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07-JDG.usfm

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 \v 13 Gideon, son of Joash, returned from the battle going through the pass of Heres.
-\v 14 He ran into a young man of the people of Succoth and sought advice from him. The young man described for him the leaders of Succoth and its elders, seventy-seven men.
+\v 14 He caught a young man of Succoth and questioned him. The young man wrote down the names of seventy-seven officials and elders of Succoth.
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 \v 15 Gideon came to the men of Succoth and said, "Look at Zebah and Zalmunna, about whom you mocked me and said, 'Have you already conquered Zebah and Zalmunna? We do not know that we should give bread to your army.'"

11-1KI.usfm

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 \v 24 Then Zedekiah son of Kenaanah, came up, slapped Micaiah on the cheek, and said, "Which way did the Spirit of Yahweh take to go from me to speak to you?"
-\v 25 Micaiah said, "Look, you will know that on that day, when you run into some inner room to hide."
+\v 25 Micaiah said, "Look, you will see on that day when you will go to hide in an inner room."
 
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 \v 26 The king of Israel said to his servant, "Seize Micaiah and take him to Amon, the governor of the city, and to Joash, my son.

14-2CH.usfm

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-\v 12 The messenger who went to call Micaiah spoke to him, saying, "Now look, the words of the prophets declare good things to the king with one mouth. Please let your word be like the word of one of them and say good things."
+v 12 The messenger who went to summon Micaiah said to him, "Look, the words of the prophets with one mouth are favorable to the king. Your words must agree with theirs, and you must speak favorably."
 \v 13 Micaiah replied, "As Yahweh lives, it is what God says that I will say."
 \v 14 When he came to the king, the king said to him, "Micaiah, should we go to Ramoth Gilead for battle, or not?" Micaiah answered him, "Attack and be victorious! For it will be a great victory."
 

20-PRO.usfm

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 \v 14 I have good advice and sound wisdom;
 \q I am insight; strength belongs to me.
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-\v 15 By me kings reign—
-\q also noblemen, and all who govern justly.
+\v 15 By me kings reign, and rulers make laws that are just.
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 \v 16 By me princes rule,
 \q nobles, and all who govern with justice.

23-ISA.usfm

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-\v 16 Yahweh says the daughters of Zion are proud, 
-\q and they walk with their necks extended and flirt with their eyes.
-\q1 They walk with tiny steps as they go, making tinkling sounds from bracelets on their ankles.
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-\v 17 Therefore the Lord will form scabs on the heads of the daughters of Zion, and Yahweh will make them bald.
+\v 16 Yahweh says that because the daughters of Zion are proud, 
+\q they walk with their necks extended, 
+\q with flirting eyes, walking with tiny steps as they go, 
+\q making tinkling sounds from bracelets on their ankles.
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+\v 17 Therefore the Lord will form scabs on the heads of the daughters of Zion, 
+\q and Yahweh will make them bald.
 
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