8d09eab5c0
Romans 6:15 cut dialog and change wording
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Romans 6:15 cut dialog and change wording
2016-07-08 14:35:17 -04:00
4b9a2c0ace
Romans 6:13 change wording
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Romans 6:13 change wording
2016-07-08 14:29:58 -04:00
82ee15e3fb
Romans 6:11 change word
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Romans 6:11 change word
2016-07-08 14:18:40 -04:00
a911e36b8d
Romans 6:1-2 change wording
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Romans 6:1-2 change wording
2016-07-08 13:49:58 -04:00
f2fce5e102
Update 05.usfm
2016-07-08 13:47:19 -04:00
2e411b65c1
Romans 5:18 change wording
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Romans 5:18 change wording to avoid limiting Christ's obedience to only his death.
2016-07-08 13:44:17 -04:00
22c556723a
Romans 5:13 change wording
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Romans 5:13 change wording
2016-07-08 13:38:50 -04:00
9a1fbb55c9
Romans 5:12 cut narrative not in text
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Romans 5:12 cut narrative not in text
2016-07-08 13:36:23 -04:00
98c3276857
Romans 5:10 change wording
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Romans 5:10 change wording
2016-07-08 13:32:52 -04:00
9e2595734d
Romans 5:9 simplify wording
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Romans 5:9 simplify wording and sentence structure
2016-07-08 13:29:09 -04:00
0d39e8372d
Romans 4:25 change wording
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Romans 4:25 change wording
2016-07-08 13:16:59 -04:00
fcc29bf063
Romans 4:21 change wording
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Romans 4:21 change wording
2016-07-08 13:13:38 -04:00
5ceb5c03ac
Romans 4:18 simplify wording & order
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Romans 4:18 simplify wording & order of ideas
2016-07-08 13:11:38 -04:00
262e463f19
Romans 4:17 change separate paragraph
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Romans 4:17 change separate paragraph to become part of verse 17. Also simplified the wording.
2016-07-08 13:05:47 -04:00
e138a20f3c
Romans 4:16-17 simplify wording and sentences
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Romans 4:16-17 simplify wording and sentence structure
2016-07-08 13:03:12 -04:00
e8b2c690d3
Update 04.usfm
2016-07-08 12:54:42 -04:00
86f7a27779
Update 04.usfm
2016-07-08 12:54:06 -04:00
725a53349e
Romans 4:11 simplify wording
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Romans 4:11 simplify wording
2016-07-08 12:52:54 -04:00
46b7fbc721
Romans 3:31 cut the imaginary dialog
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Romans 3:31 cut the imaginary dialog
2016-07-08 12:34:38 -04:00
b29fd8a5de
Romans 3:24 change wording
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Romans 3:24 change wording to reflect the action of Christ for us beyond only his death.
2016-07-08 12:04:06 -04:00
24b83c7565
Romans 3:21 change wording
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Romans 3:21 change wording for clarity
2016-07-08 12:01:14 -04:00
e3750f7dc7
Romans 3:19-20 change wording
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Romans 3:19-20 change wording and punctuation for clarity
2016-07-08 11:54:56 -04:00
a79ddcc9c3
Romans 3:9 cut dialog
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Romans 3:9 cut dialog
2016-07-08 11:35:58 -04:00
c8cc398737
Romans 3:5-8 clear up dialog
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Romans 3:5-8 clear up dialog
2016-07-08 11:30:02 -04:00
5a597196f5
Romans 3:3-4 cut dialog
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Romans 3:3-4 cut imaginary dialog since this is not needed and not in the text
2016-07-08 11:14:21 -04:00
8014f3ca37
Romans 3:1-2 change wording
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Romans 3:1-2 change wording from a direct quote (not in the text) and the imaginary dialog.
2016-07-08 11:10:57 -04:00
8d89082596
Romans 2:25 correct verb number
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Romans 2:25 correct verb number
2016-07-08 11:00:34 -04:00
3592323645
Romans 2:24 cut extra sentence
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Romans 2:24 cut extra sentence, "The non-Jews say God must be a hypocrite if he tolerates the behavior of people like you."
