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 # So they went down into the water
 
-The connecting word **So** introduces a Reason and result relationship. The reason was the Ethiopian believed what Philip told him, and asked to be baptized and there was water nearby. The result is Philip baptized him. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/grammar-connect-logic-result]])
+The connecting word **So** introduces a reason and result relationship. The reason was the Ethiopian believed what Philip told him, and asked to be baptized when they saw water nearby. The result is Philip baptized him. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/grammar-connect-logic-result]])
 
 # carried Philip away