From 6c0afed92363f3fb31a292b880c4125f119aa697 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Larry Sallee Date: Mon, 28 Dec 2020 22:09:27 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Insert Jane's proofreading suggestions for Ephesians and 2 Timothy (#62) Insert Jane's proofreading suggestions for Ephesians and 2 Timothy Co-authored-by: Larry Sallee Reviewed-on: https://git.door43.org/unfoldingWord/en_tq/pulls/62 --- 2ti/01/05.md | 2 +- 2ti/01/08.md | 4 ++-- 2ti/01/12.md | 2 +- 2ti/01/16.md | 2 +- 2ti/02/24.md | 4 ++-- 2ti/03/13.md | 2 +- 2ti/04/03.md | 2 +- 2ti/04/14.md | 2 +- 2ti/04/16.md | 2 +- eph/01/07.md | 2 +- eph/02/10.md | 2 +- eph/02/14.md | 2 +- eph/03/16.md | 4 ++-- eph/03/18.md | 4 ++-- eph/04/29.md | 2 +- eph/05/11.md | 2 +- eph/05/26.md | 2 +- eph/05/31.md | 2 +- eph/06/08.md | 2 +- eph/06/12.md | 2 +- eph/06/18.md | 4 ++-- 21 files changed, 26 insertions(+), 26 deletions(-) diff --git a/2ti/01/05.md b/2ti/01/05.md index 5c08f7217..beb2cfb42 100644 --- a/2ti/01/05.md +++ b/2ti/01/05.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ -# Who else had genuine faith in Timothy’s family before Timothy did? +# In Timothy's family, who else had genuine faith before Timothy did? Timothy’s grandmother and mother both had genuine faith. diff --git a/2ti/01/08.md b/2ti/01/08.md index 34ee9af0d..932b004b5 100644 --- a/2ti/01/08.md +++ b/2ti/01/08.md @@ -2,6 +2,6 @@ Paul tells Timothy not to be ashamed of the testimony about the Lord. -# What does Paul tell Timothy to do instead? +# What does Paul tell Timothy to do? -Paul tells Timothy to instead suffer together with Paul for the gospel. +Paul tells Timothy to suffer for the gospel together with Paul. diff --git a/2ti/01/12.md b/2ti/01/12.md index 138ccc1a9..90f503eb8 100644 --- a/2ti/01/12.md +++ b/2ti/01/12.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ -# Paul is not ashamed of the gospel, because he is confident that God is able to do what for him? +# What is Paul confident that God is able to do for him which makes Paul not ashamed of the gospel? Paul is persuaded that God is able to keep the deposit that Paul has entrusted to God until that day. diff --git a/2ti/01/16.md b/2ti/01/16.md index 3145e3a14..0a8470664 100644 --- a/2ti/01/16.md +++ b/2ti/01/16.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # Why does Paul ask the Lord to grant mercy to the household of Onesiphorus? -Paul asks the Lord to grant mercy to the household of Onesiphorus because Onesiphorus refreshed Paul and was not ashamed of Paul’s chains. +Paul asks the Lord to grant mercy to the household of Onesiphorus because Onesiphorus refreshed Paul and was not ashamed of Paul’s chain. diff --git a/2ti/02/24.md b/2ti/02/24.md index 436cdbecd..65b67ad36 100644 --- a/2ti/02/24.md +++ b/2ti/02/24.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ -# What kind of character must a servant of the Lord have? +# What does Paul say that a servant of the Lord must be? -A servant of the Lord must be kind to all, able to teach, and patient. +A servant of the Lord must be patient, kind to all, and able to teach. diff --git a/2ti/03/13.md b/2ti/03/13.md index 6bfae897b..50866303f 100644 --- a/2ti/03/13.md +++ b/2ti/03/13.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ -# What will become worse in the last days? +# Who will become worse in the last days? Evil people and imposters will become worse in the last days. diff --git a/2ti/04/03.md b/2ti/04/03.md index e980e642d..6c62f8f3d 100644 --- a/2ti/04/03.md +++ b/2ti/04/03.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ -# Paul warned that the time will come when people will do what? +# Paul warned that the time will come when people will do what regarding doctrine? People will not endure sound teaching, but will listen to teachings that agree with their own desires. diff --git a/2ti/04/14.md b/2ti/04/14.md index 59df214f9..cc0f4085f 100644 --- a/2ti/04/14.md +++ b/2ti/04/14.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ -# Paul said that the Lord would repay Alexander according to what? +# According to what did Paul said that the Lord would repay Alexander? Paul said that the Lord will repay Alexander according to his deeds. diff --git a/2ti/04/16.md b/2ti/04/16.md index 517b1a244..bf222f66f 100644 --- a/2ti/04/16.md +++ b/2ti/04/16.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # Which people appeared with Paul at his first defense? -At Paul’s first defense, the no one appeared with Paul. +At Paul’s first defense, no one appeared with Paul. diff --git a/eph/01/07.md b/eph/01/07.md index 09f11f0ae..7936cdf4f 100644 --- a/eph/01/07.md +++ b/eph/01/07.