From 9c69b9c88f9f67a3d20f102ef67d06858bb4a334 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Hanker10 Date: Thu, 1 Sep 2016 21:05:36 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 01/27] Ezekiel 26:8 change wording Ezekiel 26:8 change wording: "Then they will set up machines to batter the wall" since this is not in the Hebrew or the ULB. --- 26-EZK/26.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/26-EZK/26.usfm b/26-EZK/26.usfm index 10601d72..4256f8b6 100644 --- a/26-EZK/26.usfm +++ b/26-EZK/26.usfm @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ \s5 \p \v 7 This is what I, Yahweh the Lord, say is going to happen: From the east, I am going to bring the most powerful king in the world, King Nebuchadnezzar of Babylon, with his army to attack Tyre. They will bring horses and chariots, and men who ride the horses and men who drive the chariots; it will be a huge army. -\v 8 In the battles in the small villages on the coast, their soldiers will kill many people with their swords. Then they will set up machines to batter the wall around the city of Tyre. They will build a dirt ramp up to the top of the wall, and they will all hold up shields to protect themselves from arrows being shot from the ground. +\v 8 In the battles in the small villages on the coast, their soldiers will kill many people with their swords. Then they will build up walls outside the city of Tyre. They will build a dirt ramp up to the top of the wall, and they will all hold up shields to protect themselves from arrows being shot from the ground. \s5 \v 9 The king will direct the soldiers who operate the rams to batter the wall, and those who will use iron bars to tear down the towers in the wall. From 1e0c0783c7e8e12206da0d83df1ed27e996f9d04 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Hanker10 Date: Thu, 1 Sep 2016 22:00:07 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 02/27] Ezekiel 32:22-26 change "corpses" to "the dead" Ezekiel 32:22-26 change "corpses" to "the dead" to be clearer that these are not unburied bodies strewn over the ground but vast cemeteries surrounding the graves of their dead rulers. --- 26-EZK/32.usfm | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/26-EZK/32.usfm b/26-EZK/32.usfm index fafd1553..8a47a615 100644 --- a/26-EZK/32.usfm +++ b/26-EZK/32.usfm @@ -102,8 +102,8 @@ \s5 \p -\v 22 The corpses of the people of Assyria and their army will also be there. They will be surrounded by corpses of others whom their enemies killed. -\v 23 Their graves will be there in the deep pit, and corpses of soldiers of their army will lie around their graves. Corpses of all those who had terrified so many others will also be there, for their enemies will have killed them, too. +\v 22 The dead of the people of Assyria and their army will also be there. They will be surrounded by the dead of others whom their enemies killed. +\v 23 Their graves will be there in the deep pit, and the dead soldiers of their army will lie around their graves. The dead of all those who had terrified so many others will also be there, for their enemies will have killed them, too. \s5 \p @@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ \s5 \p -\v 26 Corpses of all the soldiers of the lands of Meshech and Tubal will be there, surrounded by the graves of a huge crowd of their servants. While they were alive, they also caused people in many places to be terrified. They are uncircumcised people whom their enemies will have killed. +\v 26 The dead of all the soldiers of the lands of Meshech and Tubal will be there, surrounded by the graves of a huge crowd of their servants. While they were alive, they also caused people in many places to be terrified. They are uncircumcised people whom their enemies will have killed. \v 27 They will lie there beside the uncircumcised warriors who have died. Their shields will be with their bodies, and their swords will lie under their heads. While they were alive, they terrified many people on the earth. \s5 From 7b8e88d3c8f8d3beeb59d8feb39cce30af9c311a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 11:02:11 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 03/27] Update 12.usfm --- 16-NEH/12.usfm | 48 ++++++++++++++++++++++++------------------------ 1 file changed, 24 insertions(+), 24 deletions(-) diff --git a/16-NEH/12.usfm b/16-NEH/12.usfm index 289564c1..610fee1c 100644 --- a/16-NEH/12.usfm +++ b/16-NEH/12.usfm @@ -34,47 +34,47 @@ \s5 \p \v 12 Joiakim was the leader of all the priests. There