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68 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
Henry Whitney 46658226e3 New toc1&toc2 2016-08-02 16:50:51 -04:00
Hanker10 0f0b417d6c Judges 21:25 change wording
Judges 21:25 change wording from "as they saw it." to what you see since this is a more explanatory rendering of the hebraism of the last phrase.
2016-07-30 13:56:37 -04:00
Hanker10 e91b3af8e1 Judges 21:19 change wording
Judges 21:19 change wording to comply with the Hebrew. There is no mention one man having the idea. It was a group decision.
2016-07-30 13:52:10 -04:00
Hanker10 c1261efd6e Judges 20:16 correct the wording
Judges 20:16 correct the wording. Took out the "at" in the phrase, "without missing __ a target"
2016-07-29 21:29:19 -04:00
Hanker10 bea8cef085 Judges 20:10 add wording
Judges 20:10 add wording
2016-07-29 21:26:52 -04:00
Hanker10 a0d59c6086 Judges 20:5 change wording as before
Judges 20:5 change wording as before in 19:22 to avoid "sleep" for the euphemism for sex when it is a violent act. Also, the same word for the concubine was changed to "raped"
2016-07-29 21:17:34 -04:00
Hanker10 f083e87fdf Judges 20:3 correct the wording
Judges 20:3 correct the wording. The clause, "but none of the men from their tribe went to the meeting there" is not in the text and is an explanation that is not in the notes. I changed it slightly to clarify the explanation.
2016-07-29 21:12:47 -04:00
Hanker10 9ddcf61c1f Judges 20:1 correct the wording
Judges 20:1 correct the wording "at one men" should be as you see.
2016-07-29 21:06:50 -04:00
Hanker10 b9fb338fd6 Judges 19:25 change wording
Judges 19:25 change wording for the same reason as in verse 22
2016-07-29 19:25:31 -04:00
Hanker10 088f2dc690 Judges 19:22 change wording
Judges 19:22 change wording from "we can sleep with him" to what you see. Under these violent circumstances, to "sleep" would be impossible so it is better to be more explicit. The Hebrew says, "to know" which is euphemism for the sex act.
2016-07-29 19:15:41 -04:00
Hanker10 895dfbcf86 Judges 19:20 change wording
Judges 19:20 change wording from, "I wish that things will go well for you, but I would like to provide what you need" to what you see. This fits better with the text and the idea of the old man's benediction.
2016-07-29 19:06:04 -04:00
Hanker10 92aa4f6336 Judges 18:7 change wording
Judges 18:7 change wording since "The next day" is not in the text and the time spent with Micah is not specified.
2016-07-29 18:39:16 -04:00
Hanker10 2ffe974f67 Judges 18:3 add "him"
Judges 18:3 add "him"
2016-07-29 18:36:35 -04:00
Hanker10 9b1c2476a8 Judges 17:3 change wording
Judges 17:3 change wording from "I will give some of this silver" to what you see. The whole 1,100 pieces were dedicated, not only a portion. Her infraction was that after dedicating it, she only used about 20% for Yahweh.
2016-07-29 18:28:58 -04:00
Hanker10 670e53e874 Judges 17:2 cut extra clause
Judges 17:2 cut extra clause, "for admitting that you took it" since this is not in the Hebrew and is not the reason she blessed Micah. She blessed him to countermand the curse she had uttered earlier.
2016-07-29 18:26:18 -04:00
Hanker10 6fb5be2311 Judges 16:29 change wording
Judges 16:29 change wording
2016-07-29 18:15:36 -04:00
Hanker10 4a349cf965 Judges 16:12 cut extra clause
Judges 16:12 cut extra clause, "while he was sleeping" since this time the text does not say Samson was sleeping. That happens in the next time.
2016-07-29 17:32:37 -04:00
Hanker10 2dda268043 Update 15.usfm 2016-07-29 17:17:12 -04:00
Hanker10 672c8de6e8 Judges 14:8 drop clause
Judges 14:8 drop clause, " after other creatures had eaten all the flesh," because it is not in the Hebrew or the ULB and is an assumption about the state of the lion's carcass.
2016-07-29 16:58:17 -04:00
Hanker10 d880982611 Judges 14:8&9 change "skeleton" to "carcass"
Judges 14:8&9 change "skeleton" to "carcass".
2016-07-29 16:56:26 -04:00
Hanker10 90e7d3922c Judges 1:19 change "Yahweh" to "he"
Judges 1:19 change "Yahweh" to "he"
2016-07-29 16:21:14 -04:00
Tom Warren 0a04ac61b5 Caps changes 2016-07-28 20:35:16 -04:00
Hanker10 381614eaf4 Judges 11:24 clarify wording
Judges 11:24 clarify wording.
