From 82a06cf0165b0917597c39ead7b164b4a15f6d13 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Larry Sallee Date: Wed, 14 Oct 2020 18:30:44 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Edits for 1 Timothy BP (#45) Edits for 1 Timothy BP Co-authored-by: lrsallee Reviewed-on: https://git.door43.org/unfoldingWord/en_tq/pulls/45 --- 1ti/01/01.md | 2 +- 1ti/01/03.md | 2 +- 1ti/01/10.md | 3 --- 1ti/02/05.md | 2 +- 1ti/02/07.md | 2 +- 1ti/02/12.md | 2 +- 1ti/02/13.md | 2 +- 1ti/02/14.md | 2 +- 1ti/02/15.md | 2 +- 1ti/03/03.md | 2 +- 1ti/03/04.md | 2 +- 1ti/03/06.md | 2 +- 1ti/03/10.md | 2 +- 1ti/03/11.md | 2 +- 1ti/03/15.md | 4 ++-- 1ti/03/16.md | 2 +- 1ti/04/01.md | 2 +- 1ti/04/05.md | 4 ++-- 1ti/04/08.md | 2 +- 1ti/04/11.md | 2 +- 1ti/04/14.md | 2 +- 1ti/04/16.md | 2 +- 1ti/05/10.md | 2 +- 1ti/05/14.md | 2 +- 1ti/05/19.md | 2 +- 1ti/05/24.md | 2 +- 1ti/06/01.md | 2 +- 1ti/06/04.md | 2 +- 1ti/06/08.md | 2 +- 1ti/06/09.md | 2 +- 1ti/06/10.md | 2 +- 1ti/06/12.md | 2 +- 1ti/06/16.md | 2 +- 1ti/06/19.md | 2 +- 1ti/06/20.md | 2 +- 35 files changed, 36 insertions(+), 39 deletions(-) delete mode 100644 1ti/01/10.md diff --git a/1ti/01/01.md b/1ti/01/01.md index 2012f9b3c..de949504d 100644 --- a/1ti/01/01.md +++ b/1ti/01/01.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # How was Paul made an apostle of Christ Jesus? -Paul was made an apostle according to the commandment of God. +Paul was made an apostle by to the commandment of God. diff --git a/1ti/01/03.md b/1ti/01/03.md index e9745d238..874f40573 100644 --- a/1ti/01/03.md +++ b/1ti/01/03.md @@ -4,4 +4,4 @@ He urged Timothy to remain in Ephesus. # What was Timothy to command certain people not to do? -He was to command them not to teach a different doctrine. +He was to command them not to teach differently. diff --git a/1ti/01/10.md b/1ti/01/10.md deleted file mode 100644 index 45564bd66..000000000 --- a/1ti/01/10.md +++ /dev/null @@ -1,3 +0,0 @@ -# What are four examples of sins that such people commit? - -They commit sexual immorality, homosexuality, kidnapping, and lying. diff --git a/1ti/02/05.md b/1ti/02/05.md index 134f12506..736de2536 100644 --- a/1ti/02/05.md +++ b/1ti/02/05.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # What is Christ Jesus’ position between God and man? -Christ Jesus is the only mediator between God and man. +Christ Jesus is the one mediator between God and man. diff --git a/1ti/02/07.md b/1ti/02/07.md index 6413e7355..c1dc963e5 100644 --- a/1ti/02/07.md +++ b/1ti/02/07.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # Who does the apostle Paul teach? -Paul is a teacher of the Gentiles. +Paul is a teacher of the nations. diff --git a/1ti/02/12.md b/1ti/02/12.md index d327def28..65b7f8cce 100644 --- a/1ti/02/12.md +++ b/1ti/02/12.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ -# What does Paul not allow a woman to do? +# What does Paul not permit a woman to do? Paul does not permit a woman to teach or to exercise authority over a man. diff --git a/1ti/02/13.md b/1ti/02/13.md index fb3e380ad..3832e4eb1 100644 --- a/1ti/02/13.md +++ b/1ti/02/13.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ -# What is the first reason that Paul gives for not allowing a woman to teach or exercise authority over a man? +# What is the first reason that Paul gives for not permitting a woman to teach or exercise authority over a man? Paul’s first reason is that Adam was formed first. diff --git a/1ti/02/14.md b/1ti/02/14.md index b4c6eb5ef..33c9804dc 100644 --- a/1ti/02/14.md +++ b/1ti/02/14.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ -# What is the second reason that Paul gives for not allowing a woman to teach or exercise authority over a man? +# What is the second reason that Paul gives for not permitting a woman to teach or exercise authority over a man? Paul’s second reason is that Adam was not deceived. diff --git a/1ti/02/15.md b/1ti/02/15.md index 26e775afb..23becbe59 100644 --- a/1ti/02/15.md +++ b/1ti/02/15.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ -# In what does Paul want women to continue? +# In what does Paul want women to remain? Paul wants women to continue in faith and love and sanctification with soundness of mind. diff --git a/1ti/03/03.md b/1ti/03/03.md index 70ebcda35..9b8c1a931 100644 --- a/1ti/03/03.md +++ b/1ti/03/03.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # How must an overseer handle alcohol and money? -An overseer must not be addicted to alcohol, and must not love money. +An overseer must not be a drunkard, and must not love money. diff --git a/1ti/03/04.md b/1ti/03/04.md index cfc3c08c3..785483cd7 100644 --- a/1ti/03/04.md +++ b/1ti/03/04.