `writing-quotations <https://git.door43.org/unfoldingWord/en_ta/src/branch/m
 Consider natural ways of introducing direct quotations in your language. Alternate translation: “prophesied, and this is what he said” or “prophesied this:” (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-quotations]])
 
 *But just as it is written* (1 Cor 2:9)
-In Paul’s culture, **just as it is written** is a normal way to introduce a quotation from an important text, in this case, the Old Testament book written by Isaiah the prophet. If this would be misunderstood in your language, you could use a comparable phrase that indicates that Paul is quoting from an important text. Alternate translation: “as it can be read in the Old Testament” or “according to Isaiah the prophet” (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-quotations)
+In Paul’s culture, **just as it is written** is a normal way to introduce a quotation from an important text, in this case, the Old Testament book written by Isaiah the prophet. If your readers would not understand this, you could use a comparable phrase that indicates that Paul is quoting from an important text. Alternate translation: “as it can be read in the Old Testament” or “according to Isaiah the prophet” (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-quotations)
 
 *for Isaiah had again said* (John 12:39 ULT)
-This phrase introduces a quotation from the Old Testament book written by **Isaiah** the prophet ([Isaiah 6:10](../../isa/06/10.md)) which occurs in the next verse. If this would be misunderstood in your language, you could use a comparable phrase that indicates that John is quoting from an important text. Alternate translation: “for Isaiah had again said in the Old Testament” or “for according to Isaiah” (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-quotations]])
+This phrase introduces a quotation from the Old Testament book written by **Isaiah** the prophet ([Isaiah 6:10](../../isa/06/10.md)) which occurs in the next verse. If your readers would not understand this, you could use a comparable phrase that indicates that John is quoting from an important text. Alternate translation: “for Isaiah had again said in the Old Testament” or “for according to Isaiah” (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-quotations]])
 
 
 Direct and Indirect Quotations