2016-07-08 10:59:33 -04:00
6632df2e73
Romans 2:20 cut extra word
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Romans 2:20 cut extra word "in" and change "what" from "you have __ the law __ teaches you"
2016-07-08 10:56:32 -04:00
7554a08bb2
Romans 2:16 change wording
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Romans 2:16 change wording to shorten and simplify the sentence structure. The idea of secret is central, not an added feature.
2016-07-08 10:53:15 -04:00
cbcef77589
Romans 2:12 change wording
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Romans 2:12 change wording to shorten the text.
2016-07-08 10:43:22 -04:00
195645294f
Romans 2:1 cut added wording
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Romans 2:1 cut added wording that is too interpretive and not in the text at all.
2016-07-08 10:21:44 -04:00
8d9b792854
Romans 1:27 change wording
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Romans 1:27 change wording from, "As a result, God has punished them by sicknesses in their bodies, which is what they deserve." to what you see. To ascribe the agency to God is true ultimately but is too much to read out of the text and is likely offensive to some. The more immediate agency is the physical effects of such behavior that have become obvious in our context as well.
2016-07-08 10:14:32 -04:00
23c0c899f7
Rom 1:14 change wording
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Romans 1:14 change the loaded terms "educated and to those who are uneducated" to what you see. There are many MTTs and their readers who may not have much formal education, but still have good discretion and ability to learn. Besides, this does not convey the idea of "wise" and "foolish" in the text.
2016-07-08 09:52:45 -04:00
b9825095a1
Romans 1:5 change wording
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Romans 1:5 change wording of "among the non-Jewish people groups" to what you see. The Greek says "all the people groups" and that includes the Jews, of course, and Paul certainly included them in his ministry.
2016-07-06 09:31:43 -04:00
Tom Warren
c36ddc9ebd
dead / unable to have children
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matching the ULB
2016-07-05 22:27:19 -04:00
Tom Warren
bc5d64d4f2
2:12 and 13
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Rework in Nepal with MTT
2016-06-30 04:16:41 -04:00
7273f16096
Update 01.usfm
2016-06-17 11:23:20 -04:00
a4422f8cdb
Romans 1:29-31 trimmed the necessary repetition
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Romans 1:29-31 trimmed the necessary repetition of "They strongly desire to ..." and "Many ..."
2016-06-17 11:21:23 -04:00
1beeba382f
Romans 1:18 change referent in clause
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Romans 1:18 change "everyone in the "who" clause to "all" and the number of the verbs "show" and "do" to match. This also matches with the "them" in the next sentence.
2016-06-17 10:55:26 -04:00
062ee7b7f7
Romans 1:7 added "in Rome"
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Romans 1:7 added "in Rome" since this is in the Greek, helps the idea along, and does not hinder the flow of style.
2016-06-17 10:30:35 -04:00
9c7ae84fdf
Romans 1:1 correct verb number
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Romans 1:1 correct the number (singular) of the the verb "serve(s)"
2016-06-16 19:57:10 -04:00
886a5b9b67
Update 07.usfm
2016-05-31 11:04:58 -04:00
Tom Warren
07ef4887a9
Rewrite
2016-05-23 12:19:22 -04:00
0bf056abec
Update 06.usfm
2016-05-18 08:15:17 -04:00
f757a3ee0e
Update 06.usfm
2016-05-18 08:10:48 -04:00
Tom Warren
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Update 16.usfm
2016-05-17 11:37:35 -04:00
Tom Warren
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Footnote
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Following the ULB, the footnote is added for clarity.
2016-05-17 11:35:08 -04:00
2fe958666d
Update 06.usfm
2016-05-17 09:55:46 -04:00
49f0e3960c
Update 06.usfm
2016-05-17 09:54:07 -04:00
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