were the leaders of the families of priests: -\li1 Meraiah, from the family of Seraiah, -\li1 Hananiah, from the family of Jeremiah, +\li1 Meraiah, of the family of Seraiah, +\li1 Hananiah, of the family of Jeremiah, \li1 -\v 13 Meshullam, from the family of Ezra, -\li1 Jehohanan, from the family of Amariah, +\v 13 Meshullam, of the family of Ezra, +\li1 Jehohanan, of the family of Amariah, \li1 -\v 14 Jonathan, from the family of Malluch, -\li1 Joseph, from the family of Shecaniah. +\v 14 Jonathan, of the family of Malluch, +\li1 Joseph, of the family of Shecaniah. \s5 \li1 -\v 15 More leaders were, Adna, from the family of Harim, -\li1 Helkai, from the family of Meremoth, +\v 15 More leaders were Adna, of the family of Harim, +\li1 Helkai, of the family of Meremoth, \li1 -\v 16 Zechariah, from the family of Iddo, -\li1 Meshullam, from the family of Ginnethon, +\v 16 Zechariah, of the family of Iddo, +\li1 Meshullam, of the family of Ginnethon, \li1 -\v 17 Zicri, from the family of Abijah. -\li1 There was also a leader from the family of Miniamin, -\li1 Piltai, from the family of Moadiah. +\v 17 Zicri, of the family of Abijah. +\li1 There was also a leader of the family of Miniamin. +\li1 Piltai, of the family of Moadiah. \li1 -\v 18 Shammua, from the family of Bilgah, -\li1 Jehonathan, from the family of Shemaiah, +\v 18 Shammua, of the family of Bilgah, +\li1 Jehonathan, of the family of Shemaiah, \li1 -\v 19 Mattenai, from the family of Joiarib, -\li1 Uzzi, from the family of Jedaiah, +\v 19 Mattenai, of the family of Joiarib, +\li1 Uzzi, of the family of Jedaiah, \li1 -\v 20 Kallai, from the family of Sallu, -\li1 Eber, from the family of Amok, +\v 20 Kallai, of the family of Sallu, +\li1 Eber, of the family of Amok, \li1 -\v 21 Hashabiah, from the family of Hilkiah, -\li1 and Nethanel, from the family of Jedaiah. +\v 21 Hashabiah, of the family of Hilkiah, +\li1 and Nethanel, of the family of Jedaiah. \s5 \p -\v 22 During time when Eliashib led the Levites, this is a list of them all: Elisahib, Joiada, Johanan, and Jaddua were the leaders of all the priests. They wrote the names of the families who were descendants of Levi. When Darius was the king of Persia, the priests were responsible for recording who were the heads of families. -\v 23 They wrote the names of the leaders of the families who were descendants of Levi in the book of the annals. They recorded the events until the time Eliashib's grandson Johanan was the leader of all the priests. +\v 22 During time when Eliashib led the Levites, this is a list of them all: Elisahib, Joiada, Johanan, and Jaddua were the leaders of all the priests. They wrote the names of the families who were descendants of Levi. When Darius was king of Persia, the priests were responsible for recording who were the heads of families. +\v 23 They wrote the names of the leaders of the families who were descendants of Levi in the book of the annals. They recorded the events until the time that Eliashib's grandson Johanan was the leader of all the priests. \s5 \p -\v 24 These are the leaders of the Levites: Hashabiah, Sherebiah, Jeshua son of Kadmiel, and their brothers who stood across from them to praise and give thanks to God. They did that just as King David, the man who served God, had instructed them. +\v 24 These were the leaders of the Levites: Hashabiah, Sherebiah, Jeshua son of Kadmiel, and their brothers who stood across from them to praise and give thanks to God. They did that just as King David, the man who served God, had instructed them. \p \v 25 Mattaniah, Bakbukiah, Obadiah, Meshullam, Talmon, and Akkub were the gatekeepers. They stood guard at the storerooms close to the gates of the temple. \v 26 They did that work during the time of Joiakim son of Jeshua and the grandson of Jehozadak, during the time of Nehemiah the governor and Ezra the priest. Ezra also knew the Jewish laws very well. From 6f73df293ac7cf113322cb122b8f7e69bc9a608a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 11:22:04 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 04/27] Update 02.usfm --- 17-EST/02.