Commit Graph

53 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
Henry Whitney 5c3d662268 1co 11:15
Winston tastes good *as* a cigarette should.
2016-07-28 11:13:42 -04:00
Henry Whitney 9188a8f5ff 1co 3:4
verb tense, specification
2016-07-27 16:35:49 -04:00
Henry Whitney d5bbef71fe 1co 11:2
The problem wasn’t that the Cors wanted to ditch Paul; he was afraid
they would be unfaithful to their betrothed Christ.
2016-07-27 16:11:17 -04:00
Henry Whitney 5e33ff4236 1co 12:21
Smoothed out and matched ULB.
2016-07-27 13:23:36 -04:00
Tom Warren efd688d052 adjustments 2016-07-27 11:27:23 -04:00
Henry Whitney 200d1949c3 2co 12:4
fixed punctuation error and brushed up
2016-07-26 16:52:55 -04:00
Henry Whitney 800ae40782 2co 12:1
match ULB
2016-07-26 16:38:37 -04:00
Henry Whitney 2155f9c00f 2co stray empty paragraphs 2016-07-26 16:37:13 -04:00
Henry Whitney 4bbe5c3c8e 2co 13:5 typo 2016-07-26 14:46:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney 5d7fafcf38 1co 13:5-6
UBS HB notes that "yourselves" is emphatic, contrasted with their
desire to test Paul, so I brought that out.
2016-07-26 14:39:35 -04:00
Henry Whitney 422dcd0ece errant space 2016-07-26 13:48:12 -04:00
Henry Whitney 185707541f 2co 13:1 match ULB 2016-07-26 13:31:19 -04:00
Tom Warren daf3211148 remove "and" 2016-07-26 10:00:40 -04:00
Tom Warren 9a73d29aaa alignment with ULB 2016-07-20 12:37:22 -04:00
Tom Warren 8c2e069774 Revised 2016-07-20 12:09:50 -04:00
Tom Warren 64833be24f Each time
a little more info
a little less supplied info
2016-06-30 00:28:36 -04:00
Tom Warren b59fcee29d Clarification
Paul is not able to tell them about the holy
2016-06-29 04:50:33 -04:00
hharrissWA 2b8194d455 changed verb to perfect, as it is, for clarity 2016-06-22 08:08:34 -05:00
hharrissWA 38f2457d9d removed an unneeded comma 2016-06-21 20:31:01 -05:00
hharrissWA b6d331876a removed an unneeded comma 2016-06-21 16:53:14 -05:00
hharrissWA 2c3a08ec94 added a needed "have" 2016-06-21 16:25:47 -05:00
hharrissWA 58ea530987 line spacing 2016-06-21 14:31:27 -05:00
hharrissWA 76ebc51a67 margin 2016-06-21 14:28:08 -05:00
hharrissWA c098995155 indention 2016-06-21 14:26:24 -05:00
hharrissWA 286de552af text 2 2016-06-21 14:23:24 -05:00
hharrissWA 24e7419724 test 2016-06-21 14:22:04 -05:00
hharrissWA 71484f073d test 2016-06-21 14:14:34 -05:00
hharrissWA 88f7dac152 test 2016-06-21 14:13:20 -05:00
hharrissWA d96e804ef4 removed unneeded "of" 2016-06-21 14:10:21 -05:00
hharrissWA c9eb3fb7c6 comma needed to finish setting of an additional phrase 2016-06-21 06:59:33 -05:00
Henry Whitney 3a7d17fee6 Lowercasing mid-sentence "Scriptur" 2016-06-20 16:25:02 -04:00
hharrissWA a405262794 changed "Those of us..." to "For those of us..." 2016-06-20 10:11:26 -05:00
hharrissWA 834574ee82 changed "dies" to "died" 2016-06-20 10:09:02 -05:00
hharrissWA e522a24da9 repeated attempt to correct 2016-06-20 10:05:56 -05:00
hharrissWA c882957e43 extra "there" removed, and "come from" changed to "comes from" 2016-06-20 10:02:53 -05:00
hharrissWA 7b84331b01 changed "they" to "you," which is referencing the Corinthians 2016-06-20 21:47:04 -05:00
hharrissWA 2e7cc8f3f9 added needed words: "be" in v 16, and "that" in v 17 2016-06-19 08:00:44 -05:00
hharrissWA e5f99087b6 restructured for clarity 2016-06-18 08:31:20 -05:00
hharrissWA 6fd77d37e5 semicolon replaced by comma due to presence of conjunction 2016-06-16 14:54:53 -06:00
hharrissWA 3999ac0721 changed "have did" to "did" 2016-06-16 14:49:05 -06:00
hharrissWA fdf4d82b17 "but" is added because "alla" was not translated
The meaning depends upon the translation of "alla" here.
2016-06-14 10:36:53 -06:00
hharrissWA 915dab57ab changed "ink on stone" to "ink or on stone"
seeking to include ink on papyri and/or on stone, and also stone
inscriptions
2016-06-13 16:21:21 -06:00
hharrissWA 0a58ceb522 deleted space before text of v. 12 2016-06-13 16:09:00 -06:00
hharrissWA 973fc7df3f second attempt to correct extra spaces 2016-06-13 16:02:59 -06:00
hharrissWA d46b3586df added "to" in v. 16, deleted a lot of extra spaces before verse numbers 2016-06-13 16:01:52 -06:00
hharrissWA a5db3cd761 changed "rescueing" to "rescuing" 2016-06-13 15:58:17 -06:00
hharrissWA 266d36f79d added a needed "of" 2016-06-13 15:54:42 -06:00
hharrissWA 6bffa266bf added a needed "be" 2016-06-13 15:38:37 -06:00
hharrissWA 763f071910 Added "In" to smooth the sentence structure 2016-06-13 11:11:18 -06:00
pohlig 09124c7e61 Update 07.usfm 2016-04-28 12:43:07 -04:00