6632df2e73
Romans 2:20 cut extra word
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Romans 2:20 cut extra word "in" and change "what" from "you have __ the law __ teaches you"
2016-07-08 10:56:32 -04:00
7554a08bb2
Romans 2:16 change wording
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Romans 2:16 change wording to shorten and simplify the sentence structure. The idea of secret is central, not an added feature.
2016-07-08 10:53:15 -04:00
cbcef77589
Romans 2:12 change wording
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Romans 2:12 change wording to shorten the text.
2016-07-08 10:43:22 -04:00
195645294f
Romans 2:1 cut added wording
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Romans 2:1 cut added wording that is too interpretive and not in the text at all.
2016-07-08 10:21:44 -04:00
8d9b792854
Romans 1:27 change wording
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Romans 1:27 change wording from, "As a result, God has punished them by sicknesses in their bodies, which is what they deserve." to what you see. To ascribe the agency to God is true ultimately but is too much to read out of the text and is likely offensive to some. The more immediate agency is the physical effects of such behavior that have become obvious in our context as well.
2016-07-08 10:14:32 -04:00
23c0c899f7
Rom 1:14 change wording
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Romans 1:14 change the loaded terms "educated and to those who are uneducated" to what you see. There are many MTTs and their readers who may not have much formal education, but still have good discretion and ability to learn. Besides, this does not convey the idea of "wise" and "foolish" in the text.
2016-07-08 09:52:45 -04:00
1f9a3d1210
Update 04.usfm
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reversed previous change:
"who meets"
changed back to
"that meets"
(because it is "the group ... that meets")
2016-07-08 08:07:25 -05:00
9838b750b5
Update 04.usfm
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"that meets"
changed to:
"who meet"
2016-07-08 08:03:36 -05:00
Henry Whitney
febc048de0
corrected misspelling
2016-07-08 07:45:29 -04:00
ba35245061
Update 02.usfm
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"But he is like... "
changed to:
"He is like..."
"But" is not there and is not needed, and in fact seems to confuse.
2016-07-08 06:22:52 -05:00
7bb2595289
Update 24.usfm
2016-07-07 17:06:47 -04:00
ab8242429c
Update 23.usfm
2016-07-07 17:05:23 -04:00
d053cb93b0
Update 23.usfm
2016-07-07 17:04:09 -04:00
7a1dbd7413
Update 23.usfm
2016-07-07 17:03:25 -04:00
Henry Whitney
45cd299dfa
3:19 "who" for "that" relative pronoun
2016-07-07 16:49:58 -04:00
e400b0b43b
Update 06.usfm
2016-07-07 16:36:27 -04:00
2a5714e6ce
Update 05.usfm
2016-07-07 16:34:15 -04:00
762be3550f
Update 04.usfm
2016-07-07 16:23:13 -04:00
17462525c9
Update 11.usfm
2016-07-07 16:19:44 -04:00
f279c67234
Update 15.usfm
2016-07-07 16:15:08 -04:00
677d4b3b21
Update 22.usfm
2016-07-07 16:06:03 -04:00
46cc61d9f1
Update 22.usfm
2016-07-07 16:05:11 -04:00
7ae7ae89ec
Update 22.usfm
2016-07-07 16:01:37 -04:00
78e5a170c7
Update 01.usfm
2016-07-07 14:54:08 -05:00
2630e2b01c
Update 02.usfm
2016-07-07 15:34:29 -04:00
3a8ca5ac3c
Update 05.usfm
2016-07-07 15:32:20 -04:00
a2b50fac44
Update 04.usfm
2016-07-07 15:30:22 -04:00
4d550a58a2
Update 02.usfm
2016-07-07 15:23:00 -04:00
1760b17980
Act 7:10 - removed space before period in UDB
2016-07-07 14:12:53 -04:00
14aec22a3b
Update 10.usfm
2016-07-07 12:52:16 -04:00
9ad9d978ad
Update 10.usfm
2016-07-07 12:44:34 -04:00
12111e7b97
Update 02.usfm
2016-07-07 11:37:29 -04:00
2f34d372b2
Update 01.usfm
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"We pray that you will do every good thing that he tells you to do."
changed to:
"We pray that grow to understand God more and do every good thing that he tells you to do."
The phrase "grow in the knowledge of God" was not translated here in the UDB.
2016-07-07 09:14:07 -05:00
9d00926ed0
Update 01.usfm
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"live in a way that others will honor the Lord for"
changed to:
"live in a way that will help others honor the Lord also"
2016-07-07 09:06:21 -05:00
a6947973ae
Update 01.usfm
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v. 6: "... will give much a very large harvest."
changed to:
"will give a very large harvest."
2016-07-07 08:24:59 -05:00
8724fd7e53
Update 10.usfm
2016-07-07 09:23:30 -04:00
3af457ab8a
Update 03.usfm
2016-07-07 09:20:54 -04:00
98ea13e9fa
Update 10.usfm
2016-07-07 08:44:17 -04:00
c5505392b6
Update 13.usfm
2016-07-06 16:33:01 -04:00
78666d05c7
Update 13.usfm
2016-07-06 16:27:37 -04:00
Henry Whitney
1bc978f45b
Col 3:6 wrath is more than anger
2016-07-06 15:04:55 -04:00
Henry Whitney
45cc2ae3a5
Col 3:5
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It is the desire that needs to be killed, as it is innate to the
person, not the things one desires to do, which are exterior.
2016-07-06 15:02:18 -04:00
Henry Whitney
ac1f6add31
zapped extraneous spaces
2016-07-06 14:40:05 -04:00
Henry Whitney
2a8dd5c6ac
explicating ULB in UDB
2016-07-06 13:11:21 -04:00
Henry Whitney
3cbde184a6
smoothed punctuation
2016-07-06 13:04:48 -04:00
Henry Whitney
243fbcac42
swapped in more commonly used synonym
2016-07-06 12:37:07 -04:00
Tom Warren
6c609312f4
chunk
2016-07-06 11:18:53 -04:00
Henry Whitney
04e047a9dc
Changed reflexive to emphatic
2016-07-06 10:14:15 -04:00
Henry Whitney
c8ef76b52a
zapped dittography
2016-07-06 09:40:10 -04:00
b9825095a1
Romans 1:5 change wording
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Romans 1:5 change wording of "among the non-Jewish people groups" to what you see. The Greek says "all the people groups" and that includes the Jews, of course, and Paul certainly included them in his ministry.
2016-07-06 09:31:43 -04:00
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