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/17-EST/02.usfm b/17-EST/02.usfm index 8d966d35..877f3ced 100644 --- a/17-EST/02.usfm +++ b/17-EST/02.usfm @@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ \s5 \p \v 5 At that time there was a Jew living in the city of Susa, whose name was Mordecai. He was the son of Jair who was the son of Shimei, the son of Kish, and he was a member of the tribe of Benjamin. -\v 6 Many years before that, Nebuchadnezzar, who had been king of Babylonia, took Mordecai and brought him from Jerusalem to Babylon. This was at the same time that he took away King Jehoiachin from Judah and many others. +\v 6 Many years before that, Nebuchadnezzar, who had been king of Babylonia, had taken Kish and brought him from Jerusalem to Babylon. This was at the same time that he took away King Jehoiachin from Judah, along with many others. \s5 \v 7 Mordecai was caring for his cousin, whose Hebrew name was Hadassah. She had a beautiful face and a lovely figure, and she was called Esther. After her father and mother died, Mordecai took care of Esther as though she were his own daughter. From 0bf99c98255d6408032007ee4b041e584689adbd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 11:36:52 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 05/27] Update 02.usfm --- 17-EST/02.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/17-EST/02.usfm b/17-EST/02.usfm index 877f3ced..42185da4 100644 --- a/17-EST/02.usfm +++ b/17-EST/02.usfm @@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ \s5 \p \v 5 At that time there was a Jew living in the city of Susa, whose name was Mordecai. He was the son of Jair who was the son of Shimei, the son of Kish, and he was a member of the tribe of Benjamin. -\v 6 Many years before that, Nebuchadnezzar, who had been king of Babylonia, had taken Kish and brought him from Jerusalem to Babylon. This was at the same time that he took away King Jehoiachin from Judah, along with many others. +\v 6 Many years before that, Nebuchadnezzar, who had been king of Babylonia, had taken Mordecai and brought him from Jerusalem to Babylon. This was at the same time that he took away King Jehoiachin from Judah, along with many others. \s5 \v 7 Mordecai was caring for his cousin, whose Hebrew name was Hadassah. She had a beautiful face and a lovely figure, and she was called Esther. After her father and mother died, Mordecai took care of Esther as though she were his own daughter. From 332340b0ac1560bd95e70b6742d5cc2d72a0a947 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 12:04:22 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 06/27] Update 09.usfm --- 17-EST/09.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/17-EST/09.usfm b/17-EST/09.usfm index 36dd36ab..98e95bf0 100644 --- a/17-EST/09.usfm +++ b/17-EST/09.usfm @@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ \s5 \v 23 So the Jews agreed to do what Mordecai wrote. They agreed to celebrate on those days every year. \v 24 They would remember how Haman son of Hammedatha, the Agagite, became an enemy of all the Jews. They would remember how he had made an evil plan to kill the Jews, and that he had thrown lots to find a day to crush and destroy them. -\v 25 They would remember that when Esther told the king about Haman's plan, the king arranged that the evil plan that Haman had made to kill the Jews would come back on his own head, and that he would be killed instead of the Jews, and that Haman and that his sons would be hanged. +\v 25 They would remember that when the king learned about Haman's plan, he arranged that the evil plan to kill the Jews would result in Haman's own destruction, that Haman would be killed instead of the Jews, that he and that his sons would be hanged. \s5 \v 26 Therefore they called these days Purim, after the name of Pur (the lots that they threw). So that is what was written in this letter, what they had seen, and what had happened to them. From 4d16b341f70e1efe5af5409926fadaa4077e016d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 12:05:41 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 07/27] Update 09.usfm --- 17-EST/09.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/17-EST/09.usfm b/17-EST/09.usfm index 98e95bf0..15da9ff0 100644 --- a/17-EST/09.usfm +++ b/17-EST/09.usfm @@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ \s5 \v 23 So the Jews agreed to do what Mordecai wrote. They agreed to celebrate on those days every year. \v 24 They would remember how Haman son of Hammedatha, the Agagite, became an enemy of all the Jews. They would remember how he had made an evil plan to kill the Jews, and that he had thrown lots to find a day to crush and destroy them. -\v 25 They would remember that when the king learned about Haman's plan, he arranged that the evil plan to kill the Jews would result in Haman's own destruction, that Haman would be killed instead of the Jews, that