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Reviewed-on: https://git.door43.org/unfoldingWord/en_tq/pulls/75
Co-Authored-By: Grant_Ailie <grant_ailie@noreply.door43.org>
Co-Committed-By: Grant_Ailie <grant_ailie@noreply.door43.org>

jon/01/02.md

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-# What did Yahweh command Jonah to go and do?
+# What did Yahweh tell Jonah to do?
 
-Yahweh commanded Jonah to go to Nineveh and speak out against it.
+Yahweh told Jonah to get up and go to Nineveh and speak out against it.

jon/01/03.md

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-# What did Jonah do after he heard Yahweh’s command?
+# What did Jonah do after Yahweh told him to go to Nineveh?
 
-Jonah ran away from the presence of Yahweh to go to Tarshish.
+Jonah got up to run away to Tarshish from before the face of Yahweh.

jon/01/04.md

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 # What did Yahweh do to the ship which Jonah had boarded?
 
-Yahweh sent a great wind and a mighty storm on the sea, and it appeared that the ship would break up.
+Yahweh sent a great wind and a great storm on the sea so that the ship was near to being broken up.

jon/01/07.md

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-# How did the sailors determine who was the cause of the evil, and what was the result?
+# How did the sailors determine who was the cause of the evil? 
 
-The sailors cast lots to determine who was the cause, and the lot indicated Jonah.
+The sailors cast lots to determine the cause of the evil and the lot indicated Jonah.
+
+# What was the result of casting  lots?
+
+The result was that the lot indicated that Jonah was the cause of the evil they were experiencing. 

jon/01/10.md

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-# What did Jonah say was the cause of the evil that was happening to them?
+# How did the sailors know that Jonah was running away from before the face of Yahweh?
 
-Jonah told the men that he was running from the presence of Yahweh.
+The sailors knew that Jonah was running away from before the face of Yahweh because Jonah told them.

jon/01/12.md

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 # What did Jonah tell the men to do in order to stop the storm?
 
-Jonah told the men to throw him into the sea in order to stop the storm.
+Jonah told the men to lift him up and throw him into the sea.

jon/01/14.md

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 # What two requests did the sailors make of Yahweh?
 
-They asked Yahweh to not let them perish and to not hold them guilty for Jonah’s death.
+The sailors asked Yahweh to not let them perish on account of the life of Jonah and to not hold them guilty for Jonah’s death.

jon/01/15.md

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 # What happened when the sailors threw Jonah into the sea?
 
-When they threw Jonah into the sea, the sea stopped raging.
+When the sailors threw Jonah into the sea, the sea stopped raging.

jon/01/17.md

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-# What happened to Jonah when they threw him into the sea?
+# What happened to Jonah when the sailors threw him into the sea?
 
-A great fish swallowed Jonah, and he was in the stomach of the fish three days and three nights.
+Yahweh appointed a great fish to swallow Jonah, and Jonah was in the abdomen of the fish three days and three nights.

jon/02/01.md

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-# What did Jonah do from the belly of the fish?
+# What did Jonah do in the belly of the fish?
 
-Jonah prayed to Yahweh for help.
+Jonah cried out to Yahweh in prayer because he was distressed.

jon/02/04.md

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 # What did Jonah hope he might be able to do again?
 
-Jonah hoped that he might be able to see Yahweh’s holy temple again.
+Jonah hoped that he might be able to look toward Yahweh’s holy temple again.

jon/02/08.md

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-# What happens to those who give attention to empty vanities?
+# What did Jonah say happens to those who give attention to empty vanities?
 
-Those who give attention to empty vanities forsake their covenant faithfulness.
+Jonah said those who give attention to empty vanities forsake their covenant faithfulness.

jon/02/09.md

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-# What promise did Jonah make from the belly of the fish?
+# When Jonah prayed in the belly of the fish what did he say that he would do?
 
-Jonah promised to fulfill that which he had vowed.
+Jonah said he would sacrifice to Yahweh with a voice of thanksgiving and fulfill what he had vowed.
 
-# From whom did Jonah say salvation comes?
 
-Jonah said that salvation comes from Yahweh.
+# To whom did Jonah say salvation belongs?
+
+Jonah said that salvation belongs to Yahweh.

jon/02/10.md

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-# What did Yahweh tell the fish to do?
+# How did Yahweh respond to Jonah's prayer?
 