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # What do believers receive through the blood of Christ, God’s beloved one? -Believers receive redemption through the blood Christ, the forgiveness of their trespasses. +Believers receive redemption, the forgiveness of their trespasses through the blood Christ. diff --git a/eph/02/10.md b/eph/02/10.md index eae71501f..a16b8816f 100644 --- a/eph/02/10.md +++ b/eph/02/10.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # For what purpose has God created believers in Christ Jesus? -God’s purpose is for believers in Christ Jesus that they should walk in good works. +God’s purpose for believers in Christ Jesus is that they should walk in good works. diff --git a/eph/02/14.md b/eph/02/14.md index edc7114a6..c791064f3 100644 --- a/eph/02/14.md +++ b/eph/02/14.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # How did Christ change the relationship between Gentiles and Jews? -Christ made Gentiles and Jews who believe into one group, destroying the hostility that divided them. +Christ made believing Gentiles and Jews into one group, destroying the hostility that divided them. diff --git a/eph/03/16.md b/eph/03/16.md index d014d7967..43d3ed00a 100644 --- a/eph/03/16.md +++ b/eph/03/16.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ -# How does Paul pray the believers be strengthened? +# How does Paul pray for the believers to be strengthened? -Paul prays the believers be strengthened with power through God’s Spirit. +Paul prays for the believers to be strengthened with power through God’s Spirit. diff --git a/eph/03/18.md b/eph/03/18.md index 80bd610a5..43cb0fd95 100644 --- a/eph/03/18.md +++ b/eph/03/18.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ -# What does Paul pray the believers will be able to understand? +# What does Paul pray that the believers will be able to understand? -Paul prays the believers will be able to understand how wide and long and high and deep is the love of Christ. +Paul prays that the believers will be able to understand how wide and long and high and deep is the love of Christ. diff --git a/eph/04/29.md b/eph/04/29.md index b701561d8..34c509064 100644 --- a/eph/04/29.md +++ b/eph/04/29.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # What kind of talk does Paul say must come out of the believer’s mouth? -No corrupt talk must come out of the believer’s mouth, but instead words that build up others. +No corrupt talk must come out of the believer’s mouth, but, instead, words that build up others. diff --git a/eph/05/11.md b/eph/05/11.md index ca9a924ae..89d5de130 100644 --- a/eph/05/11.md +++ b/eph/05/11.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # What are believers to do with the works of the darkness? -Believers are not to participate with, but instead expose the works of darkness. +Believers are not to participate with, but instead expose, the works of darkness. diff --git a/eph/05/26.md b/eph/05/26.md index e0d8a8a3e..3a6dcff99 100644 --- a/eph/05/26.md +++ b/eph/05/26.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # How does Christ sanctify the Church? -Christ sanctifies the Church holy by the washing it with water by the word. +Christ sanctifies the Church holy by the washing her of water with the word. diff --git a/eph/05/31.md b/eph/05/31.md index a95fff7aa..f3d2a4812 100644 --- a/eph/05/31.md +++ b/eph/05/31.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # What happens when a man is joined to his wife? -When a man is joined to his wife they become one flesh. +When a man is joined to his wife, they become one flesh. diff --git a/eph/06/08.md b/eph/06/08.md index e774560f3..fd71f3a86 100644 --- a/eph/06/08.md +++ b/eph/06/08.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # What should a believer remember about whatever good deed he does? -A believer should remember that whatever good deed he does, he will receive a reward from the Lord. +A believer should remember that for whatever good deed he does, he will receive a reward from the Lord. diff --git a/eph/06/12.md b/eph/06/12.md index 78e498ff7..5e4b037e8 100644 --- a/eph/06/12.md +++ b/eph/06/12.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ # Against whom does a believer battle? -A believer battles against governments and spiritual authorities and rulers of the realm of evil darkness. +A believer battles against governments and rulers of the realm of darkness and against spiritual forces of evil. diff --git a/eph/06/18.md b/eph/06/18.md index 1926d2fee..e1c33ac5e 100644 --- a/eph/06/18.md +++ b/eph/06/18.md @@ -1,3 +1,3 @@ -# What attitude must believers have in prayer? +# How should believers conduct themselves in prayer? -Believers must pray at all times, persevering and watching for God’s answer. +Believers should pray at all times, persevering and watching for God’s answer.