he and that his sons would be hanged. +\v 25 They would remember that when the king learned about Haman's plan, he arranged that the evil plan to kill the Jews would result instead in Haman's own destruction, that Haman would be killed in place of the Jews, that he and that his sons would be hanged. \s5 \v 26 Therefore they called these days Purim, after the name of Pur (the lots that they threw). So that is what was written in this letter, what they had seen, and what had happened to them. From 1f1f7af4500a49f64590536345e46b344332af6c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Hanker10 Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 12:55:56 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 08/27] Ezekiel 32:27 change wording Ezekiel 32:27 change wording to comply with the newer understanding of the ULB in that the punishment is that they do NOT lie in honor as warriors did. --- 26-EZK/32.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/26-EZK/32.usfm b/26-EZK/32.usfm index 8a47a615..cfae77bd 100644 --- a/26-EZK/32.usfm +++ b/26-EZK/32.usfm @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ \s5 \p \v 26 The dead of all the soldiers of the lands of Meshech and Tubal will be there, surrounded by the graves of a huge crowd of their servants. While they were alive, they also caused people in many places to be terrified. They are uncircumcised people whom their enemies will have killed. -\v 27 They will lie there beside the uncircumcised warriors who have died. Their shields will be with their bodies, and their swords will lie under their heads. While they were alive, they terrified many people on the earth. +\v 27 They will not lie there beside the uncircumcised warriors who have gone to the grave highly honored with their shields over their bodies and their swords under their heads. While they were alive, they terrified many people on the earth. \s5 \p From 28e69d89f7895042550e1e0b0413011e4c791c96 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Hanker10 Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 13:30:28 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 09/27] Ezekiel 36:2 change wording Ezekiel 36:2 change wording to include the concept of "ancient" from the Hebrew (and ULB). --- 26-EZK/36.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/26-EZK/36.usfm b/26-EZK/36.usfm index 1100be6e..d00e409c 100644 --- a/26-EZK/36.usfm +++ b/26-EZK/36.usfm @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ \c 36 \p \v 1 Yahweh said to Ezekiel, "Son of man, give a message to the hill country and mountains in Israel just as if they were people. Tell them to listen to my message for them. -\v 2 This is it: the enemies of Israel, those people groups who live nearby, are now very happy, because they are saying that Jerusalem has been destroyed, so the hill country and mountains of Israel will now belong to them. +\v 2 This is it: the enemies of Israel, those people groups who live nearby, are now very happy, because they are saying that Jerusalem has been destroyed, so the ancient mountains of Israel will now belong to them. \v 3 So you, Ezekiel, must tell the mountains of Israel what I, the Lord Yahweh, am saying to them: 'Armies of other nations attacked you from every direction, and everyone has left you. Those foreign armies are now in your land. They have spoken very maliciously about your people, the Israelites, and have told all kinds of lies about them. \s5 From e6fbed32a282637e2e2e8288f0bf1d29b251641a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 13:31:06 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 10/27] Update 15.usfm --- 18-JOB/15.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/18-JOB/15.usfm b/18-JOB/15.usfm index 29456386..aad78e4f 100644 --- a/18-JOB/15.usfm +++ b/18-JOB/15.usfm @@ -118,8 +118,8 @@ \q2 and even their shadows will disappear from the earth. \q1 \v 30 They will not escape from the darkness of death; -\q2 they will be like trees whose branches burn up, -\q2 and whose blossoms blow away in the wind. +\q2 they will be like trees whose branches burn up. +\q2 When God gives the command, they will die. \s5 \q1 From cdbec3a6c6f5be85f847f1497eb897477384358a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 14:04:04 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 11/27] Update 17.usfm --- 18-JOB/17.