RobH_en_tn/gen/34/25.md

# On the third day

"third" is the ordinal number for three. It can be stated without the ordinal number. Alternate translation: "After two days" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-ordinal]])

# when they were still in pain

"when the men of the city were still in pain"

# each took his sword

"took their swords"

# they attacked the city

Here "city" stands for the people. Alternate translation: "they attacked the people of the city" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])

# security, and they killed all the males

This can be translated as a new sentence. "security. Simeon and Levi killed all the men of the city"
4th pass at tNotes reformatting - Genesis only 2017-12-04 17:26:39 +00:00			`# On the third day`

Replace all AT: with Alternate translation: 2018-02-10 00:34:10 +00:00			`"third" is the ordinal number for three. It can be stated without the ordinal number. Alternate translation: "After two days" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-ordinal]])`
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			`# when they were still in pain`

			`"when the men of the city were still in pain"`

			`# each took his sword`

			`"took their swords"`

			`# they attacked the city`

Replace all AT: with Alternate translation: 2018-02-10 00:34:10 +00:00			`Here "city" stands for the people. Alternate translation: "they attacked the people of the city" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])`
4th pass at tNotes reformatting - Genesis only 2017-12-04 17:26:39 +00:00
			`# security, and they killed all the males`

5th generation of tNotes formatting 2017-12-07 06:38:15 +00:00			`This can be translated as a new sentence. "security. Simeon and Levi killed all the men of the city"`
4th pass at tNotes reformatting - Genesis only 2017-12-04 17:26:39 +00:00