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Reviewed-on: https://git.door43.org/unfoldingWord/en_obs/pulls/486 Co-authored-by: Robert Hunt <robh@noreply.door43.org> Co-committed-by: Robert Hunt <robh@noreply.door43.org>
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### A Change Log of Recent Minor Changes to Open Bible Stories
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#### 7 -> 8
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#### 7 → 8
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* Traded frames [13-07](https://cdn.door43.org/obs/jpg/360px/obs-en-13-07.jpg) and [13-09](https://cdn.door43.org/obs/jpg/360px/obs-en-13-10.jpg) for chronological clarity
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* Copied image from [13-09](https://cdn.door43.org/obs/jpg/360px/obs-en-13-09.jpg) for use in 48-06
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See [v7 … v8](https://git.door43.org/unfoldingWord/en_obs/compare/v7...v8) for a complete changelog.
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#### 6 -> 7
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#### 6 → 7
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* Fixed several typos and small wording changes.
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* Image change in [frame 04-07](https://cdn.door43.org/obs/jpg/360px/obs-en-04-07.jpg) to distinguish Melchizedek from Aaron later in the stories.
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See [v6 … v7](https://git.door43.org/unfoldingWord/en_obs/compare/v6...v7) for a complete changelog.
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#### 5 -> 6
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#### 5 → 6
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* Fixed several typos and small wording changes.
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* Switched to curly quotes instead of straight quotes.
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* Clarified Peter's words in 43-11 after extensive discussion (see [this commit](https://git.door43.org/unfoldingWord/en_obs/commit/af945511ac89c8d7dbc3acb9ad3ae218085ee84b)).
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* Clarified wording in 21-13 (see [this commit](https://git.door43.org/unfoldingWord/en_obs/commit/fe145e0ed2253e6244b14a7cd40688219c202d1d)).
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#### 4 -> 5
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#### 4 → 5
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* Updated wording of English text to make it easier for speakers of other languages to understand and translate it into their languages. Shortened some sentences, improved logical flow, better introduced new characters, etc. But generally kept the same meaning.
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* Clarified the events of God’s covenant with Abraham in 04-09 (see [this commit](https://git.door43.org/unfoldingWord/en_obs/commit/c07db760b6544de00b08f893155fd86077bd24d8)).
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* Clarified Peter’s words in 43-11 (see [this commit](https://git.door43.org/unfoldingWord/en_obs/commit/2a43ca348e26ab9719513a3be4bfc41c2eee5fe6)).
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* Reversed images 42-02 and 42-03 in order to better fit the story text (see [this issue](https://git.door43.org/unfoldingWord/en_obs/issues/7)).
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#### 3.2.1 -> 4
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#### 3.2.1 → 4
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* New Versioning System, read more [here](https://unfoldingword.org/versioning/)
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* 07 - “God Blessed Jacob” -> “God Blesses Jacob”
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* 07 - “God Blessed Jacob” → “God Blesses Jacob”
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* 49-06 - NEW IMAGE
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#### 3.2 -> 3.2.1
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#### 3.2 → 3.2.1
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* 03-11 - Later Noah -> Later, Noah
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* 11-01 - males of both people -> males of Egypt’s people
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* 12-14 - unleavened bread -> bread that was made without yeast
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* 13-05 - holy. That is, -> holy. In other words,
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* 16-09 - cloth -> sheep skin (3x)
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* 17-07 - was the Messiah -> was the Messiah
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* 18-13 - evil, corrupt, and they worshiped -> evil and corrupt, and they worshiped
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* 19-04 - because of the famine -> because the lack of rain had caused a famine
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* 22-02 - how will -> how can
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* 03-11 - Later Noah → Later, Noah
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* 11-01 - males of both people → males of Egypt’s people
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* 12-14 - unleavened bread → bread that was made without yeast
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* 13-05 - holy. That is, → holy. In other words,
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* 16-09 - cloth → sheep skin (3x)
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* 17-07 - was the Messiah → was the Messiah
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* 18-13 - evil, corrupt, and they worshiped → evil and corrupt, and they worshiped
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* 19-04 - because of the famine → because the lack of rain had caused a famine
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* 22-02 - how will → how can
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* 23-08 - ~~Mary was very happy, too.~~
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* 26-10 - who were called -> whom he called
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* 36-01 - and John -> and John,
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* 38-09 - you will deny that you even know me three times -> you will deny three times that you even know me
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* 40-06 - It stayed dark from noon until 3:00 in the afternoon. -> It became dark at noon and stayed dark for three hours.
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* 43-02 - the harvest -> the wheat harvest.
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* 45 - Philip and the Ethiopian Official -> Stephen and Philip
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* 49-01 - virgin, she -> virgin, the Holy Spirit overshadowed her and she became pregnant. She
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* 26-10 - who were called → whom he called
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* 36-01 - and John → and John,
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* 38-09 - you will deny that you even know me three times → you will deny three times that you even know me
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* 40-06 - It stayed dark from noon until 3:00 in the afternoon. → It became dark at noon and stayed dark for three hours.
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* 43-02 - the harvest → the wheat harvest.
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* 45 - Philip and the Ethiopian Official → Stephen and Philip
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* 49-01 - virgin, she → virgin, the Holy Spirit overshadowed her and she became pregnant. She
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#### 3.1.1 -> 3.2
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#### 3.1.1 → 3.2
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* 13-15 - ~~Moses climbed the mountain again and prayed that God would forgive the people. God listened to Moses and forgave them. Moses wrote the Ten Commandments on new stone tablets to replace the ones he had broken. Then God led the Israelites away from Mount Sinai toward the Promised Land.~~ Moses made new stone tablets for the Ten Commandments to replace the ones that he had broken. Then he climbed the mountain again and prayed that God would forgive the people. God listened to Moses and forgave them. Moses came back down the mountain with the Ten Commandments on the new tablets. Then God led the Israelites away from Mount Sinai toward the Promised Land.
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* 13-15 - NEW IMAGE
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* 14-01 After God had told the Israelites the laws __**that**__ he wanted them to obey as part of his covenant with them, they left Mount Sinai. God began leading them **~~from~~** toward the Promised Land, which was also called Canaan. The pillar of cloud went ahead of them toward**~~s~~** Canaan and they followed it.
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#### 3.1 -> 3.1.1
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#### 3.1 → 3.1.1
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* 16-12 “Gideon’s 300 men soldiers” -> “Gideon’s 300 soldiers”
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* 21-02 “every people groups” -> “every people group”
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* 39-12 “so he ordered his soldiers to crucify Jesus.” -> “so he agreed to have his soldiers crucify Jesus.”
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* 16-12 “Gideon’s 300 men soldiers” → “Gideon’s 300 soldiers”
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* 21-02 “every people groups” → “every people group”
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* 39-12 “so he ordered his soldiers to crucify Jesus.” → “so he agreed to have his soldiers crucify Jesus.”
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