From e57f096cfdf89655c51d187a12e2b798ad7a2913 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Wed, 23 Aug 2017 15:43:20 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Dealing with tN Issue 256-274. --- mat/21/33.md | 2 +- mat/23/04.md | 2 +- mat/23/25.md | 4 ++-- mat/23/32.md | 2 +- mat/23/34.md | 2 +- mat/24/09.md | 2 +- mat/24/12.md | 16 ++++++++-------- mat/24/15.md | 8 ++------ mat/24/19.md | 2 +- mat/24/23.md | 2 +- mat/24/26.md | 6 +++--- mat/24/30.md | 2 +- mat/24/34.md | 12 ++++++++++-- mat/24/43.md | 2 +- mat/24/intro.md | 4 ++-- 15 files changed, 36 insertions(+), 32 deletions(-) diff --git a/mat/21/33.md b/mat/21/33.md index 720e9edf7..b86976ca2 100644 --- a/mat/21/33.md +++ b/mat/21/33.md @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ To rebuke the religious leaders and illustrate their unbelief, Jesus tells a par # rented it out to vine growers -The owner still owned the vineyard, but he allowed the vine growers to give him money so they could take care of it and have the grapes when they became ripe. +The owner still owned the vineyard, but he allowed the vine growers to take care of it. When the grapes became ripe, they were to give some of them to the owner and keep the rest. # vine growers diff --git a/mat/23/04.md b/mat/23/04.md index 8253729ab..80282d20f 100644 --- a/mat/23/04.md +++ b/mat/23/04.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # they bind heavy burdens that are difficult to carry, and then they put them on people's shoulders ... move a finger to carry them -Here "burdens" are the many rules that the religious leaders create. AT: "they make you obey many rules that are difficult to follow ... do anything help you follow them" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor) +Here "burdens" are the many rules that the religious leaders create. AT: "they make you obey many rules that are difficult to follow ... do anything to help you follow them" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor) # they themselves will not move a finger diff --git a/mat/23/25.md b/mat/23/25.md index 2bea8e46e..299e3c156 100644 --- a/mat/23/25.md +++ b/mat/23/25.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ -# Woe to you +# Woe to you ... hypocrites! -"How terrible it will be for you!" See how you translated this in [Matthew 11:21](../11/20.md). +"How terrible it will be for you ... hypocrites!" See how you translated this in [Matthew 11:21](../11/20.md). # For you clean the outside of the cup and of the plate, but inside they are full of greed and self-indulgence diff --git a/mat/23/32.md b/mat/23/32.md index b0f39b29e..59c15887e 100644 --- a/mat/23/32.md +++ b/mat/23/32.md @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Jesus uses this as a metaphor meaning the Pharisees will complete the wicked beh # You serpents, you offspring of vipers -Serpents and vipers are the same thing. They are dangerous and often symbols of evil. AT: "You are as evil as dangerous and poisonous snakes" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-doublet]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) +Serpents are snakes, and vipers are poisonous snakes. They are dangerous and often symbols of evil. AT: "You are as evil as dangerous and poisonous snakes" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-doublet]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]) # offspring of vipers diff --git a/mat/23/34.md b/mat/23/34.md index f70a69ce6..f260e683d 100644 --- a/mat/23/34.md +++ b/mat/23/34.md @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ Here the word "blood" represents a person being killed. AT: "from the murder ... # Abel ... Zechariah -Abel was the first victim of murder, and Zechariah was probably thought to be the last to be murdered, by Jews in the temple. These two men represent all the murdered righteous people. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche]]) +Abel was the first righteous victim of murder, and Zechariah, who was murdered by Jews in the temple, was probably thought to be the last. These two men represent all the righteous people who have been murdered. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-merism]]) # Zechariah diff --git a/mat/24/09.md b/mat/24/09.md index dcd3c0e37..3eb352630 100644 --- a/mat/24/09.md +++ b/mat/24/09.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # they will deliver you up to tribulation and kill you -"people will give you over to the authorities who will make you suffer and will kill you." +"people will give you over to the authorities, who will make you suffer and will kill you." # You will be hated by all the nations diff --git a/mat/24/12.md b/mat/24/12.md index b02ea3d54..608ea2774 100644 --- a/mat/24/12.md +++ b/mat/24/12.md @@ -6,17 +6,17 @@ The abstract noun "lawlessness" can be translated with the phrase "disobeying th Possible meanings are 1) "many people will no longer love other people" or 2) "many people will no longer love God." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-idiom]]) +# the one who endures to the end will be saved + +This can be stated in active form. AT: "God will save the person who endures to the end" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) + # the one who endures -"whoever stays faithful" +"the person who stays faithful" # to the end -It is not clear whether the "end" means when a person dies, or when the persecution ends, or the end of the age when God shows himself to be king. The main point is that they endure as long as necessary. - -# will be saved - -This can be stated in active form. AT: "God will deliver that person" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) +It is not clear whether the word "end" refers to when a person dies or when the persecution ends or the end of the age when God shows himself to be king. The main point is that they endure as long as necessary. # This gospel of the kingdom will be preached @@ -26,9 +26,9 @@ Here "kingdom" refers to God's rule as king. This can be stated in active form. Here, "nations" stands for people. AT: "all people in all places" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) -# Then the end +# the end -"The end of the world" or "The end of the age" +"the end of the world" or "the end of the age" # translationWords diff --git a/mat/24/15.md b/mat/24/15.md index d7cf6074d..1453f9f93 100644 --- a/mat/24/15.md +++ b/mat/24/15.md @@ -1,10 +1,6 @@ -# the abomination of desolation +# the abomination of desolation which was spoken of by Daniel the prophet -"the shameful one who defiles the things of God" - -# which was spoken of by Daniel the prophet - -This can be stated in active form. AT: "about which Daniel the prophet wrote" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) +This can be stated in active form. AT: "the shameful one who defiles the things of God, about whom Daniel the prophet wrote" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) # let the reader understand diff --git a/mat/24/19.md b/mat/24/19.md index 6f1e53c76..568cb79fc 100644 --- a/mat/24/19.md +++ b/mat/24/19.md @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ This is a polite way to say "pregnant women." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/f # that your flight will not occur -"that you do not have to flee" or "that you do not have to run away" +"that you will not have to flee" or "that you will not have to run away" # winter diff --git a/mat/24/23.md b/mat/24/23.md index 7dc65d9f0..8d7bbc3cc 100644 --- a/mat/24/23.md +++ b/mat/24/23.md @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ This is an idiom. AT: "so as to cause people to disobey God" (See: [[rc://en/ta/ # astray, if possible, even the elect -This can be translated as a separate sentence. AT: "astray. If possible, they will even cause the elect to disobey God" +This can be translated as a separate sentence. AT: "people astray. If possible, they will even cause the elect to disobey God" # translationWords diff --git a/mat/24/26.md b/mat/24/26.md index f314d4532..c987c4f03 100644 --- a/mat/24/26.md +++ b/mat/24/26.md @@ -1,10 +1,10 @@ # if they say to you, 'Look, he is in the wilderness,' -This can be stated as an indirect quotation. AT: "if someone tells you that the Christ is in the wilderness" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-quotations]]) +This can be stated as an indirect quotation. AT: "if someone tells you that the Christ is in the wilderness," (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-quotations]]) # Or, 'See, he is in the inner rooms,' -This can be stated as an indirect quotation. AT: "Or, if someone tells you that the Christ is in the inner room" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-quotations]]) +This can be stated as an indirect quotation. AT: "Or, if someone tells you that the Christ is in the inner room," (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-quotations]]) # in the inner rooms @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ This can be stated as an indirect quotation. AT: "Or, if someone tells you that # as the lightning shines ... so will be the coming -This means the Son of Man will come very fast and he will be easy to see. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]]) +This means that the Son of Man will come very quickly and will be easy to see. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]]) # the Son of Man diff --git a/mat/24/30.md b/mat/24/30.md index 4aff37f8a..7939526a4 100644 --- a/mat/24/30.md +++ b/mat/24/30.md @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Here "tribes" refers to people. AT: "all the people of the tribes" or "all the p # He will send his angels with a great sound of a trumpet -"When the trumpet sounds, he will send his angels" or "When an angel blows the trumpet, he will send his angels" +"He will have a trumpet sounded and send his angels" or "He will have an angel blow a trumpet, and he will send his angels" # they will gather diff --git a/mat/24/34.md b/mat/24/34.md index 37710bdba..0fc76788b 100644 --- a/mat/24/34.md +++ b/mat/24/34.md @@ -4,7 +4,11 @@ # this generation will not pass away -Here "pass away" is a polite way of referring to death. AT: "the people living today will not all die" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-euphemism]]) +Here "pass away" is a polite way of saying "die." AT: "this generation will not all die" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-euphemism]]) + +# this generation + +Possible interpretations are 1) "all people alive today," referring to the people alive when Jesus was speaking, or 2) "all people alive when these things I have just told you about happen." Try to translate so that both interpretations are possible. # until all of these things will have happened @@ -12,7 +16,11 @@ Here "pass away" is a polite way of referring to death. AT: "the people living t # Heaven and the earth will pass away -"Heaven and the earth will no longer exist" +The words "heaven" and "earth" are a synecdoche that includes everything that God has created, especially those things that seem permanent. Jesus is saying that his word, unlike these things, is permanent. AT: "Even heaven and the earth will pass away" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche]]) + +# pass away + +"disappear" or "someday no longer exist" # my words will never pass away diff --git a/mat/24/43.md b/mat/24/43.md index 49d112aa0..da4214a69 100644 --- a/mat/24/43.md +++ b/mat/24/43.md @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ Jesus is saying he will come when people are not expecting him, not that he will # would not have allowed his house to be broken into -This can be stated in active form. AT: "he would not have allowed anyone to get into his house to steal things" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) +This can be stated in active form. AT: "would not have allowed anyone to get into his house to steal things" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) # the Son of Man diff --git a/mat/24/intro.md b/mat/24/intro.md index 0745efdf2..65b8b21cf 100644 --- a/mat/24/intro.md +++ b/mat/24/intro.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ #### Structure and Formatting #### -In this chapter, Jesus begins to prophesy about the future leading up to his return as king of the universe. (See: [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/prophet]]) +In this chapter, Jesus begins to prophesy about the future from that time until he returns as king of the universe. (See: [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/prophet]]) #### Special concepts in this chapter #### @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ In this chapter, Jesus gives an answer to his disciples when they ask how they w ##### The example of Noah ##### -In the time of Noah, there was a great flood which God sent as punishment for the sins of man. There were many warnings about this coming flood, but it actually began suddenly. In this chapter, Jesus draws a comparison between that flood and the last days. (See: [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/sin]]) +In the time of Noah, God sent a great flood to punish people for their sins. He warned them many times about this coming flood, but it actually began suddenly. In this chapter, Jesus draws a comparison between that flood and the last days. (See: [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/sin]]) #### Other possible translation difficulties in this chapter ####