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # How should an overseer’s children treat him? -An overseer’s children must obey and respect him. +An overseer’s children must obey and honor him. diff --git a/1ti/03/06.md b/1ti/03/06.md index 7e661b470..bee27cebf 100644 --- a/1ti/03/06.md +++ b/1ti/03/06.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # What is the danger if the overseer is a new convert? -The danger is that he will become proud and fall into condemnation. +The danger is that he will be puffed up and fall into condemnation. diff --git a/1ti/03/10.md b/1ti/03/10.md index 166e29661..5553fad6e 100644 --- a/1ti/03/10.md +++ b/1ti/03/10.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # What should be done with deacons before they serve? -Before they serve, deacons should be approved. +Before they serve, deacons should be tested. diff --git a/1ti/03/11.md b/1ti/03/11.md index d7ce2edc7..a3d902b01 100644 --- a/1ti/03/11.md +++ b/1ti/03/11.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # What are some characteristics of godly women? -Godly women are dignified, not slanderers, moderate, and faithful in all things. +Godly women are dignified, not slanderers, sober, and trustworthy in everything. diff --git a/1ti/03/15.md b/1ti/03/15.md index cb93196a9..b5faced3d 100644 --- a/1ti/03/15.md +++ b/1ti/03/15.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ -# What is the house of God? +# What is the household of God? -The house of God is the church of the living God. +The household of God is the church of the living God. diff --git a/1ti/03/16.md b/1ti/03/16.md index 18e66ccac..778382db0 100644 --- a/1ti/03/16.md +++ b/1ti/03/16.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # After Jesus appeared in the flesh, was justified by the Spirit, and was seen by angels, what did he do? -Jesus was proclaimed among nations, believed on in the world, and taken up in glory. +Jesus was proclaimed among nations, believed in the world, and taken up in glory. diff --git a/1ti/04/01.md b/1ti/04/01.md index 0157132de..d284a1f9b 100644 --- a/1ti/04/01.md +++ b/1ti/04/01.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # According to the Spirit, what will some people do in the later times? -Some people will leave the faith and pay attention to deceitful spirits and the teaching of demons. +Some people will leave the faith and attend to deceiving spirits and the teachings of demons. diff --git a/1ti/04/05.md b/1ti/04/05.md index 9c70bcf3a..88cafa4ea 100644 --- a/1ti/04/05.md +++ b/1ti/04/05.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ -# How is anything we eat consecrated and acceptable for our use? +# How is anything we eat sanctified for our use? -Anything we eat is consecrated and acceptable through the word of God and prayer. +Anything we eat is sanctified by the word of God and prayer. diff --git a/1ti/04/08.md b/1ti/04/08.md index 9d9f1c718..d78038490 100644 --- a/1ti/04/08.md +++ b/1ti/04/08.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # Why is training in godliness more profitable than bodily training? -Training in godliness is more profitable because it holds promise for this life and the life to come. +Training in godliness is more profitable because it holds promise for this present life and the coming one. diff --git a/1ti/04/11.md b/1ti/04/11.md index 7862f7c04..ae54430b5 100644 --- a/1ti/04/11.md +++ b/1ti/04/11.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # What does Paul exhort Timothy to do with all of the good things that he has received in Paul’s teaching to him? -Paul exhorts Timothy to command and teach these things to others. +Paul exhorts Timothy to command and teach these things. diff --git a/1ti/04/14.md b/1ti/04/14.md index acef26dc8..85a78ef81 100644 --- a/1ti/04/14.md +++ b/1ti/04/14.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # How did Timothy receive the spiritual gift that he had? -The gift was given to Timothy by prophecy with the laying on of the hands of the elders. +The gift was given to Timothy through prophecy with the imposition of the hands of the elders. diff --git a/1ti/04/16.md b/1ti/04/16.md index 8289c4f99..938c62415 100644 --- a/1ti/04/16.md +++ b/1ti/04/16.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # If Timothy continues faithfully in his life and teaching, who will be saved? -Timothy will save himself and those who listen to him. +Timothy will save both himself and his listeners. diff --git a/1ti/05/10.md b/1ti/05/10.md index 82b2ec8cf..760b18990 100644 --- a/1ti/05/10.md +++ b/1ti/05/10.