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/18-JOB/17.usfm b/18-JOB/17.usfm index f09abfe2..bb49c3e1 100644 --- a/18-JOB/17.usfm +++ b/18-JOB/17.usfm @@ -47,8 +47,8 @@ \s5 \q1 -\v 11 My time to live is almost ended; I have not been able to do the things that I planned to do; -\q2 I have not been able to accomplish anything that I desired. +\v 11 My time to live is almost ended; I have not been able to do the things that I planned to do. +\q2 As for the things I have most desired, there is no hope of them happening. \q1 \v 12 My friends do not know when it is night and when it is day; \q2 when it is night, they claim that it is daylight; From a707a2180de67108b649fe375cad780b4820aaf8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 14:24:22 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 12/27] Update 17.usfm --- 18-JOB/17.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/18-JOB/17.usfm b/18-JOB/17.usfm index bb49c3e1..c4141136 100644 --- a/18-JOB/17.usfm +++ b/18-JOB/17.usfm @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ \q1 \v 12 My friends do not know when it is night and when it is day; \q2 when it is night, they claim that it is daylight; -\q2 when it is becoming dark, they claim it is becoming light. +\q2 when it is becoming dark, they claim that it is getting light. \s5 \q1 From 8b203f6898df3fad61feab405125dab724e9f5e4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 15:05:41 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 13/27] Update 30.usfm --- 18-JOB/30.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/18-JOB/30.usfm b/18-JOB/30.usfm index ab264c22..18f670c2 100644 --- a/18-JOB/30.usfm +++ b/18-JOB/30.usfm @@ -92,8 +92,8 @@ \s5 \q1 -\v 22 You allow the wind to lift me up and blow me away, -\q2 and you make a violent storm destroy me. +\v 22 You allow the wind to lift me up and blow me away; +\q2 and you make a violent storm blow me around. \q1 \v 23 I know that you will cause me to die, \q2 which is what happens to everyone who is alive. From 91619be336b85693efa87c3fd512a790e5f572e5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 16:09:46 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 14/27] Continuity with UDB to ULB --- 19-PSA/055.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/055.usfm b/19-PSA/055.usfm index 705715bf..db182eee 100644 --- a/19-PSA/055.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/055.usfm @@ -40,8 +40,8 @@ \q2 where my enemies could not strike me like a strong wind and rainstorm." \b \q1 -\v 9 Lord, confuse my enemies and cause their plans to fail -\q2 because I see them acting violently and causing violence in the city of Jerusalem. +\v 9 Lord, confuse my enemies and cause their plans to fail. +\q2 I saw them hurting others by their violence and causing riots throughout the city. \s5 \q1 From af1eabd3663d171d9f45cdfc9ad23c04084da3e2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 17:48:20 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 15/27] Update 018.usfm --- 19-PSA/018.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/018.usfm b/19-PSA/018.usfm index 7b9f2bb2..7152ba69 100644 --- a/19-PSA/018.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/018.usfm @@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ \s5 \q1 -\v 13 Then Yahweh shouted loudly from the sky, and to his enemies, it sounded like thunder. +\v 13 Then Yahweh shouted loudly from the sky, and to his enemies, it sounded like thunder. Yahweh, the Supreme God, rained hailstones on them and caused lightning to flash against them. \q1 \v 14 He shot his arrows at them and caused them to scatter; his flashes of lightning caused them to become very confused. From 3276fbd96a80b816d55fd475473596c73d8ed577 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 19:21:59 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 16/27] Past to continuous --- 19-PSA/055.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/055.usfm b/19-PSA/055.usfm index db182eee..9d970194 100644 --- a/19-PSA/055.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/055.usfm @@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ \s5 \q1 -\v 19 God is the one who has ruled everything forever, +\v 19 God is the one who has rules everything forever, \q2 and he will listen to me. \q1 He will cause my enemies to be defeated and disgraced \q2 because they do not change their evil behavior From b315bb194722377bcc3e8ce971871fe293dc485b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Mon, 5 Sep 2016 11:17:06 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 17/27] Deu 3:17 Make consistent with all other instances for the body of water. --- 05-DEU/03.