2016-07-28 18:40:28 -04:00
Hanker10 809cf92835 Judges 11:18 change geographical reference
Judges 11:18 change geographical reference that was wrong.
2016-07-28 18:36:50 -04:00
Hanker10 5054d4050a Judges 11:13 change wording
Judges 11:13 change wording to clarify
2016-07-28 18:31:43 -04:00
Hanker10 a84f59bed9 Judges 11:11 change wording
Judges 11:11 change wording to clarify
2016-07-28 18:29:09 -04:00
Hanker10 ac3c5141d1 Judges 10:16 change wording
Judges 10:16 change wording
2016-07-28 18:22:34 -04:00
Hanker10 09ed5718f0 Judges 9:20 add wording
Judges 9:20 add wording to comply with the ULB and the Hebrew.
2016-07-28 16:49:52 -04:00
Hanker10 319d4e1249 Judges 8:1-17 change spellings
Judges 8:1-17 change spellings of Abi Ezer and Peniel to comply with Hebrew and the ULB
2016-07-28 16:23:20 -04:00
Hanker10 bc6287b0c0 Update 07.usfm 2016-07-28 16:14:30 -04:00
Hanker10 c2161c6ec0 Judges 7:2 change wording
Judges 7:2 change wording
2016-07-28 15:58:22 -04:00
Hanker10 7882c34bc9 Judges 6:27 add "ten of" to comply with text
Judges 6:27 add "ten of" to comply with text
2016-07-28 15:46:24 -04:00
Hanker10 461fae2d81 Judges 6:26 change word from "cook" to "burn"
Judges 6:26 change word from "cook" to "burn" since they did not cook the offering but burned it.
2016-07-28 15:44:13 -04:00
Hanker10 96d072706a Judges 6:14 change wording
Judges 6:14 change wording
2016-07-28 15:20:20 -04:00
Hanker10 7e41313980 Judges 6:6 change wording
Judges 6:6 change wording to clarify the reference of the pronoun. Besides, this is closer to the Hebrew.
2016-07-28 15:12:02 -04:00
Hanker10 2588dcbec0 Judges 6:5 change wording
Judges 6:5 change wording
2016-07-28 15:09:34 -04:00
Hanker10 5ded7ec722 Judges 6:4 change wording
Judges 6:4 change wording
2016-07-28 15:07:27 -04:00
Hanker10 4eb15143f9 Update 05.usfm 2016-07-28 15:01:32 -04:00
Hanker10 412a87a269 Update 05.usfm 2016-07-28 15:00:49 -04:00
Hanker10 d25321feb9 Update 05.usfm 2016-07-28 14:59:54 -04:00
Hanker10 5ed7692a13 Judges 5:27 add wording for repetition
Judges 5:27 add wording for repetition since that is an important element in the power of this poetry.
2016-07-28 14:57:21 -04:00
Hanker10 ca67ab364b Judges 5:13 change wording
Judges 5:13 change wording to cut "Mount Tabor" since that is not in the Hebrew (or ASV). The people came down from the highlands where they had been hiding from the oppressors.
2016-07-28 14:32:28 -04:00
Hanker10 64138091c4 Judges 5:7 change wording
Judges 5:7 change wording to make better sense. The original is very uncertain here since it is the only use of the Hebrew word and sounds like other words that could make equally good sense. This choice makes clearer sense within the context.
2016-07-28 14:04:52 -04:00
Hanker10 a5165e93be Judges 5:6 change wording
Judges 5:6 change wording "and when Jael ruled us" since Jael never ruled like Deborah.
2016-07-28 13:51:32 -04:00
Hanker10 94d1fb0e4c Judges 5:2 add a word
Judges 5:2 add a word
2016-07-28 13:46:26 -04:00
Hanker10 bdd8a305e6 Judges 4:14 change wording
Judges 4:14 change wording to more closely render the Hebrew
2016-07-28 13:33:21 -04:00
Hanker10 9f073ae02b Judges 4:9-10 move sentence
Judges 4:9-10 move sentence from verse 10 to end of verse 9 to comply with ULB and Hebrew, etc.
2016-07-28 13:29:28 -04:00
Hanker10 bd67a543fd Judges 4:9 change wording
Judges 4:9 change wording
2016-07-28 13:27:33 -04:00
Hanker10 a95523c56d Judges 4:3 add "cruelly"
Judges 4:3 add "cruelly" to convey the sense of "with force"
2016-07-28 13:21:08 -04:00
Hanker10 999b58355c Judges 3:10 correct spelling
Judges 3:10 correct spelling of "Othniel"
2016-07-28 12:59:26 -04:00