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # For what should a widow be known? -A widow should be known for good deeds. +A widow should be attested for good works. diff --git a/1ti/05/14.md b/1ti/05/14.md index b8385315e..e40f1af3e 100644 --- a/1ti/05/14.md +++ b/1ti/05/14.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # What does Paul want younger women to do? -Paul wants younger women to marry, to bear children, and to manage the house. +Paul wants younger women to marry, to bear children, and to manage a household. diff --git a/1ti/05/19.md b/1ti/05/19.md index c70794178..fcb8785ac 100644 --- a/1ti/05/19.md +++ b/1ti/05/19.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # What conditions must be met before someone accuses an elder? -There must be two or three witnesses someone accuses an elder. +There must be two or three witnesses when someone accuses an elder. diff --git a/1ti/05/24.md b/1ti/05/24.md index 6d6b283bf..fe4b092fb 100644 --- a/1ti/05/24.md +++ b/1ti/05/24.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # When do the sins of people become known? -The sins of some people are known right away, but the sins of others are not known until the judgment. +The sins of some people are evident, but the sins of others are not known until the judgment. diff --git a/1ti/06/01.md b/1ti/06/01.md index 04e9f5e3c..319667a16 100644 --- a/1ti/06/01.md +++ b/1ti/06/01.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # How did Paul say slaves should regard their masters? -Paul said that slaves should regard their masters as worthy of honor. +Paul said that slaves should regard their masters as worthy of all honor. diff --git a/1ti/06/04.md b/1ti/06/04.md index cc3360615..af243b7fc 100644 --- a/1ti/06/04.md +++ b/1ti/06/04.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # What kind of person rejects healthy words and godly teaching? -The person who rejects healthy words and godly teaching is proud and knows nothing. +The person who rejects healthy words and godly teaching is puffed up and understands nothing. diff --git a/1ti/06/08.md b/1ti/06/08.md index a83f9066b..2718469a8 100644 --- a/1ti/06/08.md +++ b/1ti/06/08.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # With what should we be content in this world? -We should be content that we have food and clothing. +We should be satisfied that we have food and clothing. diff --git a/1ti/06/09.md b/1ti/06/09.md index b80c32269..be77bdd7f 100644 --- a/1ti/06/09.md +++ b/1ti/06/09.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # Into what do those who desire to become wealthy fall? -Those who desire to become wealthy fall into a temptation and trap. +Those who desire to become wealthy fall into temptation and a trap. diff --git a/1ti/06/10.md b/1ti/06/10.md index 691967a4f..018682275 100644 --- a/1ti/06/10.md +++ b/1ti/06/10.md @@ -4,4 +4,4 @@ The love of money is a root of all kinds of evil. # What has happened to some who have loved money? -Some who have loved money have wandered away from the faith. +Some who have loved money have been led away from the faith. diff --git a/1ti/06/12.md b/1ti/06/12.md index b5f66231b..7ea72d90b 100644 --- a/1ti/06/12.md +++ b/1ti/06/12.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # What fight does Paul say Timothy must fight? -Paul says Timothy must fight the good fight of faith. +Paul says Timothy must fight the good fight of the faith. diff --git a/1ti/06/16.md b/1ti/06/16.md index 46ccab7f2..030cc95f5 100644 --- a/1ti/06/16.md +++ b/1ti/06/16.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # Where does God dwell? -God dwells in inapproachable light where no man can see him. +God dwells in unapproachable light. diff --git a/1ti/06/19.md b/1ti/06/19.md index 68dd9972a..4c27423a8 100644 --- a/1ti/06/19.md +++ b/1ti/06/19.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # Those who are rich in good works do what for themselves? -Those who are rich in good works store up for themselves a good foundation, and take hold of real life. +Those who are rich in good works store up for themselves a good foundation, and grasp genuine life. diff --git a/1ti/06/20.md b/1ti/06/20.md index d0e428f77..df6325941 100644 --- a/1ti/06/20.md +++ b/1ti/06/20.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # Finally, what does Paul tell Timothy to do with the things given to him? -Paul tells Timothy to protect what has been entrusted to him. +Paul tells Timothy to guard what has been entrusted to him. \ No newline at end of file