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/05-DEU/03.usfm b/05-DEU/03.usfm index 245cdad5..da3a31ff 100644 --- a/05-DEU/03.usfm +++ b/05-DEU/03.usfm @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ \v 16 I allotted to the tribes of Reuben and Gad the southern part of Gilead, extending south to the Arnon River. The middle of the river is the southern boundary. The northern boundary is the Jabbok River, which is part of the border of region of Ammon. \s5 -\v 17 The border extends from the plain along the east side of the Jordan valley, from Kinnereth in the north (known as the Sea of Galilee), to the Sea of Arabah (known as the Dead Sea) in the south, and to the slopes of Mount Pisgah on the east. +\v 17 The border extends from the plain along the east side of the Jordan valley, from Chinnereth in the north (known as the Sea of Galilee), to the Sea of Arabah (known as the Dead Sea) in the south, and to the slopes of Mount Pisgah on the east. \s5 \p From 214251d9bb9726b9dbbce91a75cd18d2cea3681e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 09:35:41 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 18/27] Update 060.usfm --- 19-PSA/060.usfm | 7 +++---- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/060.usfm b/19-PSA/060.usfm index 5a79fc16..1a304f0a 100644 --- a/19-PSA/060.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/060.usfm @@ -12,13 +12,12 @@ \s5 \q1 -\v 2 When the enemy defeated us, it was as though you made a big earthquake in which the ground split open. -\q1 So now, just as you can cause the cracks in the land to disappear, -\q2 help our army to be strong again, +\v 2 It was as though you made a big earthquake in which the ground split open. +\q1 So now, make us strong again, \q2 because it is as though our country is falling apart. \q1 \v 3 You have caused us, your people, to suffer very much; -\q2 it is as though you had forced us to drink strong wine that caused us to stagger around after we became drunk. +\q2 it is as though you had taken away our strength by making us drink strong wine. \b \s5 From 9f5b95bea4c70227736a6c70eac0c4872c28d217 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 10:19:23 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 19/27] Update 084.usfm --- 19-PSA/084.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/084.usfm b/19-PSA/084.usfm index e92abb84..969a03a7 100644 --- a/19-PSA/084.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/084.usfm @@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ \s5 \q1 \v 5 How fortunate are those whom you make strong, -\q1 those who desire very much to make the trip to Mount Zion. +\q1 those who desire very much to make the trip up to Mount Zion. \q1 \v 6 While they travel through the dry Baca Valley, \q1 you cause it to become a place where there are springs of water, From 2c1560d18f9768db4c28156797a35ee2abacaf4b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 10:27:03 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 20/27] Update 084.usfm --- 19-PSA/084.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/084.usfm b/19-PSA/084.usfm index 969a03a7..25aa22b5 100644 --- a/19-PSA/084.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/084.usfm @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ \v 5 How fortunate are those whom you make strong, \q1 those who desire very much to make the trip up to Mount Zion. \q1 -\v 6 While they travel through the dry Baca Valley, +\v 6 While they travel through the dry Valley of Tears, \q1 you cause it to become a place where there are springs of water, \q2 where the rains in the autumn fill the valley with pools of water. From 5654dc0a628291b39dfd42a7e72ba4378d0d8729 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 10:55:18 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 21/27] Update 084.usfm --- 19-PSA/084.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/084.usfm b/19-PSA/084.usfm index 25aa22b5..704ee835 100644 --- a/19-PSA/084.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/084.usfm @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ \q1 \v 6 While they travel through the dry Valley of Tears, \q1 you cause it to become a place where there are springs of water, -\q2 where the rains in the autumn fill the valley with pools of water. +\q2 where the rains in the autumn fill the valley with water, a blessing from you. \s5 \q1 From eff5b027866fe8e8446fd5b840b6ee20660a2514 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: lrsallee Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 13:44:17 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 22/27] Heb 2:7 - added space before ellipse in footnote --- 59-HEB/02.