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neh/03/13.md

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 # Who repaired the Valley Gate as far as the Dung Gate?
 
-Hanun and the inhabitants of Zanoah repaired from the Valley Gate to the Dung Gate.
+Hanun and the inhabitants of Zanoah repaired the Valley Gate and the entire portion of wall between the Valley Gate and the Dung Gate.

neh/03/28.md

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 # Who did the repairs on the section above the Horse Gate?
 
-The priests repaired that section. Each of the prists repaired in front of his own house.
+The priests repaired that section. Each of the priests repaired in front of his own house.

neh/04/15.md

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-# When did the plans of the enemies become known to the workers?
+# What did the enemies hear?
 
-The plans of the enemies became known when God frustrated their plans.
+They heard that the workers knew their plans and that God had frustrated their plans.

neh/04/16.md

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-# What did Nehemiah tell his servants to do?
+# What the young men do?
 
-Nehemiah told half his servants to work on rebuilding the wall, and he told the other half to hold their weapons and and wear armor.
+Half worked on rebuilding the wall and half held their weapons and wore armor.

neh/06/14.md

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 # What did Nehemiah pray the second time?
 
-He prayed God would remember Tobiah and Sanballat according to his deeds, as well as the prophetess Noadiah, and the rest of the prophets who were frightening Nehemiah.
+He prayed God would remember Tobiah, and Sanballat according to their deeds, as well as the prophetess Noadiah, and the rest of the prophets who were trying to frighten Nehemiah.

neh/07/03.md

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-# When were the gates of Jerusalem supposed to be open?
+# When were the gates of Jerusalem supposed to be opened?
 
 The gates were supposed to be opened when the sun became hot.

neh/09/01.md

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 # In general, what were the people of Israel doing as they gathered together on the twenty-fourth day of the same month?
 
-The people of Israel were fasting, wearing sackcloth, and they put dust on their heads. The Israelites separated themselves from all the foreigners, and they stood and confessed their own sins and the sins of their ancestors.
+The people of Israel were fasting, wearing sackcloth, and putting dust on their heads. The Israelites separated themselves from all the foreigners, and they stood and confessed their own sins and the sins of their ancestors.

neh/09/02.md

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 # In general, what were the people of Israel doing as they gathered together on the twenty-fourth day of the same month?
 
-The people of Israel were fasting, wearing sackcloth, and they put dust on their heads. The Israelites separated themselves from all the foreigners, and they stood and confessed their own sins and the sins of their ancestors.
+The people of Israel were fasting, wearing sackcloth, and putting dust on their heads. The Israelites separated themselves from all the foreigners, and they stood and confessed their own sins and the sins of their ancestors.

neh/09/16.md

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 # How did the Israelites and their ancestors act toward God?
 
-The Israelites were disrespectful, stubborn, refused to listen, rebelled, and appointed a leader to return them to their slavery.
+The Israelites were disrespectful and stubborn. They refused to listen, rebelled, and appointed a leader to return them to their slavery.
 
 # Why did God not abandon the Israelites when they were disrespectful, stubborn, rebellious, and disobedient?
 

neh/09/17.md

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 # How did the Israelites and their ancestors act toward God?
 
-The Israelites were disrespectful, stubborn, refused to listen, rebelled, and appointed a leader to return them to their slavery.
+The Israelites were disrespectful and stubborn. They refused to listen, rebelled, and appointed a leader to return them to their slavery.
 
 # Why did God not abandon the Israelites when they were disrespectful, stubborn, rebellious, and disobedient?
 

neh/09/21.md

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 # How did the people say God provided for their forefathers for forty years in the wilderness?
 
-Yahweh gave his Spirit to instruct them, food and water; their clothes did not wear out, and their feet did not swell.
+Yahweh gave his Spirit to instruct them. He provided food and water; their clothes did not wear out, and their feet did not swell.

neh/12/31.md

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 The leaders went up to the top of the wall.
 
-# What were the two large choirs, that Nehemiah appointed, supposed to do?
+# What were the two large choirs that Nehemiah appointed supposed to do?
 
 The two large choirs were supposed to give thanks.
 

neh/13/01.md

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 # Why should an Ammonite and a Moabite not come into the assembly of God, forever?
 
-An Ammonite and a Moabite should not come into the assembly of God, forever, because they had not come to the people of Israel with bread and water, but had hired Balaam to curse Israel.
+An Ammonite and a Moabite should not come into the assembly of God forever because they had not come to the people of Israel with bread and water, but had hired Balaam to curse Israel.

neh/13/02.md

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 # Why should an Ammonite and a Moabite not come into the assembly of God, forever?
 
-An Ammonite and a Moabite should not come into the assembly of God, forever, because they had not come to the people of Israel with bread and water, but had hired Balaam to curse Israel.
+An Ammonite and a Moabite should not come into the assembly of God forever because they had not come to the people of Israel with bread and water, but had hired Balaam to curse Israel.

neh/13/06.md

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 # Where did Nehemiah go in the thirty-second year of Artaxerxes?
 
-In the thirty-second year of Artaxerxes, Nehemiah went to the king.
+In the thirty-second year of Artaxerxes, Nehemiah returned from Jerusalem to the king.

neh/13/10.md

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 # Why did the Levites and singers hurry to leave the temple?
 
-Because the portions assigned to give the Levites had not been distributed to them, they hurried to leave the temple, as the singers who did the work also had done.
+Because the people were no longer faithfully supporting God's work by giving portions to the Levites, and therefore the Levites left the temple as did the singers.

neh/13/22.md

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-# Who came and guarded the gates, to sanctify the Sabbath day?
+# Who came and guarded the gates to sanctify the Sabbath day?
 
-The Levites came and guarded the gates, to sanctify the Sabbath day.
+The Levites came and guarded the gates to sanctify the Sabbath day.

neh/13/24.md

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 # What did half the children speak?
 
-Half the children spoke the language of Ashdod, but they could not speak the language of Judah, but only the language of one of the other peoples.
+Half the children spoke the language of Ashdod, and they could not speak the language of Judah, but only the language of one of the other peoples.