-Yahweh told the fish to vomit out Jonah upon the dry land.
+Yahweh spoke to the fish and it vomited Jonah up onto the dry land.

jon/03/02.md

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-# What command did Yahweh give a second time to Jonah?
+# What did Yahweh command Jonah to do for the second time?
 
-Yahweh commanded Jonah to go to Nineveh and speak Yahweh’s message.
+Yahweh commanded Jonah to go to Nineveh and speak Yahweh’s message.

jon/03/03.md

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-# How did Jonah respond this time to Yahweh’s command?
+# How did Jonah respond the second time Yahweh told him to go to Nineveh?
 
-Jonah obeyed and went to Nineveh.
+Jonah obeyed Yahweh and went to Nineveh.

jon/03/08.md

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 # How did the Ninevites respond to Yahweh’s message that Jonah preached?
 
-The Ninevites fasted and put on sackcloth, cried out to God, and turned from their evil ways.
+The Ninevites believed God, fasted, and put on sackcloth. The king of Nineveh made a decree which said that no person or animal should eat or drink water and that each person and animal must be covered with sackcloth and that each person should cry out to God and stop doing evil deeds including violent acts.

jon/03/09.md

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-# What hope did the king of Nineveh still have for the people and the city?
+# What hope did the king of Nineveh have for the people of Nineveh and the city?
 
-The king of Nineveh still hoped that God might relent and turn away from his fierce anger.
+The king of Nineveh hoped that God would turn back from his anger and have compassion on them so that the people of Nineveh would not perish.

jon/03/10.md

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-# How did God respond to the Ninevites’ repentance?
+# How did God respond to the Ninevites repentance?
 
-God relented concerning the disaster which he had said he would do to them, and he did not do it.
+God saw their deeds, that they turned away from their evil ways. And God relented in regard to the evil that he had said he would do to them; and he did not do it.

jon/04/01.md

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-# Why was Jonah so angry?
+# Why was Jonah angry?
 
-It seemed evil to Jonah that Yahweh did not punish the Ninevites.
+Jonah was angry because it seemed like a great evil to Jonah that Yahweh had mercy on the Ninevites and did not punish them.

jon/04/02.md

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 # Why did Jonah say that he had tried to flee to Tarshish?
 
-Jonah said he knew Yahweh was a gracious and compassionate God, slow to anger and abundant in covenant faithfulness, and one who relents from sending disaster.
+Jonah said that he had tried to flee to Tarshish because he knew that Yahweh was a gracious and compassionate God, slow to anger and abundant in covenant faithfulness, and one who relents from evil.

jon/04/03.md

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-# What did Jonah want Yahweh to do to him?
+# What did Jonah ask Yahweh to do to him?
 
-Jonah wanted Yahweh to take his life.
+Jonah asked Yahweh to take his life.

jon/04/04.md

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 # What question did Yahweh ask Jonah?
 
-Yahweh asked Jonah if it was good for him to be angry.
+Yahweh asked Jonah if it was right for Jonah to be angry.

jon/04/05.md

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-# Why did Jonah go out of the city and sit down?
+# Why did Jonah go out of the city and sit down facing the city?
 
-Jonah wanted to see what might happen to the city.
+Jonah wanted to see what would happen to the city of Nineveh.

jon/04/06.md

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 # What did Yahweh do for Jonah while he sat outside the city?
 
-Yahweh first prepared a plant as shade for Jonah.
+Yahweh caused a plant to grow up over Jonah to be a shade for his head.

jon/04/07.md

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 # What did Yahweh do to the plant that had provided shade for Jonah?
 
-Yahweh sent a worm kill the plant.
+God appointed a worm at the rising of the dawn of the next day; and it attacked the plant, and it withered. 

jon/04/09.md

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-# What question did Yahweh then ask Jonah?
+# What question did Yahweh ask Jonah after Yahweh caused the plant to wither and a hot east wind to blow on Jonah?
 
-Yahweh asked Jonah if it was good to be angry about the plant.
+Yahweh asked Jonah if it was right for him to be angry about the plant.

jon/04/10.md

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-# How did Jonah feel about the plant that had given him shade?
+# How did Jonah feel when the plant that had given him shade withered and died?
 
-Jonah had compassion for the plant.
+Jonah felt compassion for the plant that had withered and died.

jon/04/11.md

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-# For whom did Yahweh have compassion?
+# For whom did Yahweh feel compassion?
 
-Yahweh had compassion for both the people and the animals in Nineveh.
+Yahweh felt compassion for the people and animals in Nineveh.