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/59-HEB/02.usfm b/59-HEB/02.usfm index 0d5db946..1cc00ca9 100644 --- a/59-HEB/02.usfm +++ b/59-HEB/02.usfm @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ \q Yet you have greatly honored them, as people honor kings. \f + \ft Some ancient copies add: -"...and you have put him in charge of the things you have made." +"... and you have put him in charge of the things you have made." \f* \q \v 8 You have put everything under their control." From 963909f5002dd52abd4b0d43e3f5494392cd63b8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: lrsallee Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 13:50:43 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 23/27] Update 02.usfm --- 59-HEB/02.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/59-HEB/02.usfm b/59-HEB/02.usfm index 1cc00ca9..d8891003 100644 --- a/59-HEB/02.usfm +++ b/59-HEB/02.usfm @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ \q Yet you have greatly honored them, as people honor kings. \f + \ft Some ancient copies add: -"... and you have put him in charge of the things you have made." +" ... and you have put him in charge of the things you have made." \f* \q \v 8 You have put everything under their control." From d68fb672f01cf448bc52766a9eabc3dc11a76230 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 14:19:28 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 24/27] Update 10.usfm --- 20-PRO/10.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/10.usfm b/20-PRO/10.usfm index 90fc4112..325cd922 100644 --- a/20-PRO/10.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/10.usfm @@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ \v 10 The one who winks his eye signals others to help him do something that is wrong, \q2 and a fool will be ruined because he talks too much. \q1 -\v 11 A person who does right is like a fountain that gives life; +\v 11 A person who does right is like a spring that gives life-saving water; \q2 but the wicked person hides his brutality by his words. \s5 From 93684f9c098310ccd43b03d4c0a5c4190e546c1e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 14:23:24 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 25/27] psa 73:28 activized passive --- 19-PSA/073.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/073.usfm b/19-PSA/073.usfm index 0899d184..d098ade9 100644 --- a/19-PSA/073.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/073.usfm @@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ \q1 you will get rid of those who abandon you. \q1 \v 28 But as for me, it is wonderful to be near to God -\q2 and to be protected by Yahweh +\q2 and to have Yahweh protect me \q2 and to proclaim to others all that he has done for me. From 93811d3a7f4751f46630a4d7cfd3edaa37faa5b3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 15:39:48 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 26/27] Update 21.usfm --- 20-PRO/21.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/21.usfm b/20-PRO/21.usfm index b318028d..46464b25 100644 --- a/20-PRO/21.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/21.usfm @@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ \s5 \q1 \v 29 The wicked man acts as if he were strong, -\q2 but an honest man tells the truth and thinks before he acts. +\q2 but an honest man has thought about what to do and is certain about it. \s5 \q1 From 0d9a271cac9975ff3fd4a3d265f6b037e49ac04c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2016 15:50:22 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 27/27] Update 22.usfm --- 20-PRO/22.usfm | 5 ++--- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/22.usfm b/20-PRO/22.usfm index 001a903e..282f760a 100644 --- a/20-PRO/22.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/22.usfm @@ -120,9 +120,8 @@ \v 28 The ancient boundary stones show where the property lines are. Do not take them away or move them. Your ancestors put them there. Leave them alone. \q1 -\v 29 One who learns a trade and is skillful at it; he will stand before kings. -\q2 Because of his achievements he distinguishes himself -\q2 as a person whom kings respect. +\v 29 One who learns a trade and is skillful at it will become a servant of kings. +\q2 Because of his achievements he will not serve mere ordinary people.